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message 4201: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean groaned. Sounds like we both lost our tempers. Jeez... What did Ellis say? Did you hear before that I punched him?


message 4202: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow thought back to their connversation. No. I don't remember.


message 4203: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah... He was saying that you were "unfortunate enough to love him" and that he hadn't done anything to you... And I punched him. Would've done more than that, but I think he made me think that I didn't want to. Ba*****...


message 4204: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She nodded,tears filling her eyes. He did. He stopped you Sean. Blocking him out for a moment, so her thoughts were private, she thought, and I'm glad he did.

Ellis enjoyed his job in the video room and really hoped he'd get to see something exciting.


message 4205: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean looked up at the video camera in the corner of the room. He closed his eyes and leaned his head back. I hate to admit it, even to myself, but... I'm scared. For you, and for myself. I've felt safe for so long with this job... then I meet you and I ruin everything, and I don't know what's going to happen...


message 4206: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She felt partly to blame. I'm sorry Sean. I shattered your safety. I'm so sorry.

Ellis wondered how long it would take Gwen to tell Jack that they should act quicker; he'd heard her arguing with someone only moments before and knew it wouldn't be long.


message 4207: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean shook his head. No! You didn't-- I'm glad I met you! It was what I'd always been waiting for. I don't know what I was planning to do when I found someone like me... It wasn't this; I never planned on kissing that person, but... I didn't know what I'd do. I assumed we'd try to escape together, but I didn't know how...




message 4208: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow shook her head,disturbing her silver curls. Don't blame yourself, I've learned it's worse than other things.

Gwen burst into Jack's office. "They are talking! You know it Jack, we can't let her go unpunished."


message 4209: by [deleted user] (new)

Jack looked up and nodded calmly. "Yes, I know... and she will be," he smiled darkly. "The new prisoner is awake... but part of the punishment will be them not knowing how long they have. They could have a few moments, or hours... and they don't know who will be punished, either. Trust me, darling, that will be torture enough for them."

Sean sighed. I don't know who to blame. Do you believe in Fate? I think it must be a cruel thing if it exists...

Two men entered Sean's cell and dragged him out. Two others did the same with Salem, and each ended up in a dark, dank smelling room together. The men laughed darkly as they threw the prisoners in, and one said, "The boss is deciding your punishment. You're to wait in here."



message 4210: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Gwen shook her head. "Maybe for him, but our daughter sees the future,Jack. She'll know and she'll tell him."

Shadow smiled serenely, even as she was thrown into the room. No. not Fate. But I believe in God and he is not cruel. There is a reason to this, a silver lining to this gray cloud.




message 4211: by [deleted user] (new)

Jack smirked a little. "Did I mention that I've discovered something that can take powers away? Only for a short time; I haven't developed it yet... but it is in that room with them. They'll both find their powers draining away as we speak."

((If that's okay...))




message 4212: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((that's fine, since it's temporary))

A smile tugged at Gwen's lips. "Great."

Ellis watched them through the camera.

Shadow sank against the stone.


message 4213: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay. Thought so. XD))

Jack chuckled.

Sean felt around and took Shadow's hand. "I can't hear you anymore!" he whispered to her.


message 4214: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((sorry..I'm cleaning too..))

"I can't hear anyone." Salem squeezed his hand. "I can't do anything anymore."

Ellis laughed. "Awesome!"


message 4215: by [deleted user] (new)

(('S okay. I was going to be on the phone, but I had to leave a message instead 'cause the person I was calling wasn't home.))

He shook his head and sighed. "I didn't know they could do that... This sucks." He thought to himself that this was the first time he had actually talked to Salem out loud.

Jack watched with satisfaction. "Perfect... It will wear off, though, very soon. We have a few hours, maybe less. It depends on how soon they begin to fight it, and how hard they can fight... but for now they are helpless."


message 4216: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ah, that sucks))

"I didn't know either. He must have filtered his thoughts well." Now that she heard his voice, she liked it. A lot. "Do you think it's something we could..you know suppress?"

Gwen nodded. "Maybe they won't think of it."






message 4217: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean shrugged and sighed. "I don't know anything about it. If we could find what was doing it... we could try to make it stop working. I don't know. For all we know it could be someone's power doing it..."

