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message 4901: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "How?" she actually was interested.


message 4902: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I don't know."


message 4903: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem shrugged. "My dad is mad right now..that you are here with me." she sounded smug, "But my mom thought it was a great idea."

Blaze grinned and stood suddenly. "Want to go to the school for lunch?"


message 4904: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Your parents are HERE?" Emmy said astounded

Liv smiled "Sure, I can use my powers for evil."


message 4905: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments Seth walked into the cafeteria after drama, his eyes scanning the room. He saw Teeghan on the other side, and sat as far away as possible.


message 4906: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "They work here," she said darkly. "But don't think that's a good thing."

Blaze laughed. "Well we better get there soon!"


message 4907: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "that's so not good." Emmy nodded

Liv smiled "Please tell me there are hot guys in your school." She winked.


message 4908: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "no. Definately not." Salem rubbed her temples, trying to ignore someone's thoughts.

Blaze pretended to be struck. "Well, there's me.."


message 4909: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy nodded "Please tell me they aren't Shadows."

"Yes, but you don't don't count"


message 4910: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I can't promise that."

"Yeah..I guess there are. I don't really go around staring at my classmates."


message 4911: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Crap..."

"Well, then you should I bet you could tell me if there were hot girls there."


message 4912: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow just nodded sullenly.

"No...I have to tell ya, I only looked at my crush. And I don't like her that way anymore." he blushed.


message 4913: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv smirked "You are odd... not like most guys I know.."

Emmy nodded a headache comming.


message 4914: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I'm odd?" he couldn't help but keep smiling.

Shadow sat on the floor, holding her head in her hands: it was as if the thoughts were so much louder today.


message 4915: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "yes, Very odd. I'm normal as far as I'm concerned." Liv said smileing whipping up some cool wind.

Emmy looked down at her.
"WHat's wrong Salem?"


message 4916: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze laughed and started off for the school, knowing she would most likely beat hiim there.


"They are so...loud." she said painfully.


message 4917: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv caught up with him easily. "I don't knwo where the school is."

"Try this." Emmy said putting a hand on her head. She hoped that it helped.


message 4918: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Well then, I guess we're even." he grinned, starting to run.

It made the thoughts slur and become a bit less obnoxious. Shadow exhaled, "Woah."


message 4919: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv smirked and ran after him.
"I guess we are."

"It help?" Emmy asked looking at her.


message 4920: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Right!" Soon, the school was in sight.

"Yeah...they're all slurred, but they are quieter. Thanks Em.."


message 4921: by Hannah (last edited Feb 20, 2010 07:22PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv ran ahead of Blaze and stood on the steps.

"Really..? huh... Well, your welcome."


message 4922: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "You won. "he winked, going inside.

Shadow smiled carefully.


message 4923: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv smiled and walked next to him. not really caring about anyone that looked at her. And most of the guys did. Her and her long blonde hair her lanky body and bright blue eyes, she was hard not to look at.

Emmy sat down. She smiled at Salem.
"I didn't know I could do that. Patrik can do that normally."

Patrik woke up in a dark and cold room.
"Well, shit."


message 4924: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze grabbed her hand instinctively when he noticed.

She looked up at her unlikely friend. "Is that a good thing?" Salem winked.

((ahaha, sorry I love his response))

Anika laughed.


message 4925: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv smiled and kissed him
"Don't pay them any attention. They all wish they could be you."

Emmy laughed "I have no clue."

Patrik stood up and started pacing.
"This is fantastic. I love cold, dark dungeons."

((i love Patrik.lol))


message 4926: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((me too, he is awssie))

He smiled at her, pulling her (gently) down the stairs to the caf.

Shadow smiled, "Yeah-Damn.."

Anika thought that it was funny how sarcastic he was. She also, oddly, felt nervous as she opened the door and went in.

((she is 16))


message 4927: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((He is. and wicked sarcastic.))

Liv laughed and followed him down the stairs.

"Yeah. My thoughts exactly." Emmy nodded

Patrik leaned on the wall as the door opened.
"Are you the afternoon entertainment?"


message 4928: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I love sarcasm...Teeghan tends to be sarcastic in my story))

He spotted Teeghan and her dark red hair easily, going over and sitting across the table from her.

"No..no damn." Salem wasn't really talking to her, just..talking and staring at the door.


"Uh..sure I am," the young russian said, stepping further in.


message 4929: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Lol I <3 Sarcasam))

Liv sat down next to Teeghan.
"Hey," She smiled brightly.

"Hey, Salem." Emmy put a hand on her shoulder "What's up?"

Patrik laughed and crossed his arms
"So who are you? Shadow, Torch... Cobra? Because if Parker is here I've a promise to keep."


message 4930: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*grins* ye-ah!))

Teeghan looked up and smiled. "Hey Liv...school? Really? That's all you two could come up with for today?"

Shadow was shaking, "No.."

"Shadow? What's that?" she paused. "Oh. No I'm not. This is Torch."


message 4931: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I didn't want to come. But now that I'm here I've decided that it isn't worth it. I don't really like the vibe of hellish torture I'm getting from this place." Liv winked, smiling at Teeghan.

