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message 4401: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow turned dher face away from him,crying in a way that was uncharacteristic of her.


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He put a finger under her chin, turning her towards him again so he could look into her eyes. "Salem... I'm going to let you leave now, if you still want to... and I will not make that decision for you. You'll be in your father's hands as soon as you leave, though."


message 4403: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She brought her eyes up to him. "I need to leave."


message 4404: by [deleted user] (new)

He nodded and sighed. "I thought you would." He stepped away from her and watched her.


message 4405: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Her gaze came back into focus and she used her sleeve to wipe the tears from her face. "Goodbye," Salem said as she turned,opening the door.


message 4406: by [deleted user] (new)

He didn't say anything, just watching her go. He sighed again once she was gone.

The guards stepped in front of her as she stepped out. "You're to come with us now," one of them said.


message 4407: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She choked out a humourless laugh. "So I've been told."


message 4408: by [deleted user] (new)

One behind her and the other leading, they took her to a room and opened the door. The room was all white and featureless, and a black-haired boy was inside, sitting against a wall. He looked up as the door opened and his eyes widened as he saw her. "Shadow!"


message 4409: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem couldn't hide her confusion, "What's going on?"


message 4410: by [deleted user] (new)

In her head Richard said, I asked them to do you a favor. You were going to be put in a cell anyway, so it was the least I could do.
Sean shook his head. "I should ask you the same thing! Are you all right? What did they do with you?"


message 4411: by [deleted user] (new)

((Gotta go now! Bye!))


message 4412: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki. I haveta have a shower. *grins* ))

Oh,thank-you Richard. Shadow pushed her curls out of her face and sighed,stepping further in. "I-I'm fine."


message 4413: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Okay. I'm back, but only for a little while.))

You're welcome.
Sean stood and went to her. "Did they heal your back?" he asked.


message 4414: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki))

"Yes," she smiled slightly. "And my hand."


message 4415: by [deleted user] (new)

He decided not to ask what had happened to her hand, instead suddenly hugging her. "I'm glad you're alright. I was worried..."

Fiona had fallen asleep again, and for a while she didn't dream, but then the was in a room, watching through a window as the boy that she now knew as her brother embraced the girl with silver hair. She smiled and woke up.
She sat up and looked around the room.


message 4416: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem pulled back. "Not right now..please."

John had entered w ile she was sleeping.


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Sean let go and looked at her, slightly surprised, but he nodded and didn't ask. "Alright," he said softly.

Fiona looked at John, and smiled. "He's okay now. They're together again. I think they like each other."


message 4418: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Thank-you," she nodded.

John looked at her oddly. "Are you sure you are okay?"


message 4419: by [deleted user] (new)

((Ach, shut up, John, and humor the kid. *rolls eyes* XP))

Sean smiled at her sadly. "What did they do? Other than heal you, I mean. You look sad."

"I'm fine!" Fiona shook her head and looked at him the same way. "I trust my dreams, that's all. You would, too, if you had dreams like mine. What happens in my dreams always happens in real life."


message 4420: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo))

Shadow chuckled, "I'm not sad, I'm controlling my anger."

John smiled at her. "Well that's good."


message 4421: by [deleted user] (new)

"Sure. So what made you angry? Your parents?" he asked.

Fiona frowned and looked away. "You still don't believe me, do you?"


message 4422: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She shook her head. "First the Medik, then Ellis."

"I do." And I'll have to tell the boss now.


message 4423: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean's eyes darkened a little. "Ellis? What did he say?" He had guessed that Ellis didn't do much but talk.

Fiona turned to him again, eyes wide. "Really?"


message 4424: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "He told me to grow up like he did.Other than that,I don't remember."

"Yes." he said sincerely.


message 4425: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean was confused. "Don't remember?"

Fiona beamed at him. "Thank you!" she crawled across the bed and hugged him.




message 4426: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She shrugged. "I just don't."

John smiled at her, not moving.


message 4427: by [deleted user] (new)

He nodded and sat down. "Well..." he sighed. "So we're stuck in here still?"

Fiona looked up at him and asked, "Can I see him now?"


message 4428: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "For now, yeah." Shadow stayed where she was,leaning against the door.

