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Rubyfirewoods12's Writing > Emmeline - Ruby - Kamiko -- Trilogy Story

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message 101: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Got it


message 102: by em_panada (last edited Oct 24, 2015 08:25AM) (new)

em_panada Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "Oh, no - girl's good!

And I had a thought - what if the main character had like two people in the contests things that she was friends with, and the rest of the contestents were like mean or somet..."


Well here's what I was thinking. Yes, there will be 'nicer' quote on quote zodiac-representatives than another. Surely we dont have to coin them ALL bad, though. My thoughts were that at least the majority of them set aside their differences and unite against this sort of tyrannic world they live in. Each of them has something they can contribute. E.g. Leo's very charismatic and convincing. Gemini is clever. Aries is tough... etc.

It just seems a shame to make three good and the rest 'bad'.


message 103: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
I think it's awesome! It shows there isn't just good and bad, there's more to it than that - I think it's great!


message 104: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Awesomesauce! Now I have to work on my no-nonsence girl...

#Virgo's-strict


message 105: by em_panada (new)

em_panada But we'll need to wait on Kamiko to decide who's on which side.


message 106: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ɛммα Aυgυѕт wrote: "Awesomesauce! Now I have to work on my no-nonsence girl...

#Virgo's-strict"


OOoooo nice


message 107: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ɛммα Aυgυѕт wrote: "But we'll need to wait on Kamiko to decide who's on which side."

Right


message 108: by em_panada (last edited Oct 24, 2015 09:28AM) (new)

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message 109: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
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message 110: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Cancer Argyris
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Aries Kakos
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Sagittarius Demetriou
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Capricorn Pavlis
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message 111: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Love it!!!!

#proud-to-be-Cancer


message 112: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
You're a Cancer??

coolio


message 113: by em_panada (new)

em_panada What are you?


message 114: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Wait - let's see if you can guess .....mwahahahaha


message 115: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Yeah, I was tempted to take Cancer... but then I was like... Virgo.... I could work with her.


message 116: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Haha


message 117: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "Wait - let's see if you can guess .....mwahahahaha"

I don't know you well enough to guess. XP But Cancer is... surprisingly accurate I think. Well, I mean, I don't have blonde hair, and my skin probably isn't that flawless, but... haha!


message 118: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ah, well - I'm a Pisces, actually XD

XD that's cool


message 119: by em_panada (new)

em_panada My brother is a Pisces as well, he's awesome. Then I have one sibling that's a Leo, and the other two are Virgos.


message 120: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
wow, lots of siblings XD

but cool


message 121: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Eh. Only four. Well.. I mean, there's another one on the way. That one will be either an Aries, or a Taurus. But it's been funny to see how some of them can be accurate. Especially the Leo one. That one.... geesh...


message 122: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
XD


message 123: by em_panada (new)

em_panada I'm like... really liking Virgo right now....

to the point where I want to write about her and her life.

And even though they're not very compatible I'm shipping Lego.... (Leo X Virgo)

Just because... it would be so funny...XD


message 124: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
XDXD Lego - YES


message 125: by em_panada (new)

em_panada That's it! We're crushing statistics.

LEO + VIRGO = LEGO

Which means that they are not only fun to mess with, but their relationship hurts to step on. Ladies and gentleman, may I announce the most loved/hated shipping of the universe.


message 126: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
XDXDXDXDXDXD


message 127: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Whose Aries' s ideal?

Or does she pose the, "I don't need no man!"


message 128: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
YES! XD She's the 'I don't need no man!" but then falls for like idk Sagittarius or something XD


message 129: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Whoop! Whoop! That will probably Virgo too. Except Aries will probably be like:

"Shove off! I don't need anybody to take care of me! I can do this on my own!"

And Virgo will probably be like:

"Imbeciles. This isn't a time for courting rituals."


message 130: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
XDXD


message 131: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Now... I understand.... that this might sound weird after our above comments.... but.....

What if we.... I don't know.... killed Leo?


message 132: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Oooooooooooooh yeah... XD wow just wow my first reaction to killing off a character is'ooooooooh' XD but nice idea! give for some...idk action or whatever


message 133: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Poor Leo. That reminds me to much of PJO


message 134: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmigosh wow yeah


message 135: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments lol


message 136: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Haha! Well I don't know much about Leo from PJO, but apparently his story doesn't consist of a lot of happily ever afters. :)

Anyway I was thinking that what if we made the competition a bit more complicated. We still had the two praetorian guards, but what if the public could save five individuals from fighting in the gladiator games, and the winner could save one. But, then, you'd say - we'd still have so many people left. So what happens if it was more of survival? I don't know, maybe this is edging too close to the Hunger Games but I was thinking we could:

A. Put them in this arena and see who can out last each other (they're not fighting amongst themselves, only the beasts) or

B. They go in separately however many times until there are two left and they fight (think of like a tournament)

ok, so point is what if the public saved... I'm going to toss out random names... Cancer, Pisces, Taurus, Capricorn, and Libra. Leo is saved by MC because maybe he made him/her swear to save him after some situation. Alright, Leo doesn't know that Virgo is not saved until MC breaks the news and they then piece together WHY one of the weakest people wouldn't be quote "saved" (because normally they save the tough ones for the fights, and excuse those who haven't 'proved themselves')

(Keep in mind Leo is not a praetorian guard, he was just saved. The one who comes out Victor in the second games is the next praetorian guard. Neither are the zodiacs saved by the public are praetorian guards)

Virgo comes from a wealthy family and MC and Leo figure out she's supposed to be an example to all the rich folk who think they're 'immune' (and maybe her fathers a rebel, we could use that too). This is just code for, they're going to jinx her, and kill her off. Anyway, Leo decides to take her place, and he dies in her stead.

Leo's death ends up triggering the rebellion. Thoughts?


message 137: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Holy....that sounds amazing.


message 138: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh


message 139: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
A tad confusing but still - ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh


message 140: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Yeah. Sorry it's a bit confusing, but I thought it was an interesting idea. But I figured it would be perfect because

1. Leo would be one of the zodiacs who would be 'popular' among the people because he's so engaging. Which means that people would feel his loss, the 'injustice' of losing such a soul and

2. Leo also comes from someone of the 'wealthier' circles making those of the higher classes rebel


message 141: by em_panada (new)

em_panada 3. Plus, their romance was televised. And we all hate the injustice of a 'romance' not going our way.


message 142: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Awesome!


message 143: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Love it.


message 144: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Unless.... you guys have a better romance involved. I'm open to ideas. It doesn't have to be Leo and Virgo.


message 145: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments I actually think a Leo and Virgo are perfect.


message 146: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Same!


message 147: by em_panada (last edited Oct 24, 2015 01:18PM) (new)

em_panada Kamiko wrote: "I actually think a Leo and Virgo are perfect."

LEO + VIRGO = LEGO

#Kamiko-approved

Breaking hearts since..... several lightyears? I don't know. XD


message 148: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
XD


message 149: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Okay, so we should figure out what the challenges are, and how many and stuffs...

I think putting them in an arena definitely, like, fits with the time period and such - but I mean...eh...and it does seem kind of like Hunger Games

What if we had more, like - OMG IDEA!!!!

What if we had other Greek myths in here too, like monsters that they have to fight or something, and the myths are interlaced with this story...?

I was also thinking that these are the original zodiac signs and their stories, and this praetorian guard contest-thing was so incredible and different from all the others, that it was put up in history...or something..

But yeah...


message 150: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Yes! Yes! Yes!!!!


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