((I'm actually thinking that could be what it is. Like Rogue in X-Men, you know? Except the person doesn't have to touch his victims. And he kind of absorbs their powers, and drains the people of them for a while.))


message 4218: by [deleted user] (new)

Jack nodded at the camera. "They're smart," he admitted, "They're already guessing."


message 4219: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem mulled that thought over. "It could be. Dammit. That's not a good thing."

Gwen nodded. "We knew they'd guess."

Ellis hit the desk. "Frig, I was looking forward to more."


message 4220: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean bit his lip, shaking his head. "Well, what we do know is that they are very angry with us, and they want to 'punish us'. So... whatever we do, we need to try not to be all scared and panicked, because it's not going to help. We just need to stay calm and wait."

Jack shrugged. "Yes. But they can't do anything about it, anyway."


message 4221: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Fine. Calm." she chuckled. "That's nothing new, it's just really hard." Salem closed her eyes and leaned against the wall, tired as ever.

Gwen nodded again. "Right. For now."


message 4222: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean tried to see her in the dark. He sighed and put his arms around her in a hug. "Yeah... but it's easier with someone, right?"


message 4223: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Well that depends.." She tried to relax. Suddenly she stiffened in his arms. "There's someone in here."


message 4224: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 12, 2010 03:47PM) (new)

His head snapped up and he looked around. "Where?" he couldn't see anything in the pitch black.


message 4225: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I don't know where, I just..know." Shadow shook her head.


message 4226: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean let go of her and stood, offering her his hand.


message 4227: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem smiled but refused,standing on her own.


message 4228: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((gtg,might be on later))


message 4229: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean smiled a little and walked around the small room, keeping his hand on the wall, trying to find someone. He heard no footsteps, no breathing, but he went around the room, searching.


message 4230: by [deleted user] (new)

((D'you wanna be the person or should I?))


message 4231: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P ((Oh my good golly gosh! You guys were on there for like, five billion hours! Heehee!))
((What has happened? Pretend Lydia had went into a corner and meditated while this (whatever it was)was happening))
"I'm Alive!" Lydia excalimed after four hours of meditating.


message 4232: by [deleted user] (new)

((Well, they're in a different cell now. Kind of a dungeon-type place. They're in big trouble 'cause they kissed. XD))


message 4233: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P ((Ooh, romance! Ooh-la-la!))
"Where is everybody?" lydia asked herself, looking around.
Then she disapeared because there was a sale at Krispy-Kremes.



message 4234: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD It's a mess.))


message 4235: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P ((ah, shnieder!))


message 4236: by [deleted user] (new)

((See, there's this one guy who may or may not be sort of in love with Shadow, and he got mad when Sean kissed her, and he's one of the reasons she's in a cell. And her parents are keeping her prisoner, and they came to talk to her and then they tasered Sean and put him in a different cell, then they put them in a cell together and there's this other person who's taking their powers away, and they're going to be punished. *nods* It's a mess.))


message 4237: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P ((holy canolli!)) ((I don't really know how to add my character into this...))


message 4238: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yeah... It's crazy. I really don't know how to help you out. Ask Kenny.))


message 4239: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P ((okey-dokey))
((I gotsta go))


message 4240: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay, Bye!))


message 4241: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P ((Ta-ta))
((okay, I really hsve to go now))


message 4242: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Okay. Bye again. Good Night! Gute Nacht! Buenas Noches! Oidche Mhath!))


message 4243: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P ((is it nightime where you are? It's only like, 4:30 pm here!))


message 4244: by [deleted user] (new)

((It's 7:46 here.))


message 4245: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P ((ph my good golly gosh!))
((I just cahnged my picture, I think it's purdy cute!))


message 4246: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow mumbled something about 'idiotic losers with no life other than causing people discomfort'. She then started off for the centre of the room, figuring the person would be there.


message 4247: by [deleted user] (new)

((So... I'm thinking that the person is in sort of a safety glass room, separating him or her from Shadow and Sean. D'you think that works?))

Sean found no one, and no other doors or windows besides the one they had entered through, so he went to the center of the room, one hand in front of him in case there was something there.


message 4248: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*nods* ya, that works))

Once in where she thought was the centre, Shadow kept her arms held in front of her, bracing against any potential impact. Her fingers collided with cool glass.


message 4249: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay, cool.))

Sean touched glass, too, and he sighed. "Well, then. I'm afraid I don't have supernatural strength, so I'm not even going to try to get through this."


message 4250: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Well I did," Shadow joked. "But whoever is in there took it!"


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