"That isn't for me to choose, little miss." he disentangled himself and walked to the door. "I'll ask." John left and went to Jack's office,knocking on the door.


message 4429: by [deleted user] (new)

((I have to go now. Bye!))

Sean sighed. "Are you sure you're alright?"

Fiona watched. "Okay." she sighed and sat down in bed again, waiting.


message 4430: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((bye!))

"Sure I am." Salem said quietly. "I'm always fine."




message 4431: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'm here for just a minute, but I'll have to get off again soon. :())

Sean shook his head. "No one's always fine," he said, smiling sadly. "And you certainly aren't."

((Sorry, I forgot I was playing Jack. XD))
"Come in," Jack called.


message 4432: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki))

Shadow ignored his comment, preferring to act as if it were true; that she was fine.

John opened the door and stood in front of Jack's desk.


message 4433: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean sighed. "All right... did you hear anything about my sister?"

Jack nodded to him. "Hello. What is it?"


message 4434: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No. I couldn't catch thoughts in there, and Ellis wouldn't know."

"The girl. She wants to see her brother."


message 4435: by [deleted user] (new)

((Why isn't she telling him about his father? Just curious...))

"Okay," he said quietly.

Jack nodded. "Hm... It's interesting to learn who he is. I've been watching, of course." He thought for a moment. "Fine. We'll let her see him. Not just now, though. I need to talk to the boy."

((Sorry I was gone a bit. I was helping out with the new dog.))


message 4436: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((she will))

I met your dad.

((that's okay: did you have fun?))

John nodded his understanding. "Alright sir."


message 4437: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sort of. We introduced the new dog to the others outside because that works better, and it was freezing! Literally. There's a lot of snow out there and it keeps coming. Bleh. I want spring!))

Sean closed his eyes and leaned his head back like he was bored and tired. Oh! How...? What did he say? Is he with them?


message 4438: by [deleted user] (new)

Jack smiled slightly. "You should go back... oh, and she can't see her parents yet, either."


message 4439: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ya! it's so cold outside...brrrrr...))

He was just..there. Um, he told me that he is here to watch over Fiona..and you. He's not 'with' them, he has no authority but the lower ranked people still seem to listen to him.


message 4440: by [deleted user] (new)

((I know! I liked the snow at first, because we don't usually get a lot here in Kentucky, but then it kept coming and it's ice underneath and I don't like it much.))

Ah... I can't believe he's been here, and known about me being here! I wonder how long... And how long they've had Fiona, without me knowing.


message 4441: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ugh, lucky you. I always have snow in the winter..a lot of it))

I wonder the same thing her face darkened. "My dad is going to talk to you." this was a normal thing for her to say, everyone knew she'd know about a decision like that.


message 4442: by [deleted user] (new)

((Hm... I usually wish I'd get a bit more, but I don't anymore. XD It gets awfully hot here in the summer, though. And it stinks because I don't get to swim much; there's no swimming pool near where I live, so we have to drive an hour to a lake we can swim in.))

Sean sighed and nodded, standing.


message 4443: by [deleted user] (new)

((You wanna be Jack while he's talking to Sean? XD))


message 4444: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((brb,dinner))

Shadow moved back from the door, knowing her father would be there soon.


message 4445: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay, bye for now!))

Sean watched the door and waited.


message 4446: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki...olo))

((sure, I'll be Jack. what did you want him to say?))

Jack opened the door and stepped in,closing it behind him.


message 4447: by [deleted user] (new)

((Bleh, you're back just as I'm leaving. Well, I'll be back soon, I have to clean up the kitchen for my mother 'cause she's got a migraine and she's laying down.))
((Um... I wanted him to ask if he'd known about his family and stuff and just ask some general questions 'cause he doesn't know much about him. And scare him a little, you know, threaten him or something. XP))


message 4448: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean looked at him, his face grim.


message 4449: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Jack saw his daughter and had her removed for the time being.

"So, how old are you?"


message 4450: by [deleted user] (new)

((Back!))

Sean decided it would be best to answer truthfully; it wouldn't hurt. "Seventeen."


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