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RP here only with approved characters.


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Alex looks in the mirror and straightens out her red top before leaving her house and walking to the bus stop.


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((Ooo. I should finish Kale soon so I can join you.))


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((Yesss I'm getting excited for this))


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((Great! I have to check a teacher in a mother group, then find a PC to get pics for someone and at the same time finish my character and then RP with you!))


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((Kk but I'm only up til I finish studying))


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((Okay. I may be a while though, so I'm really sorry of I cant RP with you today.))


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((K if I'm still awske ill rp with you))


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((Okay. Sounds good!))


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((Cool beans))


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Cara walked up and sat down on the cold metal bench and flattened down her blue dress.


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Alex reaches the bus stop and sees a girl sitting there in a blue dress. The lucky girl! She must be erudite. Alex walks over and sits down on the bench.


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"Hello." She said in a firm tone. She was so nervous. "So, aptitude tests. Scary right?"


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"Eh not really. I already know which faction I want." Alex says. She feels uncomfortable sitting there in her red and orange outfit.this lucky girl gets to wear a gorgeous blue dress.

((Aptitude tests aren't starting yet))


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"Yea? What?" She looked at the girl. "At least you guys get to breath. This dress is SO uncomfortable."


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"I want to be erudite." She looks at the dress again. "I'd trade being uncomfortable for this stupid orange thing." Alex says tugging on her pants in disgust. Really who even designed these.


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"Ha. I feel like I want to get Dauntless. Erudite never accepted me. Most of my best friends are in Dauntless too."


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"Dauntless. Hm I think I would like dauntless. I never really was the peaceful type. Ironic since I was born amity. But I really love learning new things so erudite it is." Alex says looking at the girl.

((Remember to post atleast five sentences))


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((Oh, right!))

"Well, that seems good for you! Watch out for Jeanine though, she will criticize your every move." She looked at the girl and then she noticed that she did look like an Erudite. She had big, bright, eyes that looked ready to learn. "Well, I hope you get in."


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"Thanks! And good luck with the dauntless. I met the male trainer once, he's pretty intense. Oh and I don't believe I got your name. Mines Alexis but everyone calls me Alex." She turns and looks at the girl, trying to figure out if she do well in dauntless.


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"Oh, My name is Carisse but everyone calls me Cara." She peered at the girl with a smirk. "Why are you looking at me that way Alex?" The girl was clearly looking at her with a strange look. She just couldn't pinpoint it.


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"I'm trying to decide which faction you look like you would belong in. I don't know. You seem fit enough for dauntless. But you also seem nice enough for amity." Wow people are really hard to figure out.


ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ Ally wrote: ""Dauntless. Hm I think I would like dauntless. I never really was the peaceful type. Ironic since I was born amity. But I really love learning new things so erudite it is." Alex says looking ..."

((Three, not five))


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((ugg again sorry peoples got to groups mixed up))


ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ ((:) Thst's okay))


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((Cara is no longer at the Bus Stop))


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((Alex has left the bus stop))


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Marielle walked up to the bus stop. She ditched yesterday, and she clutched the note in her hand in case anybody asked questions. In scribbly writing she wrote: Please excuse Marielle Zorua for yesterday. She caught a serious cold and I had forced her to stay home. -Mrs. Miranda Zorua Marielle smirked at it. She did one of these on her teachers once a year. She realized she forgot her jacket. She stuffed the note back into her orange-yellow slacks and rushed inside just as she heard the bus let out a puff of air. She shuffled inside the house, grabbing her blood red jacket and pulling it on as she ran out the door. The bus was just leaving as she literally took a step while the bus doors began closing and the wheels began moving. She smiled at herself and she sat down on the bus on a window seat, looking out the window.


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Marielle looked at the girl with a blank expression. "Marielle." she said blandly. She always hated her name. It was too 'hug me I'm adorable'. She turned her head away back to the window, waiting for school to begin.


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"Hello Marielle." Cara walked up behind her. "I freaked you out, didn't I? You know, knowing your name like a creeper?" She sat. "Sorry. I'm Caranisse. I heard you talking so I came up."


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Marielle slowly turned around, focusing her emerald green eyes on a girl who just walked onto the bus. "Hey..." she said blandly and she turned her head back to the window, watching everything in a blur.


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Harrypotterginger~todiewouldbeanawefullybigadventure~ wrote: "Hmm, she doesn't seem too friendly "That's a cool name," Allison said. Allison turned back in her seat and shifted her body a bit. Allison sat and tried to relax for the rest of the ride."

"Uh huh. Sure." Marielle said and she tugged on her red jacket into a comfortable position, not even looking at Allison as Marielle replied.


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"Okay......." She looked at the other girl. "So, who are you?" She patted down her sleeves and looked up. The stupid-Erudite-clothes-were-so-ANNOYING!


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Marielle was glad that the girls moved on with her. She slumped in her bus seat and watched everything in a blur pass through as the bus drove to the school.


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((Yep))

"Hmm, yes." She smiled. "So tight and itchy. I usually wear my dress because it is the most comfortable. I hate dresses though."

((GTG))


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Marielle couldn't help but turn. "You think your clothes are annoying." she said, gesturing to her baggy orange-red slacks and her yellow shirt that had too long of sleeves and too short with the hem.


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"Well at least yours give you space to breath and move." She turned to the girl and smiled. "One of these days I'm going to pass out from 'lack of air'." She slumped down and still waited for her bus to arrive.


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