Once Upon A Times Writing

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"Do you take this power? Do you swear to protect the book?" I shook my head yes. "Here is the power." My suppose called aunt touched my forehead. All I saw was blue nothing else. Everything that was happening was just a fairy tale the a couple of hours of go. This can't be true so why was I believing everything that this crazy person was saying. I blacked out.
I was awaken by a loud crash. What was that noise. I sat up where was I? It look I was at the football field. Why was I here? Then I remember everything that happened. I have powers. I need to get ready for marching band camp. I saw that there was a beautiful big house. There must be some food and things for me to freshen up.
I walk up to find a note on the door. Is said in bold lettersYou must find people to give the powers of the gods to. You must also find a person to be your true love.What? This a weird note. I didn't dismiss it right away. I started to think about.
I walked up the big stair case to find a door on the right that had closet on it. I walked to the door and turned the knob. There was designer clothes covering both sides of the walls. Shelves full of shoes. These aren't mine. I will take a shirt and some shorts and then take them back. I grabbed a pink shirt and some shorts. I didn't bother checking the size or looking in the mirror.
I put the clothes on and rushed out the door. I found my flute and music on the porch. How did these get here? It was still early in the morning. People were still coming. Not paying attention to where I was going I almost fell in to this huge pool. I decide to hurry up and go.
When I walked in to the band room. I sat down and put my things at my seat. I waited. Everybody was staring at me like I'm crazy or don't belong. Soon after that James and his brother Lee walked in. James looked at me."Excuse me are you lost."
This isn't very funny joke. Whatever he is doing is rude."Um no I sit here." He started laughing.
"Are you sure you sit here? Because I would know a pretty little head like you."
"James yes I'm sure. Did you get enough sleep last night?" Then I saw shock set in his eyes.
"Vanessa is that you."
"Who do you think I am?"My voice was getting very sarcastic. I was angry. Then his water bottle explode all over him. How did that happen? He jumped back as soon as the water spilled on him.
"Nothing, it is just you look so different." How did I look different? I got up to go see what everybody was talking about. When I turned to go to the restroom. I saw myself. I had blonde hair, blue eyes. My body is kissed by the sun. I wasn't chubby anymore. I look like a super model. This can't be happening. This is just a dream. Right?

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((I have an updated version of the first three chapters))

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Thanks I have an updated version that makes more sense.