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message 201: by [deleted user] (new)

XP Indeed.

Ah. Dress codes. Dude, I get away with wearing a fucking cloak and all black to school on a daily basis. And I totally wore heavy dark makeup last year. This year, I'm going for a more androgynous look, so my makeup's different. But dress codes are stupid.

Yeah, that would make sense. She'd have been very hurt since she would have loved the kids and him and everything and he went and did that.

Okay.

I feel like they might have met at different times? Like some people would have met each other at different ages and sort of become a group as more people got added into their group and become close gradually until they were all besties? I definitely think that would be a good age for the first friends to have met though.

That would work. Maybe it was like brain cancer and had progressed a lot without their really knowing so it was far too late to do anything and they didn't have much time?

Rosaline Tiovonen, Nyco Drake's mother. His parents were a million times worse. I have more now. Half of this stuff didn't occur to me until I was writing it out.


message 202: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
;)

*groans* They are so snappy about dress codes. Had a bitch fest last year because girls were showing their stomachs (and bras but that one is understandable). But like, the main thing is, it's socially acceptable to wear bikinis which are sometimes more flashy then normal under garments but as soon as you show your bra or underwear everyone's going NOOOOOOOO It's just... fucked up in a way. Not that I care in the least, I wear whatever fits and looks nice, never any makeup cause that's too much work, I don't know how to deal with the shit and I find the concept baffling. Mostly cause I'm lazy xD

Well she was just cheated on, outcasted and overly betrayed and beginning to grow poor. She had to lash out somehow and she would view their father as a monster for what he put them through. She could very well be ignorant to any reasons he did all this.

Hmmmm makes sense I guess. But definitely, adorable (and annoying) four year olds. what should the max age of meeting and befriending everyone should be??

Awesome! Hope everyone else likes it! >~<
Yeah, he could have been into sports so maybe feeling tired etc etc everyone blamed on that?? It's so sad, it'll be a dark time for everyone. I have a feeling once he dies Zor loses it for a bit. Being bipolar she might even attempted suicide a few times...??

Oooohh yeah! Sorry, like I said, names are not my thing >~< BUT THAT BITCH OMG NO. SHE WAS HORRIBLE.. WORSE?! *cries-dies* I need to squeeze him into a tight hug. No wonder he was a sadist.
Lol, definitely happens, it's the beauty of writing.


message 203: by gabbu (new)

gabbu | 532 comments Mod
omg these ideas are great. isn't it just "outcast" though? i might be wrong but i'm not sure.


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Older form of the word


message 205: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
probably, my spell check isn't liking Outcasted but eh, Idc xD

I'm glad you like them


message 206: by gabbu (new)

gabbu | 532 comments Mod
@Elf that's what i was seeing but i wanted to be sure


message 207: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 610 comments Hulloo!


message 208: by [deleted user] (new)

Hi


message 209: by [deleted user] (new)

Outcast is less commonly used as a verb.

It's stupid. I don't get it either. One time at school we were show this video about the dress code, but one of the people explaining the dress code was wearing shorts that were too short according to the dress code but no one in the video noticed.

I think she'd have been more hurt and try to stay away for her emotional sake. I want her to forgive him but not take him back and her reputation to really suffer for it. We need at least one awesome single mom even if she isn't as close to them.

Like 8-10 I think would be good. Still young. Would Zor and Mysie be the first then if Mysie's family adopted Zor or was that to happen later?

That would be so sad but make sense. He'd probably have had awful migraines too.

You've certainly made your opinion of her abundantly clear. Yeah, he had awful parents. It is no wonder. That's why psychopath made, not born.

Indeed


message 210: by gabbu (new)

gabbu | 532 comments Mod
hey Elf, when do you want to have Mysie and Gray meet and around when do you think will they have started dating?


message 211: by [deleted user] (new)

Hmmm... maybe they would have been like six or seven? What is Gray's family like? Dating I think would be a more recent thing . . . . You?


message 212: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
I agree. Like in theory, compared to many years ago, wearing pants (women) was unusual but still. *huffs* society I understand the dislike of people wearing their pants down their thigh showing their underwear... I get that issue cause... why?? Belts.

*nods* understandable. I like. The family dynamic will be interesting. Would Mysie ever reconnect with her father??

hmmmm. okay. No, it wouldn't make sense past eight meeting since it isn't likely Mysie's mom with adopt another mouth to feed. So adopting Zor at four would be good, maybe about a year after being apart of the family she's kidnapped. I think that Zor would be with the kidnappers until around 7-8. She becomes a member of the cop family and reconnect with Mysie at school at eight and that would give her thw next two years to meet everyone else in the group... It would also explain her wanting to get involved with the Council at first since cops are under the council who saved her life basically.... sound good??

