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Oct 24, 2015 03:48AM

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And I had a thought - what if the main character had like two people in the contests things that she was friends with, and the rest of the contestents were like mean or somet..."
Well here's what I was thinking. Yes, there will be 'nicer' quote on quote zodiac-representatives than another. Surely we dont have to coin them ALL bad, though. My thoughts were that at least the majority of them set aside their differences and unite against this sort of tyrannic world they live in. Each of them has something they can contribute. E.g. Leo's very charismatic and convincing. Gemini is clever. Aries is tough... etc.
It just seems a shame to make three good and the rest 'bad'.
I think it's awesome! It shows there isn't just good and bad, there's more to it than that - I think it's great!
Ɛммα Aυgυѕт wrote: "Awesomesauce! Now I have to work on my no-nonsence girl...
#Virgo's-strict"
OOoooo nice
#Virgo's-strict"
OOoooo nice

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Cancer Argyris
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Aries Kakos
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Sagittarius Demetriou
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Capricorn Pavlis
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Sagittarius Demetriou
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I don't know you well enough to guess. XP But Cancer is... surprisingly accurate I think. Well, I mean, I don't have blonde hair, and my skin probably isn't that flawless, but... haha!



to the point where I want to write about her and her life.
And even though they're not very compatible I'm shipping Lego.... (Leo X Virgo)
Just because... it would be so funny...XD

LEO + VIRGO = LEGO
Which means that they are not only fun to mess with, but their relationship hurts to step on. Ladies and gentleman, may I announce the most loved/hated shipping of the universe.
YES! XD She's the 'I don't need no man!" but then falls for like idk Sagittarius or something XD

"Shove off! I don't need anybody to take care of me! I can do this on my own!"
And Virgo will probably be like:
"Imbeciles. This isn't a time for courting rituals."

What if we.... I don't know.... killed Leo?
Oooooooooooooh yeah... XD wow just wow my first reaction to killing off a character is'ooooooooh' XD but nice idea! give for some...idk action or whatever

Anyway I was thinking that what if we made the competition a bit more complicated. We still had the two praetorian guards, but what if the public could save five individuals from fighting in the gladiator games, and the winner could save one. But, then, you'd say - we'd still have so many people left. So what happens if it was more of survival? I don't know, maybe this is edging too close to the Hunger Games but I was thinking we could:
A. Put them in this arena and see who can out last each other (they're not fighting amongst themselves, only the beasts) or
B. They go in separately however many times until there are two left and they fight (think of like a tournament)
ok, so point is what if the public saved... I'm going to toss out random names... Cancer, Pisces, Taurus, Capricorn, and Libra. Leo is saved by MC because maybe he made him/her swear to save him after some situation. Alright, Leo doesn't know that Virgo is not saved until MC breaks the news and they then piece together WHY one of the weakest people wouldn't be quote "saved" (because normally they save the tough ones for the fights, and excuse those who haven't 'proved themselves')
(Keep in mind Leo is not a praetorian guard, he was just saved. The one who comes out Victor in the second games is the next praetorian guard. Neither are the zodiacs saved by the public are praetorian guards)
Virgo comes from a wealthy family and MC and Leo figure out she's supposed to be an example to all the rich folk who think they're 'immune' (and maybe her fathers a rebel, we could use that too). This is just code for, they're going to jinx her, and kill her off. Anyway, Leo decides to take her place, and he dies in her stead.
Leo's death ends up triggering the rebellion. Thoughts?

1. Leo would be one of the zodiacs who would be 'popular' among the people because he's so engaging. Which means that people would feel his loss, the 'injustice' of losing such a soul and
2. Leo also comes from someone of the 'wealthier' circles making those of the higher classes rebel



LEO + VIRGO = LEGO
#Kamiko-approved
Breaking hearts since..... several lightyears? I don't know. XD
Okay, so we should figure out what the challenges are, and how many and stuffs...
I think putting them in an arena definitely, like, fits with the time period and such - but I mean...eh...and it does seem kind of like Hunger Games
What if we had more, like - OMG IDEA!!!!
What if we had other Greek myths in here too, like monsters that they have to fight or something, and the myths are interlaced with this story...?
I was also thinking that these are the original zodiac signs and their stories, and this praetorian guard contest-thing was so incredible and different from all the others, that it was put up in history...or something..
But yeah...
I think putting them in an arena definitely, like, fits with the time period and such - but I mean...eh...and it does seem kind of like Hunger Games
What if we had more, like - OMG IDEA!!!!
What if we had other Greek myths in here too, like monsters that they have to fight or something, and the myths are interlaced with this story...?
I was also thinking that these are the original zodiac signs and their stories, and this praetorian guard contest-thing was so incredible and different from all the others, that it was put up in history...or something..
But yeah...