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Clare wrote: "" I don't know, I can be invisible! Seems like anything could happen!" (( and besude, you're writing in itallics))"
((they are talking in their minds. olo she's just lying))
They won't blame you, she smiled. I saw who they blame.
"What the heck?! This is like, a prison?" she looked around at her surroundings ,"Oh my gawd, it like, is! ((right?))" she looked carefully at Emmy and Salem."What did you do to get put in here?" she started to back up, obviously a bit frightened.
((Lydia is kind of the ditzy charatcer in a book I'm writing... I use Lydia a lot in my writing, I like that name... but anywho, she's kind of ditzy and valley-girl-ish... so think of her talking in kind of a valley-girl-ish voice...))
((reminds me of my sister))Shadow grinned creepily. "You don't want to know."
((Yeah, sort of... I think. I'm not really sure.))
Sean nodded. "Yeah... those two are really dangerous; you should stay away. You might not believe it, but they could kill you easily."
He suppressed a smirk. Okay... who?
Sean nodded. "Yeah... those two are really dangerous; you should stay away. You might not believe it, but they could kill you easily."
He suppressed a smirk. Okay... who?
I don't know if you know him, his name is Caleb.
Doesn't ring a bell. No.
((I've gotta go to bed now. Bye!))
((I've gotta go to bed now. Bye!))
((lol))"Uh..." Lydia's happy tone faltered and you could see something flash in her eyes ," Uh, okay! Pretend I didn't ask."
((bye Squirrel))Shadow smiled. "Run along then."
Sean nodded. "Good idea. So, go on, shoo." He waved her away.
((XD Maybe a few more minutes, actually.))
((XD Maybe a few more minutes, actually.))
((okipoki))Shadow couldn't help but smile as she made a chair rise beside Lydia.
((sorry 'bout the break, had to see if AI was on!))"AH!" Lydia jumped, startled, but quickly composed herself, running her hand over her perfect hair.
"It's as if you like, want me to go!" she said naive-ly.
((AI as in Artificial Intelligence?))"Precisely," the chair bumped into her lightly.
((Lol, no AI as in American Idol))"What?! Yiu're not basking in my glorious prescense?!" she asked, dumbfounded. She moved her leg away from the chair and folded her arms across her chest.
She wasn't all beauty and NO brains, she could think, and remember. And she remembered very well.
((ah..lol I don't watch either of them..your AI because Simon is gone))She had to laugh,setting down the chair. "Well then, that's interesting. Conceited much?" her purple eyes flashed.
((simons not gone, he's leaving next year, Paula's gone, she's being replaced by Ellen DeGenerous, which is good because I didn't like Paula and Ellen is hilarious))"Yes, often." Lydia smirked. She pursed her lips and stuck her hand on her hip.
" I was once is a prison. Not IN in it, but visiting." she ran the hand that wasn't on her hip along the wall, the rough ((I hope the walls rough)) cement ((and cement)) wall prickled her fingers and brought back memories. Memories of her father... and Chase. ((I'm making this up as I go along, Lydia has a TOTALLY different thing going on in my other book))
((Ellen is way better than Paula.))((olo))
Shadow rolled her eyes. "I see."
((indeed (I had to take that word from Mallory/Skitts, it just seemed to fit) she is.))"No you don't! You don't see at all!" Lydia said turning to face Shadow full on. Her once naive eyes were now ablaze with anger.
((geez, I can't write tonight! I think I'm too tired.))
((I love that word))Shadow laughed. "Yes, I do. More than you know."
((it's a classic))Lydia glared at her ," So you CAN read minds?"
(indeed))"Yes. But I can also see the future..at times."
((olo))"Hmph." Lydia said, because she couldn't think of what to say.
((OK, I don't like Lydia.))
Then Lydia randomly left, never to return again *creepy piano music*
THEN.......
((uh... help me out here...)
((I don't know...))Clare sighed with Shadow.
Sean had been watching the girls, and after Lydia had disappeared he leaned against a wall and looked at Shadow. My shift is almost over, Shadow, so whatever you want to do... You should do it soon.
((One question: is he actually in the cell, or is it one of those cells that's guarded from the outside?))
((One question: is he actually in the cell, or is it one of those cells that's guarded from the outside?))
((This is the first time I'm actually looking at this topic, soo....))Veliana quietly watched the conversation through the looking glass.
The one her mother had given her.
She also heard the thoughts that flowed through the mortals' minds.
One of the advantages of having a looking glass
How strange?< /i> She thought.
Squirrelbellie wrote: "Sean had been watching the girls, and after Lydia had disappeared he leaned against a wall and looked at Shadow. My shift is almost over, Shadow, so whatever you want to do... You should do it soon..."((you can choose that))
Shadow nodded inconspicuously and suddenly everything was floating around,spinning wickedly.
((actually, here Lydia comes! *que super-hero music*))"Holy Canolli!' she exclaimed in surprise as a chair whizzed in front of her face just as she appeared.
"are we haveing a par-tay?" she started to dance around crazily. Because she felt like it.