It definitely would be, especially since I'm imagining a since childhood crushing for those two. So sad. Which with the sports and stress could be chalked up to being from that. Oh it's so horrible but I like it so much. OMG MAYBE THAT'S THE REASON ZOR DECIDES TO BECOME A DOCTOR!!!

xD I do try. No point of beating around the bush. xD *shudders* I really hope he finds someone to kinda lean on. *nods* definitely. It's like the pro-life argument. It's not the baby's fault, circumstances and other people's mistakes etc are the reason.


message 213: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
Hi Ilsa!


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ӍдѕҞᾇ wrote: "I agree. Like in theory, compared to many years ago, wearing pants (women) was unusual but still. *huffs* society I understand the dislike of people wearing their pants down their thigh showing the..."

Except they use the belts to keep them that low, so yeah. It's stupid.

They might, might not. They are probably upset he cheated too, regardless of reasons. And that he left. They'd probably have half-siblings there. And maybe one on their mum's side they're not as close to.

True, but their mother remarries pretty quickly to a man of a few classes down and therefore gets more outcasted but has money to support people. And at first, of course, at eight they are dealing with the father's indiscretions, so any teasing really and Mysie breaks down crying. It'd make sense that's why Zor's pro-council. I think with Mysie it's where they live and the pamperedness of their life. Their brother, Fitch, he's very for the resistance so there are disagreements there for sure.

Aww that would be so horrible. Makes sense though.

Touche. It'd be good. I think Krissy's going to help him after a while actually. Indeed.


message 215: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 610 comments Okay, so... how should Alexa blend into the group?


message 216: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, how would she have met them?


message 217: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
Gah! It is so frustrating. It isn't as bad here as it was but stilll. No one wants to see that. Maybe they like the air flow. xD
It sometimes happens to my older brother, though not on purpose, the guy is a twig and as my mother says "he has no ass" *facepalm* you wanted to know that, you're welcome ;) ~that sarcasm~

Definitely, I'd probably be in the same boat. Hmmmm *nods*

True but yeah. Awwww, that would be good then for Mysie if Zor comes back into her life then. It'll be weird since in any technicality Zor has two adoptive families due to being kidnapped. *nods* Damn. How old is Fitch in the current time??

It definitely would be. I really like it though. *slowly killing myself* Definitely. Eeep I'm so excited for all of this!

;) For sure! YES GO KRISSY! I swear she should be like the cities go to girl when your character is so fucked up and needs help. xD It's great.


message 218: by [deleted user] (new)

It's everywhere here and gross. I'm like "Dude, it doesn't need to look like you have either two separate asses or one really long, saggy one."

Oh. XP Did not need to know that at all.

Mmkat

It probably would be good for them. Would Zor and Mysie still view each other as siblings do you think?

Awwww, don't die. It is all very exciting!

She is awesome. And Zri's done stuff actually to her, too.


message 219: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 610 comments Well, she's poor, and an orphan at around 14? I'm working on her history, but she's a sadistic assassin.


message 220: by [deleted user] (new)

Hmmmmm, maybe she met them through Fitch (Mysie's brother) since he's really pro-resistance and his family is from between the Slums and Heart? I need to give Mysie a bit of a darker side, but I haven't figured out what I want their dark side to be . . . .


message 221: by Ilsa (last edited Nov 05, 2015 09:04PM) (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 610 comments I ɴᴏᴡ ᴘʀᴇsᴇɴᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ ғᴏʀᴍᴀᴛ ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛᴇᴅ ʙʏ J-Iᴄᴇ/Jᴀsᴍɪɴᴇ.




[ photo Syndicate_zps8xaklj4a.jpg]

Hair: Short, cropped, red hair
Eyes: Silver
Height: 5’7”
Weight: 140 Lbs
Build: Muscular



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●◉○Name○◉● Alexa Jackson
◌◎Nickname◎◌ Alex, Lexie
●◉○Age○◉● 21
◌◎Birthday◎◌ August 18th
◌◎Zodiac Sign◎◌ Leo
●◉○Gender○◉●
◌◎Sexuality◎◌ Heterosexual
◌◎Relationship Status◎◌ Single

