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Dec 22, 2015 09:29PM
Tomorrow could be interesting. I'm nervous but it's a step that may be necessary. Wish me luck!! I'm actually a little scared. lol. But it's a risk I'm wiling to take...
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Let's get the story straight
You were a poison
You flooded through my veins
You left me broken
You tried to make me think
That the blame was all on me
With the pain you put me through
And now I know that it's not me it's you (you)
You were a poison
You flooded through my veins
You left me broken
You tried to make me think
That the blame was all on me
With the pain you put me through
And now I know that it's not me it's you (you)
It's not me it's you (you)
Always has been you
All the lies and stupid things you say and do
It's you (you)
It's not me it's you (you)
All the lies and pain you put me through
I know that it's not me it's you
Always has been you
All the lies and stupid things you say and do
It's you (you)
It's not me it's you (you)
All the lies and pain you put me through
I know that it's not me it's you
You
You
It's not me it's you, you
So here we go again
The same fight we're always in
I don't care so why pretend
Wake me when your lecture ends
You tried to make me small
Make me fall and it's all your fault
With the pain you put me through
And now I know that it's not me it's you
You
It's not me it's you, you
So here we go again
The same fight we're always in
I don't care so why pretend
Wake me when your lecture ends
You tried to make me small
Make me fall and it's all your fault
With the pain you put me through
And now I know that it's not me it's you
It's not me it's you
Always has been you
All the lies and stupid things you say and do
It's you
It's not me it's you
All the lies and pain you put me through
I know that it's not me it's you
You
You
It's not me it's you, you
Always has been you
All the lies and stupid things you say and do
It's you
It's not me it's you
All the lies and pain you put me through
I know that it's not me it's you
You
You
It's not me it's you, you
It's not me it's you
Always has been you
All the lies and stupid things you say and do
It's you
It's not me it's you
All the lies and pain you put me through
I know that it's not me it's you
You
You
It's not me it's you, you
-Credit goes to Skillet
Always has been you
All the lies and stupid things you say and do
It's you
It's not me it's you
All the lies and pain you put me through
I know that it's not me it's you
You
You
It's not me it's you, you
-Credit goes to Skillet
So...if I get kicked out of my house tomorrow...?? Not really sure what to do! And how would I get all of my stuff?? Oh boy. Yep...tomorrow could be a...crazy...day. Depends on the weather...*looks up to sky* work in my favor...for better or worse!!!
Okay...I seriously don't want ice on the roads tomorrow. I need tomorrow to happen. It's kind of like a test of sorts. *crosses fingers*
It's officially today. In quite a few hours...I could be homeless. I'm not worried though. I kind of want it to happen. Not the homeless part but the part that could cause me to be homeless. It's actually quite stupid really, but whatev. IDC
I'm impatient...I want it to happen now. I don't want to wait until 11ish to know what will happen!! @_@ I'm going crazy...I think I should go insane. JK. Seriously though, can anyone tell me what will happen? Will I have my family or will I lose them???
I don't know the answer, but whatever happens I wish you the best. <3 Stay strong girl
No icy roads, no icy roads, no icy roads!! Please, no icy roads!!
GGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! F8CKING WEATHER!! :( ;(
Well, no mother today :( Darn weather -_-
wow whats happening?? Why might you be homeless??
I won't be. Not today. Stupid weather
Just wondering but why would you want to be homeless????
My mother wanted to have lunch with me and I said yes. However, my grandma and aunt would disapprove. I almost wasn't allowed to go home for Thanksgiving break because I let my mother come to the college to eat with me. I'd have friends I could live with...I'd just lose my family. However, it's a risk I'm willing to take because I'm sick and tired of living in the past. I want to move forward. As a kid, I was torn apart because of mother vs the rest of the family issues and family vs family issues. It's just...ugh...I'm ready to move on
So, I started the writing back up. Don't ask how long I'll be able to keep it up. lol. I have no idea. However, I won't post it on here. If you wish to see it, I can post a link of it on here. It'd be on the first post that I did though, that way people won't have to hunt. What do you guys say?
Yeah I'm supportive of anybody that wants to write. Ill try to not judge harshly (an little mistakes I see, I usually point them out) I totally want to read your stories
Fine by me. I def prefer honesty. Let me finish editing the first chapter and I'll post it. Keep in mind, if you decide to read the second, third, and fourth they aren't done. They will definitely be edited.
I don't care if its not done. Ill read it and give feedback if you want. I would love to help you with your writing
When i mean editing, I mean pretty much completely redoing it. That's what I'm doing with chapter one. I'm just about done.
Ok when you get it done just post the link and I can read it. You needn't be ashamed of you work
I plan to. I'm not. At least not in that sense. lol. It's just when I read it...I think of a way that I like better
I'm stuck right now though -_-
More like a word. I need another word for stomped/stalked. I've already used them in the chapter and I don't want to reuse them but I need another word. I've already asked another friend if he knew any. I should be getting an answer from him pretty soon.
How about followed, crushed, destroyed, creeper?
The person is going into the room. It's done except for that one word. i'm going to post it in my very first post. Then you can see what you think. and what I could possibly do
ok so are you stating another thread or continuing on this one??
It's on this one, but it's on my very first post in this journal. go to page one and my first post. it's there
just by reading the first paragraph and the start of the second it seems amazing
Thanks. You're allowed to comment at the end, btw
Just by reading the first half its amazing
Just getting there. Finally figured out a word
Kool its so late yet I don't wanna sleep I got an entire trip to sleep on
Don't sleep then. If you aren't tired.
Ok well I started to read some of the story you sent me the link to. I started to do a sort of in depth critique and stopped realizing I'm not even sure that's what you're really looking for. ..just basically ideas or ways to make some small improvements...let me know
Opinions I guess. See what you think and how I can make it better
