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"No... I was doing something bad to her. Of course she fought." she shook her head. "In my dream she was really hurt, and she looked sad... she broke the glass around me and the boy picked me up, and he touched my cheek and whispered my name. And she smiled... and she looked so sad. And then the men took me away from him... and he was crying."
Please say something to that effect... I can't let anyone know that I can do this, like my son.
Please say something to that effect... I can't let anyone know that I can do this, like my son.
((gtg,be on later))The Medik made a mental note to find someone to make her forget.
Like it matters! You are in charge here you can just make him do it. She sighed. "Fine, just get this over with."
((Looks like we left at the same time. That's funny. I'm only here for a bit now, and I'll be on later, too.))
Fiona closed her eyes and laid back on the bed, curling into a ball with a sigh.
No, I'm not, really. He knows I don't like people having things done to them against their will. I'm basically just a prisoner here, anyway, here only for my Fiona. He smiled slightly at her and said, "Very good."
((So the Medik has to touch someone to heal them, right? Not sure how things work...))
Fiona closed her eyes and laid back on the bed, curling into a ball with a sigh.
No, I'm not, really. He knows I don't like people having things done to them against their will. I'm basically just a prisoner here, anyway, here only for my Fiona. He smiled slightly at her and said, "Very good."
((So the Medik has to touch someone to heal them, right? Not sure how things work...))
((lol we so did!))The Medik, John, watched her.
((ya, Mediks have to touch))
Shadow sighed. That sucks.
((XD That's great. Well, I'm only here for about half an hour now...))
Fiona looked up and frowned. "Stop looking at me."
((Okay, so...))
Hm... at least I can see her. My name is Richard Harrows, by the way. He smiled slightly.
The Medik touched her hand, just barely, guessing that she'd rather not be touched, and began to heal her.
Fiona looked up and frowned. "Stop looking at me."
((Okay, so...))
Hm... at least I can see her. My name is Richard Harrows, by the way. He smiled slightly.
The Medik touched her hand, just barely, guessing that she'd rather not be touched, and began to heal her.
John chuckled and looked away.Hello Richard. she had to keep her mind off the Medik or her body would revolt and not let him heal her. Do you know what is going to happen?
Fiona sighed and moved, pulling the blankets up to her chin. She closed her eyes and tried to go to sleep. Eventually she did, and she dreamed. In her dreams she saw the boy from her other dream, and saw the girl, too. They were sitting next to each other, but when one moved closer, it seemed like a wall was between them.
The boy looked up and saw her, and his face was so sad that it made her want to cry. He stood and tried to get to her, but then she was being pulled away and she couldn't fight the hands that pulled her back because they were invisible. And then she saw the girl stand, and the girl smiled a little at her, and said, "You'll be okay..."
Fiona shook her head. "No! I know him! Why won't they let me talk to him?"
And then he called to her, saying, "Fiona! I'm Sean! I'm your brother!"
But then they took him away, and she woke, crying. "No... Don't... don't take him away!"
I'm afraid not. I only know that I'm supposed to take you to a young man, Ellis... And that my son is going to stay in a cell for a while. That's all they would tell me. He watched her, his eyes sad. I'm sorry.
((Is that okay?))
The boy looked up and saw her, and his face was so sad that it made her want to cry. He stood and tried to get to her, but then she was being pulled away and she couldn't fight the hands that pulled her back because they were invisible. And then she saw the girl stand, and the girl smiled a little at her, and said, "You'll be okay..."
Fiona shook her head. "No! I know him! Why won't they let me talk to him?"
And then he called to her, saying, "Fiona! I'm Sean! I'm your brother!"
But then they took him away, and she woke, crying. "No... Don't... don't take him away!"
I'm afraid not. I only know that I'm supposed to take you to a young man, Ellis... And that my son is going to stay in a cell for a while. That's all they would tell me. He watched her, his eyes sad. I'm sorry.
((Is that okay?))
((yeah,that's fine))Shadow broke contact with the Medik, punching the small window on the door, shattering it. "Don't touch me!" she covered. No! Not Him! I can't take seeing him anymore!
((Okay. So who's with Fiona now? Is John still there?))
"Calm down, I won't hurt you," the Medik said.