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●◉○Species○◉● Human


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▪▣▫History▫▣▪ Alexa was born second to her poor parents, the younger twin. She and her brother went 'canning' and the like after school to make extra money for their flat. They'd scan the streets for scrap metal and trash that could be reused and earn a few pennies here and there for it. Most times, they'd swap out scrap duty with homework, and make sure they did what they could here and there. They'd take turns with homework when they could, and that's what eventually got them into trouble. Her brother, Jeremy, went to teach the kids to can, supervised by their family, but first they were going to the bank to plead for a loan to pay for the rent of their flat. Her youngest sibling tripped and got on the wrong side of the police guard of the bank, Her entire family was murdered. *see details in family* She'd stayed home to do homework, and been so scared, not knowing what had happened til she tried to find them, and found the police tape, and saw the blood stains everywhere. The story was the family had all been armed, even the youngest, and it had been a tragic necessity. What a stretch... And what lies... Rather than let anybody claim her for the orphanage, Alexa went to the streets, cut her hair boyishly short, and wore baggy clothing. She posed as a boy and toured a few gangs to learn fighting. Alexa became a chameleon, making connections everywhere, under different aliases, merely by shifting how she wore her hair and changing her clothes. After her body curved out, she cut some of her more scandalous ties in fear of her own safety and began to let her hair grow out again. She came upon the anti-rebellion/government thing while spying around in the Heart of the City, and spotted it out before deciding maybe she could keep a better eye on their actions by becoming a part of their plans. And... honestly, for the most part, she agrees with them, and it's nice to have something she can honestly support as her main focus, for once, not merely existing for her own survival.

▪▣▫Family▫▣▪ She had a twin brother, two younger siblings, and her mother and father. HAD is key here. They went to the bank one day while she was finishing up her homework and her brother’s for the local district school. They were supposed to just get a loan so they could keep the flat, but the youngest tripped over a policeman’s boot and was too scared to apologize, shaking. Her twin tried to apologize and got shot in the shoulder. He played dead. It shouldn’t have been fatal, but they refused to let medical treatment in due to a ‘situation’ inside the bank, while the officers took care of the raggedy trash family that was just a leech on the surface of society’s skin.

▪▣▫Personality▫▣▪ Alexa is for the most part reasonable, calm, kind, and quiet. She is the shadow of a person to those who first see her, and she’s often overlooked and underestimated, both things which very much suit her purposes. She has turmoil and her kindness is merely a mask of the monster beneath. Like a clever lynx, she is wonderfully smart about politics, and often disobeys those in her new-made group of deviants to do her own thing. Examples of her actions would be to kill and spy and keep secrets from her allies. She truly trusts none, but allows others to trust her.


▢▩Notable Traits▩▢
⇢ Her fantastic hair
⇢ Her brilliant, shining, gorgeous eyes
⇢ Her way with the word
⇢ Her sadist qualities
⇢ Her chameleon abilities

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▪▣▫Strengths▫▣▪
♚ || ♛ Her abnormal strength
♚ || ♛ Verbal banter
♚ || ♛ Kindness
♚ || ♛ Charisma
♚ || ♛ Blatant honesty
♚ || ♛ Interrogation


▪▣▫Weaknesses▫▣▪
Her ‘type’ of man
Her pride
Her friends/associates
Her softer side
Her aggravating tongue


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◌◎Other◎◌




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message 222: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 610 comments That's how far I've gotten.


message 223: by [deleted user] (new)

There's really just the school for each part of the city. It's council-run. Charity schools aren't a thing and would get squashed by the city council who feeds propaganda to students via school. =)


message 224: by [deleted user] (new)

Other than that, she looks awesome!


message 225: by [deleted user] (new)

=D


message 226: by [deleted user] (new)

I like!


message 227: by [deleted user] (new)

Also hovels would be a thing more of the Outskirts . . . .But like the Slums are basically run-down, shitty, shitty, tiny flats. Because they build up instead of out.


message 228: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
xD oh, yes, that comment. *applauds* Best! and so very true! Though like I said, I think, I'm oblivious to most things so not noticing wouldn't be too shocking.

That is why you are very welcome xD

For sure, both of them would have gone through some shit. I think they'd view each other as friends more, but like close friends that could basically be your sister kinda thing...??

I'll try not to but the FEELS! Too true though, too true.

That is for sure. I swear she could take city by storm.
Awww not Krissy! Oh, but I just love it. *fans face* ALL THE DIFFERENT FEELS. *sighs* and he wouldn't remember doing it either would he...


message 229: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 610 comments Okay, and how about history?


message 230: by [deleted user] (new)

I like. Just those couple comments. =) You use some beautiful language in it.


message 231: by [deleted user] (new)

ӍдѕҞᾇ wrote: "xD oh, yes, that comment. *applauds* Best! and so very true! Though like I said, I think, I'm oblivious to most things so not noticing wouldn't be too shocking.

That is why you are very welcome x..."


*Bows* Thank you. I don't notice often, but when I do . . . .

=) XD

That works for me then. Sibling-friendship relationship sounds about right to me.

Yes, FEELS. Yep.

