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Grr! I don't know what I did to make it all bold. *Shrug* Sorry... :(
I see what happened. In the thing labeled 'Faction before choosing Ceremony' you need to delete the periods.
Yay! Thank you Bridgette! Now I am going to help you make your character better!
1. That is a nice picture you used.
2. It seems a little odd to have a harsh parent in Amity. Maybe change his personality around so that he is actually a really kind person, but just not as nice around his daughter. You see what I mean?
3. Amnity is Amity. I don't know if it's spelled differently because we are in different parts of thee world or... But if that's how your country spells it, I'll respect that and you can keep it how it is.
4. The final other cannot be left blank.
Other than this, she looks great.
1. That is a nice picture you used.
2. It seems a little odd to have a harsh parent in Amity. Maybe change his personality around so that he is actually a really kind person, but just not as nice around his daughter. You see what I mean?
3. Amnity is Amity. I don't know if it's spelled differently because we are in different parts of thee world or... But if that's how your country spells it, I'll respect that and you can keep it how it is.
4. The final other cannot be left blank.
Other than this, she looks great.
And what do you mean by Autumn 1? I have never heard of that date... It must be the separate countries acting up...
Ok. I fixed the bold thing...I will have to fix the other things later.... if I don't do it soon (in a few days or so) could you remind me?
Thank you! ((Got some school thing coming up and don't want to be unprepared... will probably make it on to GR every once and a while.))
Fixed it!1) Thank you!
2) I see. Ok.
3) Not sure... I probably just spelled it wrong...
4) Does that look ok?
Do you wanna go RP in the School?
Sure! ((*Whispers* who are we waiting for in the abandoned building in Kerrebeth?)) I will probably not make it to rping in the school tonight though. Gtg to bed soon. I've got like five minutes or so.
She is? Okay. I'll make Bea leave the group of peeps she's with right now. :D
:O Sorry! I could come to you if you want???
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Birthday: Autumn 1st
Faction Before the Choosing Ceremony: Amity
Appearance:
Written Description: Fill in everything below. Do not leave anything blank.
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Tone: Slightly sun tanned
Body Shape: Thin but muscled
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 117 lbs
Pitch of voice: Clear, average pitch
Other: Autumn looks foreword to choosing a new faction.
Personality: Autumn is short tempered. She is a terrible liar, but makes up for that with her sharp remarks. She is quick with comebacks and is very open with her emotions, which may vary. Autumn can be snooty but when with her friends she opens up her soft side. Her friends will see her kindness and protectiveness. If she believes something she will stick with it. Secrets are her strong point, if told one it stays a secret.
History: Autumn's mother died in an accident with an exploding engine, leaving her to care for herself, because her father ignored her. She felt betrayed, she had asked them to stay home that day but they didn't listen. She hardened herself as much as she could, but felt trust towards her closest friends. As she worked the fields she watched the other factions. She always envied them. Autumn hates her current faction and wants to leave to do something else... she isn't sure yet. She admires the Dauntless, and the Euridite. Her choice will be aided greatly by the aptitude test.
Family:
Mother: Deceased
Name: June Forest
Age: 30
Faction: Amity
Personality: June was kind, understanding, and thoughtful.
Father:
Name: Tom Forest
Age: 34
Faction: Amity
Personality: Harsh, disbelieving, and near-abusive but only around Autumn. When around others he is kind and forgiving.
Older Sister:none
Older Brother:none
Younger Sister:none
Younger Brother:none
What Faction you Character would like to go to: Dauntless, Euridite.
What Faction(s) Your Character got on the Aptitude Test: To be filled in after the Aptitude Test.
What Faction your Character Chose: To be filled in after the Choosing Ceremony.
Divergent: Yes
Other: Autumn is different from her friends. She doesn't understand or see what they tell her but she is different. She doesn't believe that Divergence is real.