Richard shook his head at him. "Just leave her be for a minute. I'm sorry... I have to take you to him. That's what I was ordered to do.
"Calm down, I won't hurt you," the Medik said.
Richard shook his head at him. "Just leave her be for a minute. I'm sorry... I have to take you to him. That's what I was ordered to do.
((Yep, John is there))I know. she took in a deep breath, calming considerably. I don't blame you. Salem pulled her fist to her chest after taking the slivers of glass out of her skin. She went and sat.
((Well, Fiona just woke up and was freaking out...))
Richard sighed. "Let him heal you now, please." I don't want you going in bleeding and about to pass out because of the pain. Are you going to be all right?
Richard sighed. "Let him heal you now, please." I don't want you going in bleeding and about to pass out because of the pain. Are you going to be all right?
((ah, yes. sorry))John walked over to the girl,trying to calm her. "It's okay."
That would be great! she was dead serious. "If you value your life, Medik, I suggest you be quick aboiut touching me."
((Blech, I disappeared again. Sorry. Dada turned the internet off a little early this time.))
Fiona shook her head. "No, it isn't! I know who he is now. He told me. He's my brother." Tears streamed down her face.
No, I think not. You need to be strong... he's not very happy with you.
The Medik sighed quietly and covered her uninjured hand with his, very gently, and began again to heal her.
Fiona shook her head. "No, it isn't! I know who he is now. He told me. He's my brother." Tears streamed down her face.
No, I think not. You need to be strong... he's not very happy with you.
The Medik sighed quietly and covered her uninjured hand with his, very gently, and began again to heal her.
((it's okay))John looked at her oddly, "You are imagining things: it is only you and I in this room."
Who's not? Ellis?
((I gave you a bit of a warning... I said I was on for half an hour. I'm only here for a few minutes now... XD))
"He was in my dream again. Don't say it was just a dream, I know that, but it feels true!" Fiona sighed. "But you're not going to believe me." She looked away.
Richard nodded slightly. Yes... because, I think, you weren't acting as if you didn't know my son... I don't know the details, but that's what he said...
"He was in my dream again. Don't say it was just a dream, I know that, but it feels true!" Fiona sighed. "But you're not going to believe me." She looked away.
Richard nodded slightly. Yes... because, I think, you weren't acting as if you didn't know my son... I don't know the details, but that's what he said...
((I gave you a bit of a warning... I said I was on for half an hour. I'm only here for a few minutes now... XD))
"He was in my dream again. Don't say it was just a dream, I know that, but it feels true!" Fiona sighed. "But you're not going to believe me." She looked away.
Richard nodded slightly. Yes... because, I think, you weren't acting as if you didn't know my son... I don't know the details, but that's what he said...
"He was in my dream again. Don't say it was just a dream, I know that, but it feels true!" Fiona sighed. "But you're not going to believe me." She looked away.
Richard nodded slightly. Yes... because, I think, you weren't acting as if you didn't know my son... I don't know the details, but that's what he said...
((oki. :D I don't get mad at you, don't worry))"You are right. I'm not. But someone will..."he trailed off.
Shadow blushed lightly. Ellis is..stuck up. I need to focus on not killing him right now. she drew in a deep breath,causing the Medik to think he was in danger.
((XD Okay. Well, I will say goodbye before I leave this time. Bye! Going now!))
Fiona frowned and looked at him again. "Maybe. My parents will, I know that. And he will. My brother will. Can I see him? His name is Sean. I think he's locked up somewhere."
The Medik finished, and stood, taking a few steps away from her. "Done," he said.
Richard nodded. "Thank you." You do that... it would not be a good thing for you if you did.
"Come on, I must take you to Ellis now."
Fiona frowned and looked at him again. "Maybe. My parents will, I know that. And he will. My brother will. Can I see him? His name is Sean. I think he's locked up somewhere."
The Medik finished, and stood, taking a few steps away from her. "Done," he said.
Richard nodded. "Thank you." You do that... it would not be a good thing for you if you did.
"Come on, I must take you to Ellis now."
((byebye, and thank-ya..))He shook his head. "You cannot see him. Especially not right now."