"Salem. What is it?"

"Torch... Well, shit."


message 4932: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan laughed. "You got that right!"

She stopped shaking,stopped talking. After a moment, Shadow turned to Emmy. "Patrik. Torch has him. My parents are pissed..and-" she smiled a teeny bit," Liv,Teeg, and Blaze are at school."

Anika smiled grimly. "What? Don't like us? We're throwing a party!"


message 4933: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv laughed " I thought so."

"School...? Your kidding!" Emmy laughed then she realized "Torch has Patrik?! Please tell me he's ok."

"Well if its a Party." Patrik rolled his eyes.


message 4934: by Ky (last edited Feb 20, 2010 08:20PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan grinned and Blaze chuckled. "School..ick."

"Yeah..he's okay..quite a sarcastic little fellow. Anika is there. She'll be no trouble with him: she's human...and 16."

She didn't know what to think and she was fairly sure he was stronger than she was told. "Meh, they aren't very good anyway."


message 4935: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I'm thinking that is the case." liv nodded "So what do you do here?"

Emmy laughed "Ok good."

"I figured. Evil tends not to throw fantastic parties."


message 4936: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Um..learn?" Teeghan said. "But not really. I know all this stuff already."

"Yeah, I'm not worried about him yet."

"Evil? I'm struck."


message 4937: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What do you learn? I've never been to school, so bear with me here." Liv shrugged looking around.

"I'm not either."

"Oh, I really don't care."


message 4938: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "As I said, I don't learn," Tee grinned. "But they learn things like math, science, how to speel their name..that kind of thing."

Shadow stood abruptly and began to pace,eyes closed: watching.

"Didn't think you did." she shot back. Idiots. Why'd they send me?! Anika approached him, hands in her pockets.


message 4939: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "How do you not learn?" Liv asked

Emmy watched her with interest.

"Just making sure." Patrik said watching her come closer.


message 4940: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She shrugged. "I told you: I know everything."

Blaze laughed. "Right."

She was silent and even her steps made no sound.

"Whatever." her voice didn't waver, in fact it got stronger, belying her feelings.


message 4941: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Sure... Everything." Liv laughed and rolled her eyes.
A tall, football player looking boy walked over and smiled at Liv.
"Your new here right?"
"You could say that." She replied with a playful smrik.

Emmy watched at Salem paced the room. She wanted to do the same but she didn't feel like it.

Patrik watched her and fell silent. He didn't know what they wanted.


message 4942: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze glanced up at him,eyes hard and no longer orange: hidden by contacts.

Teeghan tensed. "Don't be stupid Blaze."

Salem stopped. "Blaze and Liv are hilarious."

"They told me 'He's like a Dancer, but not exactly.' What did they mean by that?"


message 4943: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv's eyes flicked to Blaze she winked and gave him his favorite smile. I'll take care of it. Her look said.
"Back off." She smiled devilishly. The windows blew in and a wall of air hit the guy in the chest. He staggered back a few paces.

Emmy smiled "What did she do?"

"What?! I'm not like a dancer!" Patrik said agast.


message 4944: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Liv," Teeghan said urgently,quiet. "You can't do that here!"

Blaze grinned but was as freaked out about safety as Teeghan was. "We have to go."

"Dammit! Liv just blew in the windows! Damn-it! They have to get out of there ASAP! Before it's too late!" Shadow stood again, holding her head.


"Do you even know what they are?" she smirked.



message 4945: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What?- Oh SHIT!" Liv stood

"Oh damn it Liv!" Emmy yelled even though they were miles away from eachother.

"I just know I'm not a Dancer." Patrik looked at her. "But I must say I do have a great body, so I see how you can get confused."


message 4946: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan grabbed them both and sped forward time long enough for them to be out of the building. "We have five minutes, I can't do that long enough with all of us."

"They have approximately five minutes before the Emergency Response team knows it was them."

Anika put her hand to her face in an exaggerated movement, "Oh gawd, I'm not talking about those, idiot."




message 4947: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv ran and got their stuff. The look on her face apologetic.

"The WHAT?" Emmy asked totally confused.

Patrik smirked. "You sure? If not then what else?"


message 4948: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan just smiled grimly. "You didn't know."

Shadow's look was pained. "Meh, just a team of people who have to 'respond' to emergencies at the school. Coincidentally, most of the workers are either Torch or Cobra."

"You know it. The Raindancers, like your aquiantances, Salem, Blaze..do those names ring a bell? Ya, they do."


message 4949: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "i'm sorry. it's a reflex." Liv frowned.

"Well, this sucks..." Emmy said shaking her head.

"Who?" Patrik played dumb. He really didn't feel like complying with this kid. "And Raindancers? What are those? I think you mean The Rainman. because I have no clue what a Raindancer is." Patrik was enjoying himself, that much was evident.


message 4950: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Tee smiled, "same here. Don't worry about it."

Blaze shook his head. "Let's go."

"They're there."

Anika glared at him. "Don't be stupid: it's not funny."


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