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message 51: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
If we have each individual name the cover would be too wild. Inside we can have everyone's name that wrote the book and ppl who created characters in it etc. It would look better as a singular name for it.


@Elf
Haha, you say that now xD. I am completely dense though at times and oblivious, blonde moments. everyone has them. xD


message 52: by [deleted user] (new)

@Happy. It's fine.

@Maska. It probably would be just a bit. =)

Everyone does. I can list a few I have. I've accidentally said my name is Yes before, so . . . .


message 53: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
COurse! xD Plus it can give off a bit of mystery.. ??

So very true. xD Have sooo many moments. That's great! :D There's this inside joke that I don't know my name so I have to check my ankle since I have an ankle with my name on it xD so yeah.


message 54: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah

Well then. I'd probably lose my own head if it weren't attached to my neck. I'd still forget to pack my own lunch or take showers if it weren't for my mum.


message 55: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
xD

Yup. I wear it cause it was handmade and from a friend. xD Omg. I misplace everything. Literally almost forgot my phone in class today cause I placed it on my neighbor's desk. They were laughing at me >~< Lose pencils all the time xD


message 56: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
~Also, because I am like horrible at technology, can anyone tell me how to add myself as a contact with our google group so if I need to be contacted it'll be there...?~


message 57: by [deleted user] (new)

Just send an email to the account. I'll send you an email back saying the email was received and then I can press a button to add your address under contacts with the press of a single button.


message 58: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
Ah-okay sure thing. Should warn ya, I use the name Cassidy for my gmail... >~< xD I'll go do it now.


message 59: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay


message 60: by [deleted user] (new)

I haven't been checking my email for a long time, given that the police are scamming through it. If I'm missing something upon writing the novel, please pm to let me know. I don't wanna be out of the loop.


message 61: by [deleted user] (new)

This is what we have:


So I suppose we discuss what we would like the plot to be and what characters we’d like to include, points of view, and all of that here.

What we were thinking for the plot of the roleplay is that the city does end up in an actual civil war. The city council would end up splitting at some point, the resistance would remain more-or-less in tact. Different people would end up taking care of different bands of people in order to help them survive rather than fight for power. The city would be largely destroyed. The city council and the resistance would end up destroying each other (but not all members or maybe really any of either really dying), and the wall would collapse, releasing magic back into the world. Which would result in “Hey, ack, there’s a lot of land we know nothing about!” and “What the hell are these powers I suddenly have???” all at once. And I think that’s basically what we have thought of. Please give your thoughts/ideas/suggestions/things you’d like to see or change/et cetera.

~~E.C. Drake, also known as Elf

We also have to think about the basics. Even stuff like the Point of View, how many main and secondary characters we want, at what point do we want to start timeline-wise, do we want to include events happening in the roleplay, things like that.
Also, maybe each of us chooses 1-3 characters of our own characters we use for the main/secondary main, how many depending on their importance? If they have more important characters than 3 tell the rest and we'll probably just be cool with adding more. We just don't want to have dozens of them we're trying to keep track of.
~KT

So, maybe we should make a list of all the characters we are currently allowed to use? And maybe a sort of thing that says who is connected to whom and/or like plot ideas for them? That way we can choose that sort of thing?

~~Elf

I think that makes sense. So maybe like the chart I put in below?
-- KT

Okay. Makes sense to me. =)
~~Elf

It looks good to me! So are we going with the three characters each? -Denver
Also, have we established what sort of technology is available in this time period?


I don’t know if it’s only three characters each? I feel like we need to get further along in the RP before we can really decide who is the most important. I feel like we have some “futuristic” technology in the Heart of the City, particularly around the city council -- we’d have to decide exactly what. I feel like the Slums are a bit behind us, but I don’t know exactly how far behind us they should be. I think a lot of that depends where in the Slums a person lives. And the Outskirts I think have more advanced technology only if someone rich has buildings there? And then I think the rest of the Outskirts are basically the Stone Age with whatever scraps of tech the people can find. Does that sound good or…………………..? ~~ Elf

I think that makes a lot of sense, we don’t have much for rp going on yet so we can’t quite decide yet. We will have to decide how far behind the slums are, I’d imagine they wouldn’t have holograms and stuff like the heart does. But yeah, like the sounds of it. ~~ Maska



message 62: by [deleted user] (new)

No problem!


message 63: by [deleted user] (new)

Tιɴαтн Zαeвα ~ᴋᴇᴇᴘ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴇʏᴇs sᴇᴛ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʜᴏʀɪᴢᴏɴ ᴡʜᴇʀᴇ ʙʟᴜᴇ ᴍᴇᴇᴛs ʙʟᴜᴇ~ wrote: "I haven't been checking my email for a long time, given that the police are scamming through it. If I'm missing something upon writing the novel, please pm to let me know. I don't wanna be out of t..."

Okay


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ӍдѕҞᾇ wrote: "xD

Yup. I wear it cause it was handmade and from a friend. xD Omg. I misplace everything. Literally almost forgot my phone in class today cause I placed it on my neighbor's desk. They were laughin..."