Probably. And she helped save his life anyway. But with new Zri, he's going to teach her to read and probably try to help her out and basically help anyone else he can that he's hurt that he's found out about. But Krissy was also the last person to see him before he lost his memory.


message 232: by gabbu (new)

gabbu | 532 comments Mod
@Elf, you replied to the Gray thing a while back and i never replied (the still semi-present mild terror that my cactus has possibly died and homework got in the way). i think 6-7 is a good age for meeting. i haven't gotten far at all with Gray's history/family as i've been busy with Dmitry, but i'm thinking maybe they had two moms, one of who was smart and good with technology (and maybe dies?) so Gray's intelligence was perhaps influenced by said mother and maybe the other was upset but ended up remarrying (a guy) and having other child(ren) with him? it's all very tentative. other than that (which i literally just came up with) i don't have a lot. i agree that the dating thing should be recent but how/why should they have started or did we already decide that (otherwise i'll probably have a few suggestions come morning).


message 233: by [deleted user] (new)

gabbu wrote: "@Elf, you replied to the Gray thing a while back and i never replied (the still semi-present mild terror that my cactus has possibly died and homework got in the way). i think 6-7 is a good age for..."

Eeek. Poor cactus. I hope it's okay.

I haven't started Mysie's either since I've been focused on Zri for now. I'm going to do them or my Eoin Macken fc next. I like your thoughts for Gray's history.What would their relationship with their step-dad be like? Hmmm. . . .maybe like I don't actually have an idea


message 234: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
Bravo, Brava!! xD Haha, truuue that for sure. xD

:D

Awesome! xD I likes. Ah, this little group with be adorable and great.

The feels always gets me, it's intense. xD

That's great! I can't wait to read it!!! It'll be great, I just know it xD
damn... that's going to be.. hard.


message 235: by [deleted user] (new)

=D

=D

It will be.

Yeah . . . .

Thank you for your vote of confidence! Yeah, it will be. And I mean, he's aware he used to be horrible and hates himself for it . . . .


message 236: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
For sure. We'll have to discuss how everyone meets everyone else. I'd imagine Mysie would introduce Zor to Gray

Of course, I'm stroked about this. xD
The feels. If that rp gets deep, I won't be shocked if I start tearing up >~< xD *mentally petting him*


message 237: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 610 comments Added history, if you guys wanna help?


message 238: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah. Probably.

Me too!
I would tear up also. =)

Do you think Zor and Alexa might know each other from the past? We need to figure out how to attach Alexa to the rest of them. I feel she'd have been the last to join them . . . .


message 239: by [deleted user] (new)

I really love what you have, Ilsa!


message 240: by ӍдѕҞa (last edited Nov 05, 2015 09:20PM) (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
awesome

xD
yeah! *high fives* those feels.

hmmmmm, depends what age she began mingling with gangs cause that could be how they met??

She does look great Ilsa!


message 241: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 610 comments Okay! So, Zor and Alexa? What do you suggest?

And she started at around 14, which is 7 years ago.


message 242: by [deleted user] (new)

Feels!

I'll let you and Ilsa discuss that one. Or maybe Alexa knew Zor's love interest instead? Idk I'll let you two discuss


message 243: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 610 comments She can know everyone under different masks.


message 244: by Emma ❀ (new)

Emma ❀ (emmaisamess) | 92 comments Wow, a LOT can happen while I sleep... I hate time zones. Couldn't they just all be the same? (No it would disturb this and that and yeah I know. Shut up science.)


message 245: by Emma ❀ (new)

Emma ❀ (emmaisamess) | 92 comments Aaaand for Pyper:
I was thinking of something like her parents being the loyalest thing to the council. Being all about strictness, technology and politics... And Pyper wouldn't like any of that, she would like art. So she would maybe steal to get money for art supplies? And not bothering to clean paint off and walking around like a rainbow would also be something to anger her parents. They would want her to be like them, but she just wouldn't. She'd keep fighting though. It's just a basic idea though.


message 246: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay I like


message 247: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
@Ilsa
Well assuming with her history they would all meet Alexa maybe after the whole being involved with the Council fallout..??
I have an idea, but it'a a stretch, that could have Zor and Alexa meeting previously before becoming friends.... Maybe Zor's new adoptive family, the cops, would have been the ones going to get Alexa to bring to the orphanage. Zor could have tagged along and waited outside, they could have ran into each other when Alexa was sneaking off to live on the streets?? idk

@Elf
*nods* the feels

*shrugs* have nooo clue. >~<

@Emma
Yeah it's good, I like it :)


message 248: by [deleted user] (new)

@Maska.

Yep.

@Ilsa.

I love Alexa but I can't approve her until you do a faceclaim.


message 249: by Ilsa (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 610 comments But it's an art piece? I'll make the claim.
I'll also edit in that with Zor! That's pretty neat, thanks!


message 250: by [deleted user] (new)

All characters need fcs if they have images. =) just a thing


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