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message 151: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments She greeted her uncle before he left. She heard the knock on the door. She answered the door. "Can I help you?" She didn't see Blake just yet. She needed to get things done but saw Blake confused.


message 152: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "Blake let me go." She said to him another gun grabbed her arm. One standing in front of them making sure no one can see. "Blake what's going on let go." She was so confused she hasn't took her medication for anxiety she hoped she can get out of this before an attack starts.


message 153: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "Get off of me let me go!" She begged him trying to get away from the two holding her close in their arms. Keeping her from running one covered her mouth. Once she saw the other gang especially Sander she tried to run fighting. She saw Marcus feeling betrayed.


message 154: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Se tied to get away from them struggling to her the ropes off of her. Her mouth still covered just to make sure they don't get spotted. Sander threw the money to him. "Thank you I thought you would try to betray us." He said to him. He's going to really take her with everyone. He went over to her glaring at her. "You're going to regret putting your father in jail." He said to her.


message 155: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "Why would you care you. Leave so we can get to our business." Sander said to David. He told his girlfriend what to do. "Levá-la a entrar no carro agora."

Janelle tried to fight against them but they wouldn't let her go forcing her into a black car.


message 156: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments ((It's portuguese))

Sander got in the car sitting in the back with her. As soon as the door was closed and locked he started to beat her up. He was going to make her pay. He would torture her all he wanted. One thing was when David left with his gang he changed cars with the girl. They won't be found so easily. He started to hit her and use a cane he had on her just like her father did to her but worse. She was already crying and begging for him to stop. But it wasn't working her heart was broken because of Marcus betraying her.


message 157: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments ((No I'm just trying to learn Portuguese. Not really working out I got a speech problem so it's harder then it looks.))

(Wait is Blake with Sander or with Marcus?)

She cried out more coughing out blood. Her face bruised up and swollen so easily. She her ribs were broken what Sander was doing he broke her arm kicking her more knocking her out. He shot her twice. She laid in the car bleeding out as the driver kept going. "That was only the start." He said to her limp body sitting down his girl sitting on his lap.


message 158: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments ((When I spoke when I was younger I had an asian accent no one understood what I was saying. I had a speech therapist through out elementary school and some part of junior high. After fixing my accent I started stuttering more and more. I'm not sure what kind of problem it is for a doctor. But it effects me a lot.))

((okay makes sense.))

"Sander theirs been a car following us." His girlfriend told him getting out her gun. He spoke to the driver making sure Blake won't understand. "Bro para a floresta, vamos nos livrar dela lá agora."

Janelle whimpered starting to wake up her head was hurt bad her body felt as if it was smashed by the hulk.


message 159: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments ((True:) It just instructs the driver to take them to the forest.))

The drove right into the forest dragging the girl out throwing her into the rocks.Causing her to scream. Sander kicked her in the throat getting a gun gripping her hair once grabbed about to shoot her. She was already dying her bones most likely broken. Blood loss, and fear covering her no hope.


message 160: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Janelle couched badly dying. Sander gripped his gun turning. "Really I thought I told you not to follow!" He yelled at David.


message 161: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments ((okay night!))

Sander fell down knocked out the rock was big and hit his neck to knock him out. Janelle was coughing so bad some blood coming out of her mouth. Her body beat up she was going to die if there wasn't any ambulance soon. One thing Sander knew and they didn't. Her Aunt and Uncle were dead. Sander killed them before he got the girl. She was an orphan now since her father was in prison and won't be out for a long time he was in solitary confinement.


message 162: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Janelle was bleeding so bad her eyes kept closer she wanted to sleep. But slept lead to death and she wasn't ready for that at all. She covered the shot wounds she had even if it hurt so bad.

Sander fought David his gang following him fighting them. He was more angered then anything else.


message 163: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments She leaned into the tree unconscious scared to death. Sanders girlfriend came forward with another rock. "Anyone else want to play?" She we as going to finish the job.

