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message 51: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 1015 comments ((No you're great- make yours as long as you like! I don't wanna restrict you. Basically I'm just letting you know, that's gonna be my average length for posts))


maddie | 472 comments The storm troopers began shooting at her, and she easily deflected their harmless bullets with a swing of her lightsaber. Then, one surprisingly hit her on the side of her abdomen. Alaya winced in pain, a hand reaching down to clutch the fresh wound. Another bullet whizzed by, but this time from behind.

Her head whipped around, locking gazes with the man she'd watched earlier. "Get down before you get yourself killed!" She shouted, and with a flick of her hand he was Forced down beside his friend. Alaya ran towards the Storm Troopers, her hood falling off in the process, before plunging her lightsaber into both enemies.

Alaya took a shaky breath, stumbling as she walked clutching her side, a wince marked across her features. She approached the man, looking him up and down. He was much taller, but then again, she was tiny. "What do you think you were trying to do back there?" Alaya seethed, before clenching her teeth in pain from the pounding feeling of blood escaping her body.


maddie | 472 comments ((Oh you aren't holding me back or anything!! You are totally good haha :) I'm just a detailed writer. That's what rping does to you over the years lol))


message 54: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 1015 comments Kyp stood up and brushed himself off after the fight was over. Stepping out into the street, he addressed the girl. "What the hell was all that?" He looked over to the dead storm troopers. "And what the hell were they doing here?" Then he saw that she was hit. "Are you one of the Jedi? Damn I've never seen one of you in person! Let me get you to my mom, she's great at fixing up blaster wounds." He went up to support her.


message 55: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 1015 comments ((Well basically my main writing style is just shorter and to the point, you can tell that by reading any of the stories in my profile))


maddie | 472 comments
"I don't know what they were doing here." She winced as he came to support her, sighing softly. "Not always kicked out as it seems." Alaya laughed, but blew in a pained breath immediately after. Then she felt it. Several thousand midichlorians in his body, swarming like an infestation of a disease, but they were no disease. She looked at him with wide eyes, shaking her head once more. "I'm Alaya Skywalker. And, you are?" Alaya knew she would have to further question the handsome man parents once they reached his home. Maybe he was related to an old Jedi who had hidden out here away from the Empire long ago. Questions raced through her mind as the two trailed through the sand and towards one of the planets many housings.



message 57: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 1015 comments Kyp let out a whistle as he helped her out of town. "Sky alker? As in Luke Skywalker? What are you doing out here on the outskirts?" Nobody ever payed any attention to Lothol in general, and even if they did it was toward the Capitol, not the small town of Jhothal. "I'm called Kyp. Kyp Du-Jabar. Captain of the ship, Bellona." He couldn't help but smirk. Calling himself captain seemed a little far fetched when he only had a one-man ship.
"Here we are," he finally said as they approached a small farm house. "Mum! Lyme!"


maddie | 472 comments
"Yes, he's my father." She chuckled at his enthusiasum, rolling her eyes as if it were obvious why she was here. "To protect the galaxy of course. It's what we Jedi do." Alaya listened intently, cocking her head to the side playfully as he talked. She turned her head to look at the farm house, it reminding her of her fathers on Tattooine. "Captain? I've never heard of your or your ship before." Alaya teased, wincing as she pressed further into the wound to keep her body from releasing too much blood. "Thank you, by the way. Not many people would offer to help on planets like these. Well, usually not without a price or trade."



message 59: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 1015 comments "Lothol isn't generally grouped in with that," Kyp shrugged. "But I'm glad you're here at least. Other than me, there's probably three other people in town who carry weapons." He smirked. "Oh, you have to have heard of the great ship Bellona."
His mum and little sister Lyme came running out of the farmhouse hearing his shouts.
"She's a Jedi, mum, and she was shot," Kyp explained.


maddie | 472 comments
"Well, now it is." Alaya laughed at his persistence, eyes semmeing to glow in the sunlight. "Nope. It's never crossed my path, your ship." She watched as a small girl came running out, and another - an older woman - came out to greet them. "Hullo," she waved lightly down to the little girl who looked up at her with big eyes. She felt her body be switched from Kyps to the woman's, and then she was led inside, and laid down on a table. "Your home is very lovely." Alaya complimented the woman, before her eyes trailed up to Kyp who stood at her side.



message 61: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 1015 comments ((Lyme is actually seventeen XD ))

Kyp's mum took her and brought her into the tiny farmhouse.
It made Kyp smile every time he came here. Even though it was small it was always clean and homey. There was his mum and dads room was at the back, and that's where they laid her down.
"Why thank you, miss," his mum beamed at her compliment. "My name is Jalayne Du-Jabar, and this is my daughter, Lyme. Lyme, can you get me the bandages?"
Lyme nodded and disappeared into the cupboard. She was quiet most of the time, but made Kyp think a lot of himself. He didn't expect it to be too long before she left as well.
Soon Lyme returned and Jalayne began to sterilize and bandage the wound.
"I'm sorry if I'm hurting you, miss."


