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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I'm all for that," Rife said looking straight ahead.

Liv smiled at the girls and said "When you want to throw fire balls, make 'em transperent. That way they don't know what is gonna hit them. I learned that one from Emmy," She winked


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"I wonder how anyone could like you," Gwen mummbled.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "That Ryder sure did," Rife added.


message 404: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 11, 2009 04:35PM) (new)

Yeah, well they're both jerks so they gravitate toward each other," Gwen said the anger still pulsing through her veins. She took a couple deep breathes and told herself to calm down.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife laughed, "I remember when we were like that,"


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"Like what," Gwen asked confused.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Oh sorry. Like them, sneaky jackasses, well we're still like that." He laughed looking at her.


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"Yeah, but you know where the line is," Gwen said, still upset that they had hurt Lilly and Roses feelings.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Well we didn't always," He said softly.


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"You do now and everyone has to learn where it is, they just, haven't found it yet, or don't care that they cross it, most likely the second," Gwen said sticking up for Rife and them.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments He smiled at her, "Maybe it's a little bit of both," he said softly then he said "It's you turn,"


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"Actually it's your turn," Gwen laughed. "But I do have a question. What was it you were fighting?"


message 413: by Hannah (last edited Aug 11, 2009 05:34PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Oh those were The Shadows," He shrugged thinking of a question.


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((Quick qusetion, do the shadows look human or are they human?))


message 415: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((they are shape shifters, so they looklike all things but they are all black, hence the name The Shadows))


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((thanks))

"They turn up a lot, or are the next group of people we meet going to be juvinile delinquents," Gwen half joked.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((welcome))
Rife laughed "Half and half. But it's my turn to ask the questions. What happened to your parents? I mean why did you live wit your grandmother?"


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"They're still alive, just not very good parents. My dads a senator, so he's always gone and my mom's alwaya going to parties. I had a nanny when I was younger, but now that I'm an adult my parents don't really care about what I do," Gwen told Rife thinking of her past. "I practically lived at my grandmothers. She lived about 20 minutes from where I lived. She's the one that raised me. And I don't know what I would have done without my sister, but she started going downhill when she turned 16. I don't know where she is, and I haven't heard from her since she ran away last year." Gwen chocked out the last sentence


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I'm sorry," Rife said looking at her


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"But she has to learn her lesson. That's what Grandmother said, and I haven't seen her since I left 6 months ago," Gwen said sadly.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "She will, it just takes longer with some people than with others. Don't worry." He said


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"Thanks," She said. "And I think we're here." She looked at the big building in front of them and the different stores labeled JC Penny's and Sears.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Somewhere ahead Emmy groaned as did Rife,
"Damn I hate those things,"


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"It'll be ok, I'm a quick shopper when I want to be," Gwen laughed at his groan.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "It's Liv I have to worry about. Everyone else shopps really fast she takes forever." Rife said


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"She's like me, only I've gotten used to shopping fast." Gwen laughed and ran up beside Liv. "So what's our strategy, shoes then clothes, which first."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv laughed "Clothes then shoes, they need to match."


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"Alright, I used to Times Square, so you lead the way," Gwen felt that they were going to become really good friends.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Times Square? I've been there once. And we didn't shop! Can you imagine?" Liv said smiling and picking up leaves as she went
Rife said "I was so happy when we didn't have to go shopping,"
"Me too," Emmy said from Patrik's side.


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"If only you could have, it's amazing. All the botiques and the latest in fasion trends," Gwen got excited. "I remember all the times I want with Addy." She smiled at the memories.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I'm so far beyond jealous!" Liv said she too was getting excited
"Dear go so help me!" Rife said looking at the sky.


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"I promise to take you there sometime, it ah-mazimg," Gwen laughed excitedly. "You, me, and all the money we can spend, it'll be so much fun."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yes! Oh my god it'll be so much fun! When this is done we have to go!" Liv said getting worked up.
All Rife could do was shake his head.


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"And you just have to meet Greg, he's my mom's stylist, I know, boring name, but he's hilarious," Gwen felt more like she was at home than she had felt in the last six months.


message 435: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Greg, sounds gay and amazing!! Oh I can't wait!"
Liv smiled, they were going to be great friends, she could tell. Well, she thought, maybe we already are.



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((G2G, sorry))
"Yeah he is, I think at one point he had a crush on my dad," Gwen said pondering the thought. "But he has a boyfriend now who is just as hilarious as he is, and really cute, it's atoo bad he's gay." Gwen laughed as the ran into the first store, Hollister.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((:[ ))
Liv laughed at that and followed her into Hollister after Gwen.


message 438: by JD (last edited Aug 11, 2009 11:16PM) (new)

JD | 27 comments Inside Hollister a teenager with a hoody pulled over his head and a lanky adult in a dirty suit were having a whispered conversation in the far left corner. "Danny, just try this one on. If you're going to follow me, you have to fit in." Danny, the man in the dirty suit, had dark hair and was pouting like a brat. "I can't wear that, it's itchy and I dont like the color." Jonah rolled his eyes. "You haven't even tried it on, plus, there's a dark one right here." Jonah folded the shirt neatly and put it back in place. He picked up a plain black shirt and held it up to Danny's chest, like a mother shopping for a reluctant child.


message 439: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments (( Sorry for the lateness, had to sike myself up. ))


message 440: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments "None of this will fit us." protested the twins eyeing the boys nervously.


message 441: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "It's ok, you can pick the next store," Emmy said looking at the boys in the corner.She tapped Patrik's shoulder and nodded in the boys direction. He nodded once then found Rife hurredly whispering the message then comming back to Emmy as Rife told Liv and Gwen.


message 442: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments "What?" they said wanting to know what was happening.


message 443: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments (( Ack, I don't know how to introduce them. >< ))


message 444: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((You could have one bump into Rife or Patrik? *shrugs*))
"We just have a bad feeling." Emmy shrugged


message 445: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments "Oh" then they started ruffling through the t-shirts.


message 446: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "yeah," Emmy said then looked at some jeans and grabbing a pair that were her size.


message 447: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments They looked up and giggled at the pictures on the walls.


message 448: by JD (new)

JD | 27 comments (( Thanks, I'll do that next time but I've gotta go for the night. I'll introduce them tomorrow. ^^; ))


message 449: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments ((Kay))


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Gwen had already found four pairs of jeans and five shirts and was heading to the dreeing room to try them on. Grabbing Liv's arm she said, "Hey, I need your oppinion on these."


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