Dead End in Norvelt
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Dialogue
Matthew
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Nov 16, 2015 10:29AM
How does dialogue in the story affect it? Please write an appropriate response. Thank you
I think that Jack's humor is affecting the story because you see a different perspective of him. Also, whenever he runs into a deep conflict, he sounds cool and doesn't sound worried.
On page 135, Mr. Spizz says a mean joke but then Mrs, Volker roasts him. The way they are saying things to each other makes me think that it affects the story because it shows more character about them two. There character is immature because they can't solve their conflict. Also, on page 165, when Jack runs to Mrs. Volker, his dad calls out and has a wise guy attitude. I think that this will affect the story because it shows the type of character Jack's dad is which is a wise guy.
When Bunny yells at Jack for not hanging out with her and just spending his time in timeout, will affect the story because it sounds like their friendship is about to fall off a cliff and end. This will affect the story because it shows that Bunny's character has changed to hatred on Jack.
When Mrs. Volker finds out that Jack's dad is moving houses, she gets really upset. I can tell that she is upset through the way she was talking. This affects the story because it shows how aggravated she is and it may change Jack's behavior around Mrs. Volker.
How does internal and external conflict affect the story?
I think that the internal conflict is his nose-bleeding problems because he is always annoyed and angry at himself. The affects the story because it shows more of Jack's character. I think his character is now is a pessimist.
In the second book, I think that Jack's internal conflict is that he realizes that if only he did one thing, it wouldn't have led up to main problem. The external conflict is Mr. Spizz because he was the guy who killed all the old ladies so that he could marry Mrs. Volker. These conflicts affect the story because it drives the plot of the book and makes it more suspensful.
In the second book, the new external conflict is that Mrs. Volker was shot and that Jack needs to find out who the mysterious person is and hunt down Mr. Spizz.
The internal conflict of Jack is that he needs to fix his matureness and step up a level to take care of Mrs. Volker who was just shot.
I think that the next external conflict will be that Mrs. Volker dies and before she dies she will tell Jack that it is his duty to kill Mr. Spizz for her.
I think that Jack's humor is affecting the story because you see a different perspective of him. Also, whenever he runs into a deep conflict, he sounds cool and doesn't sound worried.
On page 135, Mr. Spizz says a mean joke but then Mrs, Volker roasts him. The way they are saying things to each other makes me think that it affects the story because it shows more character about them two. There character is immature because they can't solve their conflict. Also, on page 165, when Jack runs to Mrs. Volker, his dad calls out and has a wise guy attitude. I think that this will affect the story because it shows the type of character Jack's dad is which is a wise guy.
When Bunny yells at Jack for not hanging out with her and just spending his time in timeout, will affect the story because it sounds like their friendship is about to fall off a cliff and end. This will affect the story because it shows that Bunny's character has changed to hatred on Jack.
When Mrs. Volker finds out that Jack's dad is moving houses, she gets really upset. I can tell that she is upset through the way she was talking. This affects the story because it shows how aggravated she is and it may change Jack's behavior around Mrs. Volker.
How does internal and external conflict affect the story?
I think that the internal conflict is his nose-bleeding problems because he is always annoyed and angry at himself. The affects the story because it shows more of Jack's character. I think his character is now is a pessimist.
In the second book, I think that Jack's internal conflict is that he realizes that if only he did one thing, it wouldn't have led up to main problem. The external conflict is Mr. Spizz because he was the guy who killed all the old ladies so that he could marry Mrs. Volker. These conflicts affect the story because it drives the plot of the book and makes it more suspensful.
In the second book, the new external conflict is that Mrs. Volker was shot and that Jack needs to find out who the mysterious person is and hunt down Mr. Spizz.
The internal conflict of Jack is that he needs to fix his matureness and step up a level to take care of Mrs. Volker who was just shot.
I think that the next external conflict will be that Mrs. Volker dies and before she dies she will tell Jack that it is his duty to kill Mr. Spizz for her.
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