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message 4451: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((heyo))

"Seventeen. Hmm. How long have you known of your gift?"


message 4452: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Hi.))

Sean tilted his head and pretended to think a moment, then said, "Since I was thirteen. Four years, just in case you can't subtract."


message 4453: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((gtg now..darnit. bbl))

Jack snarled.


message 4454: by [deleted user] (new)

((Aw, bye!))

Sean smiled slightly. "Just making sure."


message 4455: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Do you know anything about your family?"


message 4456: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'll be disappearing soon. I'm up a bit late, actually. XD Hi!))

Sean's face hardened. "I know that you have my little sister, and that you're making her use her gifts, gifts that I only just discovered earlier that she has, for your purposes."


message 4457: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okay. and hullo))

Jack smiled grimly. "Anything else?"

Shadow wished she had someone to talk to.


message 4458: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean shook his head. "I haven't seen my parents in four years."


message 4459: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Jack changed the subject. "What exactly is your gift?"


message 4460: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean smiled slightly. I can hear your thoughts. And speak in your mind. And I can enter your dreams.


message 4461: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Get out of my head." he said shortly. "I don't allow my daughter to do it and I expect the same of you."


message 4462: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean smiled wider. "Sorry." He didn't sound sorry at all.


message 4463: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Outside the room,Shadow giggled.

Jack glared at him, "You do it again and you'll never see your sister."


message 4464: by [deleted user] (new)

((Blech, I disappeared again. Sorry!))

Sean's face hardened, his smile disappearing. Through clenched teeth he said, "I won't do it again."


message 4465: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((it's fine))

"Good." Jack smiled menacingly. "So, I assume you've been talking to my daughter in this 'mind' way?"


message 4466: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'm only here for a bit now, but I'm here! XD))

"Yes." Sean almost smiled. "She's a nice person, your daughter."


message 4467: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki, I'm not on for long either))

"Nice," he chuckled. "When you are on her good side. Did she tell you anything about what we really do here?"


message 4468: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay. XD))

Sean shrugged. "Not really."


message 4469: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Jack smiled again, critical and cold. "You'll know soon enough."

Shadow sank into the wall she was standing next to, wishing she could disappear.


message 4470: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean shook his head and sighed. "Wonderful. So what now? When do I get to see my sister?"


message 4471: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Soon." he said roughly, pushing the door open and leaving. A few minutes later Shadow was led back in.


message 4472: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean frowned and sat down, not looking up as Shadow entered.


message 4473: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Sean...I'm sorry about him..."


message 4474: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean shrugged. "It's not your fault... but I sometimes wish I were an orphan so that people couldn't threaten my family."


message 4475: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow looked at him closely. "what'd he say?"


message 4476: by [deleted user] (new)

"It's not... what he said. It's what he considered saying."


message 4477: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow nodded. "Sean..I'm sorry." she put up her hand. "And don't tell me not to say it either, cause it's true. If it weren't for me, you'd be safe..and no one would be threatening Fiona that way."


message 4478: by [deleted user] (new)

"But they'd still be using her... She still wouldn't be happy. How could she ever be happy like that?" He shook his head and looked up at her. "And I wouldn't know where she is. I probably never would've seen her again."


message 4479: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Sean. She's happy right now. I don't know why..but she is..the happiest she can be." Shadow stopped talking for a moment. "She knows," she smiled. "Fiona knows that she gets to see you." a small bubble of laughter came as she witnessed Fiona's 'dream' and the thoughts she had of it.


message 4480: by [deleted user] (new)

Tears welled in his eyes. "How?" he breathed, a smile turning up the corners of his mouth slightly.


message 4481: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "A Medik said he'd ask, he did." Shadow grinned. "John..hmm, sounds familiar. Oh, and that visit: wipe away those tears my friend cause it's soon."


message 4482: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean smiled wider. "But how did she know?" he stood and brushed the tears away with his shirt sleeve.


message 4483: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "A dream."


message 4484: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((gtg))


message 4485: by [deleted user] (new)

He shook his head in amazement. "I can't... I can't believe it."


message 4486: by [deleted user] (new)

((Bye!))


message 4487: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I can, and you should too." she smiled deviously.


message 4488: by [deleted user] (new)

He laughed quietly. "Yeah... I can. It's still amazing." He smiled and asked, "Can I hug you now?"


message 4489: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 16, 2010 02:41PM) (new)

((Thought you were gone? Well, I'm going now, too.))


message 4490: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I was..sorries!))

"Sure you can," she smiled,laughing lightly.


message 4491: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((ok everyone, i'm trying this cuz i've never done this before...however i'm not still sure of the storyline...right now i'll just describe my character:))

Marie: spunky, dramatic 16 yr. old. blonde hair, blue eyes. funny, awesome, has some temper....


message 4492: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((she sounds fun!))


message 4493: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((thanks!!))


((i forgot my other character))

Josh: best friends with Marie growing up, careful, caring. Not as reckless as Marie-trys (in vain) to slow Marie's quick temper. wavy brown hair, deep, big brown eyes... :)



message 4494: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((verra nice!))


message 4495: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((thanks again!! haha. you know what story they're from-you've read it!! :)))


message 4496: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yes. olo and you've read mine too. The good team is called United and yes they try to defeat Cobra))


message 4497: by Mandy (last edited Feb 17, 2010 11:11AM) (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((forgot to say: Marie's gift: captivator, hunter, and shifter Josh: tracker, emotes and medik.... (can they have more then one?? p.s. they are a great team!! :))))


message 4498: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yeps. Shadow has...5? I think. usually they have 1,2,3))


message 4499: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "((yes. olo and you've read mine too. The good team is called United and yes they try to defeat Cobra))"

((YEP!! k. United. huh cool. and we are all just a part of it or do we have a leader?...))


message 4500: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "((yeps. Shadow has...5? I think. usually they have 1,2,3))"

((cool!! ok so i will make a few more...))


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