Shadow nodded to the Medik. "Merci." Agh...hmm. You should warn them that I'm mad..so they can have an Emote there just in case.. Jack might not agree, but, you know if y'all want people to live then it might be a good plan. She frowned and stood up.
((I'm back! You're welcome. XD))
"Why not? It's not fair! You won't let me see anyone! I need to see my family!" Fiona glared at him.
The Medik nodded back and left the room.
He said he didn't want anyone else there, just guards at the door. Richard led the way out of the room and down a long hall.
((So what are all the powers? I'm confuzzled. XD And do you think I should play Ellis since you're going to be Shadow and there won't be anyone else there? I guess I might make him OOC, but...))
"Why not? It's not fair! You won't let me see anyone! I need to see my family!" Fiona glared at him.
The Medik nodded back and left the room.
He said he didn't want anyone else there, just guards at the door. Richard led the way out of the room and down a long hall.
((So what are all the powers? I'm confuzzled. XD And do you think I should play Ellis since you're going to be Shadow and there won't be anyone else there? I guess I might make him OOC, but...))
((ello mate, I'm on..it might take a few mins between posts..I'm cleaning.. and yeah, you can play Ellis if ya want. Um, what is OOC? there are a LOT of powers...Emotes ontrol people's emotions))"It's not my place. I'm just a Medik."
Shadow clenched her fist by her side but said nothing, following him. Dammit then.
((Hi! OOC stands for "out of character". Okay, well, I guess you can just tell me as they come up. XD))
Fiona turned away. "Fine. Can you get someone else to get them, then? I... I want my Mom and Dad."
I'm sorry... there's nothing I can do to help, now. He didn't want you to be healed, either, but... He led her to a door with too guards standing in front of it. The guards moved when they saw Richard and Shadow, and Richard opened the door. Good luck, he said .
Fiona turned away. "Fine. Can you get someone else to get them, then? I... I want my Mom and Dad."
I'm sorry... there's nothing I can do to help, now. He didn't want you to be healed, either, but... He led her to a door with too guards standing in front of it. The guards moved when they saw Richard and Shadow, and Richard opened the door. Good luck, he said .
((oki, that's fine))John nodded and left, not actually fulfilling his promise: yet.
I hate him. she flushed, Okay I don't hate him. I don't know how. And it's not your fault, stop apologizing! Merci. Salem walked in reluctantly but with her head held high.
((Okay. Cool.))
Fiona sat up and looked around the room. There was nobody there besides her now, but she could see a camera. She curled up again, closing her eyes, and counted in her head, just to have something to do.
Richard held up a hand in an almost wave, and walked away. Farewell...
The door closed behind her, and Ellis, who was leaning against a wall on the other side of the room, looked up at her and smiled. "Hello again, Salem. Sit down?" He pointed to a chair. "And don't throw it at me, please. That has gotten a bit tiresome." His smile was mocking, but his eyes were full of anger.
Fiona sat up and looked around the room. There was nobody there besides her now, but she could see a camera. She curled up again, closing her eyes, and counted in her head, just to have something to do.
Richard held up a hand in an almost wave, and walked away. Farewell...
The door closed behind her, and Ellis, who was leaning against a wall on the other side of the room, looked up at her and smiled. "Hello again, Salem. Sit down?" He pointed to a chair. "And don't throw it at me, please. That has gotten a bit tiresome." His smile was mocking, but his eyes were full of anger.
John stood a few feet from the outside of the door."I don't need to sit." she replied shortly.
Fiona began to hum quietly, and her finger traced circles on the sheets.
He shrugged. "Fine. Well, let's cut to the chase, shall we?" His smile disappeared. "That boy, Shane. You like him, don't you? You lied to me, Say. You said you didn't care about him, but I think you do." He paused to gauge her reaction to his words.
He shrugged. "Fine. Well, let's cut to the chase, shall we?" His smile disappeared. "That boy, Shane. You like him, don't you? You lied to me, Say. You said you didn't care about him, but I think you do." He paused to gauge her reaction to his words.
John was worried for the girl.Shadow glared at him. "Don't call me Say. And his name, contrary to popular beleif, is Sean."