((Okay, I'll have him be in the cell with her. 'Cause I want him to be. XD))
Sean smiled and waved at Lydia, shaking his head. There's one thing I want to do... I'm kind of afraid I might never see you again, unless I get stuck in a cell with you, and I don't think that'll really matter... He stepped towards Shadow and took her hands, leaning forward and asking her permission, with his eyes and in his thoughts.
Sean smiled and waved at Lydia, shaking his head. There's one thing I want to do... I'm kind of afraid I might never see you again, unless I get stuck in a cell with you, and I don't think that'll really matter... He stepped towards Shadow and took her hands, leaning forward and asking her permission, with his eyes and in his thoughts.
Shadow froze,chairs dropping to the floor with a loud crash.
Sean smiled slightly and touched his lips softly to hers, cupping her face in his hands.
Eventually she kissed him back,jsut enough to show him she wasn't disturbed by it.In the video room Ellis slammed his fists on the dash. "Dammit Salem!"
((NO BAD LANGUAGE ALLOWED!! =D))Lydia looked at the two lovebirds and rolled her eyes. She remembered having a boyfriend, it was fun, but eventually she got bored. It was much more fun to be single and fabulous.
"I should go." she muttered quietly, but she didn't move.
((that's not that bad..if I'm saying it..it isn't bad. olo. I'm not allowed to swear + I'm a Christian))Parker burst into the room and seperated Sean and Shadow roughly.
((olo. I'm not allowed to swear either.))((uh, am I missing something? Who is Parker? Is he...cute? Should Lydia be taking instest in him? I will wait to post something that Lydia does until I get an answer to that.))
((Parker is cute and he is bad))Shadow pulled her shoulder from his grasp and glared at him. "Parker, get a life."
Sean smiled just a little. "I don't think you'll need any more of a scene than that. Nice talking to you, Shadow." He didn't resist Parker, smirking a little. You should be gentle with her... I don't think you want either of us getting angry, he sent into Parker's mind.
Parker sshook his head. "That's not funny Salem." he thought it was her since he had no idea that Sean had that gift.Shadow laughed, "Oh but it is Parker..it is."
He pulled Sean out of the room, leaving the girls alone so he could scold Sean. "What were you thinking?"
Sean shrugged. "She's nice, she's pretty, and she's like me. I've been talking to her for a while now." He smirked.
"Sure. See, I've been working here for about three years, right? Long enough for no one to suspect anything. That was the point. I was waiting for a chance to meet someone like me. I can read minds, like Shadow, and talk in your thoughts if I want. By the way, can I meet Ellis? I want to slap him." Sean's eyes were full of anger suddenly.
"Not a smart move," Parker hissed,cuffing him. "But sure," his eyes sparkled with laughter. "I'm sure Ellis would love to meet the guy that kissed his girlfriend."
Sean blinked and froze. Shadow... does he really mean...? Why? Why didn't you tell me? Why'd you let me kiss you, if he... How can he be? You said that he- that he had you put here. That he turned you in. What is this?
"Why's she in a cell, if she's his girlfriend?" He said quietly. "She said he's a deceiver... is that it? Because I don't really think she minded..."
At least... I hope that's what it is... He thought.
"Why's she in a cell, if she's his girlfriend?" He said quietly. "She said he's a deceiver... is that it? Because I don't really think she minded..."
At least... I hope that's what it is... He thought.
Shadow put her hand against the wall. He's not my boyfriend. I swear it Sean: he's not. To herself she whispered, "But he thinks he is."Parker laughed. "She's in a cell because she's dangerous."
Sean glanced at Shadow through the window in the door, and nodded. I believe you.
He closed his eyes and sighed, then opened them again and glared at Parker. "She's a good person. She wouldn't hurt anyone... except maybe you."
He closed his eyes and sighed, then opened them again and glared at Parker. "She's a good person. She wouldn't hurt anyone... except maybe you."
Parker chuckled. "She hasn't yet." he pulled Sean down the hall and into the video room. "As promised."Ellis came over to him,staring at Sean,shorter by a few inches. "Why?"
((Which one's shorter? I'm confused.))
Sean shook his head. "Because she needs someone who can take better care of her than you. She's told me about you. You're the reason she's imprisoned. And she sometimes wishes she could kill you, because you've betrayed her. She hates you." And I hate you, too, He sent.
Sean shook his head. "Because she needs someone who can take better care of her than you. She's told me about you. You're the reason she's imprisoned. And she sometimes wishes she could kill you, because you've betrayed her. She hates you." And I hate you, too, He sent.
((Ellis is shorter))He shook his head, red tinted bronze spikes glinting in the light. "No. She doesn't hate me." Ellis grinned. "Salem can't hate. She isn't like that."
((Okay. XD))
Sean glared at him. "You betrayed her! You're right; she can't hate you, because you used to be her friend. How could you? How could you do that to her?"
Sean glared at him. "You betrayed her! You're right; she can't hate you, because you used to be her friend. How could you? How could you do that to her?"
"Do what?" he feigned innocence. "It's not my fault, she's just unfortunate enough to love me."
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Okay, good. It's not so good, though, that this place has video cameras and that they're probably going to blame me for her getting in. Whoever she is, she shouldn't be here.