Sander continued to fight angrily. Getting his gun out pointing it at David ready to shoot until he heard the sirens. He moved the gun over and didn't realize he shot David in the arm not where he wanted.


message 164: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Sander dropped his gun glaring at David so annoyed and angry. He was taken into custody with his gang. Glaring at Janelles unconscious body.


message 165: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Her lawyer met them there disappointed her only family left was murdered by Sander.


message 166: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Janelle was sleeping after surgeries. Her lawyer watching her.


message 167: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Janelle was starting to wake up her lawyer was gone getting some water for her.


message 168: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "Hey." Janelle said softly groggily. Blinking her eyes a few times waking up fully.


message 169: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments She nodded. "Is he in jail?" She asked him looking up at him.


message 170: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "Marcus thank you for your help I mean protecting me." She said softly to him she was still hurt but not as much. The only problem she doesn't know about her aunt and uncle being dead.


message 171: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "But you got me out of it. I would have been dead if you hadn't." She said to him meaning it.


message 172: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "You all did." She smiled at him resting. "I'm just glad you guys were able to come and help me ."


message 173: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "Thank you. Marcus you guys be careful too." She said softly to him.


message 174: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Janelle looked up at her lawyer. "Where's my aunt and uncle?" She asked her curiously she still didn't know they were dead.


message 175: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Janelle looked at her tears filling her eyes. "What's going to happen to me? Especially when my dad is released?" She asked her crying softly.


message 176: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments She nodded holding in tears. "What is going to happy to the people that saved me?" She asked her hoping Marcus and his friends and family won't get into trouble.


message 177: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Janelle nodded hoping she was going to be okay. "What has the doctor said?" She can't remember anything at all.


message 178: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments She nodded. She couldn't believe everything that has happened. She hates her life so far. She would have To go to two funerals this time. She hates it.


message 179: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "I just need some alone time." She said to her laying down carefully. She was so scared laying and resting.


message 180: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments She rested falling asleep she was so sad. She was upset about everything.


message 181: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "Yes." The nurse moved so he can see Janelle awake.


message 182: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Janelle was staring at the tv screen with the news on a low volume. "Morning." She said to him hearing him come in. She turned the tv off looking at him.


message 183: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments (Just like five or more. But they randomly answer so I don't do many.)

Janelle smiled. "Thank you." She would laugh but it hurt her throat if she did. "How have you been?"


message 184: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments ((I get requests.))

"I'm okay." She admitted she was sitting up which wasn't so painful.


message 185: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments ((Yeah well most of them are from my old friends. That aren't here anymore on goodreads.))

"How are you" She asked him curiously.


message 186: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "Thank you." She said softly to him taking it. She would eat it a bit later with her lunch. "I'm probably going to be here for a whole. I'm going to miss a lot of school." She was told that earlier.


message 187: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "Thank you." She was so happy for that


message 188: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "It's alright I'm also sorry too. I'm just more worried of having to move away if I'm adopted." She said to him thinking about it.


message 189: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments She nodded no. "There's no one that has been wanting to adopt me." She admitted.


message 190: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "I would be grateful if he does. My lawyer told me that I might be adopted by couples from a different place." She would to be happy about that.


message 191: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments She looked up at him. "Hello, yes I'm feeling better. How have you been?" She knew he got injured in the fight so she wanted to make sure he was fine.


message 192: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "Yes he has. He's been really kind." She said to him really happy she had a good friend. "Thank you for all the help you gave me." She said softly to David and Marcus.


message 193: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "It's okay. Thank you for visiting." She said to them politely.


message 194: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "Bye." She relaxed in the bed crying softly just because of the pain she wiped them away though. When the nurse came in to check on her. She was helped to sit up and relax a bit against the the bed so she can't feel as much pain as before. She would be released in about two weeks to help her out.


message 195: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments "Thank you." She took them sitting down relaxing. She held her clothes and her phone. She saw all the calls and missed texts sighing.


message 196: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Janelle saw it and was glad it said a name. Hi Marcus. Thank you for your number I forgot to ask you for it.


message 197: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Sounds good. How are things with everyone? She sent the text sitting down texting but watching the news still.


message 198: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments Really? She got so confused when she got that text turning the tv off and reading instead on her kindle so it was easier for her to not move the pages of a book.


message 199: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments what kind of rumors?


message 200: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 4635 comments tell everyone if they want the truth they ask me.


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