maddie | 472 comments ((Oh lol))

"It's very nice to meet you, Jalayne." Alaya was polite as ever, trying to leave a good impression on the family. She didn't move at all as the woman sterilized her wound. This wasn't her first time being shot. "No, it's quite alright. I'm used to this sort of thing." She smiled, and as the woman lifted her tunic, a deep scar was shown across the right side of her abdomen, an old wound from a duel as a youngling with lightsabers. "I do hope you don't find this rude, but would you mind if I had a moment alone with your mother?" The young Jedi woman looked at the two with a warning smile, hoping they would understand.



message 63: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 1015 comments Kyp was taken aback when he saw the scar. She evidently wasn't new to this sort of thing.
"Hm? Oh, I guess not," he said when she asked to speak to them alone. It seemed bizarre, but he wasn't going to mention it. "I'll just see if Dad needs any help. Later, Mum."
Lyme vanished a few seconds after him.
"So what are you wanting to talk to me about?" Jalayne asked after they were both gone.


maddie | 472 comments
Alaya looked up at the the older woman, her eyes searching the other woman's. "Does your family have any relation with any other Jedi? Jedi are found to have several midichlorians inside of them — it's what helps us control the Force. We're able to feel the midichlorians in other Jedi." She explained thoroughly, hoping Jalayne got the point. "I felt thousands inside of your son. He's very capable to control the Force, and with your permission, I would like to take him back to the Jedi Praxeum and have him trained to become a Jedi Knight. He would be in good hands, I can assure you."



message 65: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 1015 comments Jalayne furrowed her eyebrows more and more the longer the young Jedi talked. "We're just simple farmers, miss," she said. "There's nothing special." She started to pack up all her medical supplies now that she was done.
"Except..." She paused. "No that's absurd. But my husband, Ben, told me he never knew his father. There was a secret surrounding his birth, and his mother had to lie about it. You don't suppose..." She turned to face her. "It's not possible. Why would Kyp have it, and not Ben or Lyme?"


message 66: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 1015 comments Jalayne furrowed her eyebrows more and more the longer the young Jedi talked. "We're just simple farmers, miss," she said. "There's nothing special." She started to pack up all her medical supplies now that she was done.
"Except..." She paused. "No that's absurd. But my husband, Ben, told me he never knew his father. There was a secret surrounding his birth, and his mother had to lie about it. You don't suppose..." She turned to face her. "It's not possible. Why would Kyp have it, and not Ben or Lyme?"


maddie | 472 comments
"It's different with everyone. Your husband could've had that many midichlorians but without training, they may have never awakened and he's probably to old by now for any training." Alaya shrugged as she sat up running a finger through her hair. "Thank you for everything you've done. It's completely your decision to let Kyp come with me." As the silenced seemed to deafening, Alaya sighed, sadly smiling. "Goodbye Mrs. Du Jabar. Send Kyp my thanks." She pulled her good back over her head, swiftly moving out of the farm house and towards the sandy hills, and the town where her small ship was.



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message 69: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 1015 comments "Kyp is a grown man, now, it's all his decision," Jalayne shook her head. "I'm glad I could be of help, goodbye, Miss."

Kyp was talking to his father, and helping his put up a trellis in the garden. He turned his head and saw the Jedi girl basically running from the house. "Hold on, Dad," he said, and jogged after her.
"Hey!" He called. "Mum didn't scare you that bad, did she?"


maddie | 472 comments
Alaya whipped her head around, shaking her head with laughter. "No, not at all. I probably scared her more, with all of my foolish talk." She shook her head once more, looking up into his eyes. "Kyp, what if you had the chance to become a Jedi? What would you do then?" She asked, her hand falling to her lightsaber. She pulled it out, holding it out to him. "Go on, try it out. It won't hurt you, I promise." Alaya chuckled lightly, eyes staring at him as she waited for him to feel the weapon in his hands, feel the Force flow through him.



message 71: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 1015 comments Kyp laughed along with her, but stopped when she asked the next question. "Well, who wouldn't?" He shrugged. "You've gotta be born with some sort of power for that, though, right?" He impulsively took a step back when she offered the light saber. "Damn, do you really mean that?" He should have been nervous about this, but a feeling in the back of his mind told him it was safe. He reached his hand out and grasped the metal handle as she held it out to him.


maddie | 472 comments
"Yes. You have to be born with midichlorians, it's what helps your control the Force." Alaya watched as he pressed a button, and the lightsaber burst to life. "The Force is strong in my family. My father has it. I have it. His sister has it." She placed a hand on his arm and yet again, inside of him she could feel thousands upon thousands of midichlorians inside of this young mans body. Alaya smiled softly, before taking the lightsaber back into her hands, and tying it to her hip once more. "You have that power too."



message 73: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 1015 comments Kyp's eyes widened as it shot to life. "Wow," he whispered. "So you really think I can use the force?" He looked up at her, careful to not kill himself or her with the weapon. "I'm not sure I have the patience for Jedi training."


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