=)

I do too. I took like five minutes to go through my entire wallet to find a pass for something a couple days ago and then realized it was just in the wrong pocket. And I've forgotten my book in class before.


message 65: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
Misplacing things is just hell, like grrr such a time consumer. *facepalm* damn. Don't you hate it when you're looking for something and it's in your hand the whole time?
Lol for sure.


message 66: by [deleted user] (new)

Yep!


message 67: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
Gahahha
I'm hungry.


message 68: by [deleted user] (new)

Go eat then


message 69: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
I should...


message 70: by [deleted user] (new)

Go eat


message 71: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
Fiiine


message 72: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 11, 2015 02:36AM) (new)

Okay, this seems really amazing guys, and I'm not kidding. But before starting anything, shouldn't we get more...organized, maybe?


First of all, we need to choose which charries to use, if we're going to make fictional ones, choose/edit their history if necessary, etc. Then the theme, then the specifics. :3 Or maybe its just because I'm a really annoying, sometimes bossy, sorry about that perfectionist freak. If so, I'm sorry. :/


message 73: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah, I agree. But part of me feels we should probably do additional worldbuilding before we do plot development. And I think we should be farher along in the rp before maybe choosing our charries (because I think we will have a better sense of which charries actually matter that wa)


message 74: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
I think we've personally started off too far ahead of ourselves. As elf said we need to rp further and develop story line and plot in here first before we can begin to get organized with the book since the book is based off what we generally do in here.


message 75: by [deleted user] (new)

I agree with you guys. So basically, let's plan but not get too serious...right?


message 76: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
Just a general concept and planning the prologue I think since it's in the past. But yes. Basically.


message 77: by [deleted user] (new)

Fine with me! :)


message 78: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah. Definitely could do with developing the history and like social stuff and like how different parts of the city live? I feel like there are subsections of the the different areas.


message 80: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
Definitely, I think for the most part that's all we can do now. I'd imagine there would be, generalizing an area especially when it's the circumference of the heart of the city and then there's the outskirts would would have even more spread out. I think for the outskirts, the areas with farming or like for example Aston's factory etc would be sections better off but other areas basically ghost town kind of thing..??


message 81: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah. There are definitely varying levels of poverty/wealth in the three sections. Like there isn't actually a really defined border between the MCS and HotC in a lot of places. And then in the Outskirts you have places like the Burnt Land that are completely useless and poor and, well, burnt to a crisp (that will be covered in Dagger's history).


message 82: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
For sure! Yeah I can see it just gradually morphing slowly into the slum area for most parts. *nods* We'd probably have to have some sort of summary of the basics of each part in the prologue and then get more into it as characters visit areas....
Dagger?


message 83: by [deleted user] (new)

Yep. Probably would work. And we'd want the history there too and get more in-depth later.


message 84: by [deleted user] (new)

Dagger -- Dagfinn Escarra, one of my charries in the character workshop


message 85: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
AHHHH Okay >~< Of course, I'm an idiot.. >~< lol


Of course the history as well. Everything will probably get more in depth as the story goes on. I can see the beginning basically being the summarized context in a Council approved textbook so it would be biased..??


message 86: by [deleted user] (new)

It's fine. It's not like I have actually mentioned him in ages.

So the prologue is basically a piece of propaganda regarding the city. Maybe we end it with or have it cut off by a piece of resistance propaganda?


message 87: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
xD Well I caught sight of him a few times which is why I recognized his full name instead of his nickname.


Yeah! I think it would be a kinda cool concept and so gradually gabs will fill in with the pieces discovered by the characters as we move through the book. Well depending on how long we'll have the book, we could have the resistance's side of the history etc beginning the second book... but that all depends on the timeline. I don't think we should cut it off with the resistance propaganda though, it would only confuse the reader.


message 88: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 12, 2015 02:44AM) (new)

These are all great ideas, in my opinion. Sorry I'm not contributing much, things have been really bad for me to say the least. if there's something extra going on in the google accounts, please let me know!


message 89: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 12, 2015 07:22AM) (new)

We haven't done much of anything on the google that has not been discussed here. You're not really out of the loop. =) I hope things improve.


message 90: by [deleted user] (new)

Good to know :)


message 91: by [deleted user] (new)

=) (We're on here more often, honestly)


message 92: by [deleted user] (new)

Luckily for me then, I'm on all the time :)


message 93: by [deleted user] (new)

=)


message 94: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
It's fine. We're not saying too much besides the obvious for the most part.

xD I'm rarely on the google account since it's just difficult for me to switch back and forth especially since it fucks around with youtube which I'm constantly listening to. >~<


message 95: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah.

I have multiple things of Google Chrome all the time, so I just added one more. I always have it up, but no one else is on it. XP


message 96: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
I check it out occasionally but like, my google account is like the main source of everything I have up and just *groans* so much effort and work but eh I'm just lazy.


message 97: by [deleted user] (new)

Ahhh. I have different things, so I have multiple google chromes up so it depends which window I'm on for me, really.


message 98: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
That doesn't work for me, it's all connect so if I sign out of one and open another it usually just logs me out and fucks me over *sighs*


message 99: by [deleted user] (new)

I went under settings and added a new person so it's basically different google chromes


message 100: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) | 1876 comments Mod
Ohhhh, Damn. Cool. Yeah...


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