Fiona sighed and rolled over so she was on her back, looking up at the ceiling. She stared up and then closed her eyes, and imagined that she was looking at stars, that she was outside, and that she could hear birds and smell flowers, and that everything was good again, the way it used to be.
Ellis shrugged again, and grinned. "So you do care. Hm. So, if I were to tell the guards to kill him, right now, what would you do?" He fingered a radio on his belt.
Ellis shrugged again, and grinned. "So you do care. Hm. So, if I were to tell the guards to kill him, right now, what would you do?" He fingered a radio on his belt.
((I'm sorry it took this long))"I'd kill you Ellis." she sighed. "But I don't want to kill you!"
(('S okay. XD I'm reading the roleplay right now.))
"Hm... No?" He smirked and stepped closer to her. "And what do you want to do?"
"Hm... No?" He smirked and stepped closer to her. "And what do you want to do?"
((olo))Salem stepped back. "Anything but be here with you. What the hell happened to my friend Ellis?"
((Eek, that's one I don't know how to answer. XD I'll try, though...))
Ellis's smile faltered. "He grew up," he answered after a moment, and took another step closer. He was only a few feet away now, and she was against the door. He smiled again, and it was dark. "Just like you should."
Ellis's smile faltered. "He grew up," he answered after a moment, and took another step closer. He was only a few feet away now, and she was against the door. He smiled again, and it was dark. "Just like you should."
((olo, me neither..she just asked, that's a good answer though))Shadow was frightened by his answer and his tone, not to mention the dark smile that now perched on his lips. "How do you figure that?" she asked him, voice strong despite her fear.
((Okay, cool. XD))
He laughed quietly and took another step towards her, raising a hand and touching her cheek, tenderly. The dark smile still tugged his lips up at the corners, and when he spoke it was quiet and velvety, and dangerous.
"Say, it's simple. You need to grow up and understand that, first of all, we do not mean you any harm if you don't resist us and join our cause, and secondly, that the boy doesn't matter. Unless he joins us, that is. You are so strong, Say, and you will be just as strong with us, or maybe even stronger... What do you say, Say?" As he spoke, he leaned closer, and lowered his voice, until it was almost a conspiratorial whisper.
He laughed quietly and took another step towards her, raising a hand and touching her cheek, tenderly. The dark smile still tugged his lips up at the corners, and when he spoke it was quiet and velvety, and dangerous.
"Say, it's simple. You need to grow up and understand that, first of all, we do not mean you any harm if you don't resist us and join our cause, and secondly, that the boy doesn't matter. Unless he joins us, that is. You are so strong, Say, and you will be just as strong with us, or maybe even stronger... What do you say, Say?" As he spoke, he leaned closer, and lowered his voice, until it was almost a conspiratorial whisper.
She pushed him away. "Never. And don't. Call.Me.Say." her voice was calm,calculated.
He laughed again, louder this time. "I could make you change your mind... Oh, and you don't want to push me again. It's not nice at all, to do that to your friend..."
"No you can't." she said harshly. "And-"
"And what? Hm, do you not think I'm your friend? No, maybe you're right... maybe I'm more." He smirked and pushed a bit of hair out of her face.
Her cheeks burned. "No, Ellis!" maybe before she would've wanted this, but not now. Not now that he was treating her this way.
His eyes hardened slightly, but the rest of his face softened, transforming. "Yes..." he whispered, leaning closer. "You want this... you don't care about that other boy anymore. You're too good for him."
Her mind gave in to his gift, his decieving words. "Ellis.." she started to object but it came too late.
He smiled slightly and stroked her cheek, leaning in closer and touching his lips to hers, surprisingly soft and gentle.
Salem closed her eyes,not pulling away from his touch. "Ellis."
He pulled away slightly. "Yes... Say?"
Shadow's expression darkened when he called her that. "No."
He sighed. "Yes, Salem..." his voice was almost stern, but still gentle.
((I'm going to have to go soon. My mother found another stray dog and she'll be taking him home soon.))
((I'm going to have to go soon. My mother found another stray dog and she'll be taking him home soon.))
((okipoki))"No," silver tears slid down her cheeks. "Please?"
His eyes softened, too, now. "Salem, do you know how beautiful you are? You shouldn't cry."
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Salem shook her head. Fine! If you must. Frig.