Unexpected Alpha by Bethany Wicker - Starting November 6th 2015

[Vippi]

Victoria wrote: "Done: [spoiler]"

Finished.
I agree with Victoria: (view spoiler)[the idea was really good and the story itself has a good potential. I didn't really like the execution, though. The narration was a little too rushed and superficial for my tastes. (hide spoiler)]

[Sibil]

Finally I can start this one! I am a little late, sorry!
I've just read the first chapter, so it's too early to say something, but at first sight it seems good! :)

[Sibil]

Chapter 2 (view spoiler)[ I like Selena so far but Kane really knows how to break the news! (hide spoiler)]

[Sibil]

Sarah wrote: "chapter 7 [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ it was really... strange and discorcenting! (hide spoiler)]
Chapters 3-7 (view spoiler)[it is not bad but it's not good either. The world is quite bidimensional and all seem done quickly and without too much care. Where are all the adults? Why they wait to see hunters and rogues work togheter to think to do something when they already know that the rogues were up to something not good? (hide spoiler)]

[Vippi]

Here is my review:
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

[Vippi]

Sibil wrote: "Chapters 3-7 [spoilers removed]"

I had the same impression (view spoiler)[:( (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Vippi wrote: "Here is my review:
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show..."

Thanks Vippi ☺

[Sharon]

Kia wrote: "Chapter 13:

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I thought so too

[Sharon]

Ending Thoughts: (view spoiler)[ I was not expecting that from Ryan! Damn...I hope Lena's okay. I under stand Lena wants to find Dash, but why does she have to do it alone? Also, I liked the switch from first person to third person in Lena's point of view on Chapter 19. Overall, a great read. (hide spoiler)]

[Vippi]

Sarah wrote: "Vippi wrote: "Here is my review:
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show..."

Thanks Vippi ☺"

Thank you for providing this opportunity :)

[Abby M.]

on the first half of the boo I kinda wish there was a bit more action or drama, it felt a bit slow to me. And i d agree on too much sexism there. I'll be continuing on and write more soon on ny thoughts.

[Sibil]

Vippi wrote: "Victoria wrote: "Done: [spoiler]"

Finished.
I agree with Victoria: [spoilers removed]"

I totally agree!

Here is my review: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

Final thoughts (view spoiler)[I liked the characters and the idea was good, but it's all rushed and I think that the things do not really function. There are a lot of things that were important but nobody pay attention to them, they just go ahead without thinking about anything, really. All is superficial and it does not fit right alltogether. I liked it in the beginning, but not in the ending and in the middle part (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Thanks Sibil ☺

[[deleted user]]

I never got the book

[Sarah Elizabeth]

I'll forward it to you now ☺

[[deleted user]]

Starting it right now and thanks Sarah

[[deleted user]]

Up to chapter 4

(view spoiler)[ Why can't Selena be Alpha? I know the Alpha role goes to the male, but I think she is doing good for an Alpha. (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Thanks NancyMaire ☺

[Sarah Elizabeth]

NancyMaire wrote: "Up to chapter 4

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(view spoiler)[ It's not really fair that she can't be alpha just because she's female. (hide spoiler)]

[[deleted user]]

Sarah wrote: "NancyMaire wrote: "Up to chapter 4

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(view spoiler)[ I agree. I think in that situation, if you want to be Alpha or if someone does that was Alpha and it was passed down to you, you should be Alpha. (hide spoiler)]

[[deleted user]]

Up to chapter 13

(view spoiler)[ I hope Marie will be ok and return to her pack safe and sound. (hide spoiler)]

[[deleted user]]

Here is my review: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Thanks NancyMaire ☺

[Jasmine]

NancyMaire wrote: "Up to chapter 4

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I agree with you about the whole female Alpha issue. :/

[Jasmine]

Sorry for the late update!
Here's my review: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...
And thanks for offering this chance. :>

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Thanks Jasmine ☺

[CallMeSensei]

Oh jeez, I didn't mean to put this R2R off for so long but I'm finally getting to it!

Chapter 10: I'm finding the writing here to be a tad awkward. There's awkward info dumps and the emotion behind some of these events is missing.

The main character is okay... but all of the alpha growling is a little silly, even for werewolves. She seems to handle her pack, as female alpha, better than the neighboring male alpha so the condescending ways people treat her is a little much.

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Thanks Jordan ☺

[CallMeSensei]

Chapter 14: I think Ryan betrayed his family. Am I right?

[CallMeSensei]

Finished: I thought I'd pick this one up because it's been a while since I've read a werewolf fic. But this did nothing for me. It was just kind of choppily written and rather juvenile.

(view spoiler)[And, I was right about Ryan... It was funny when she said there were no signs of his upcoming betrayal. I was like, "ha!" (hide spoiler)]

Review to come.

[CallMeSensei]

Review: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show/1432567266

Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/review/R1QJVENM599E6X/ref=pe_1098610_137716200_cm_rv_eml_rv0_rv

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Thanks Jordan ☺

[Abby M.]

https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Thank you ☺

[Victoria]

I'm 3 months overdue but here's my review: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Thanks Victoria ☺