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message 351: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments ((can I just jump in?))


message 352: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((yeah))


message 353: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen looked behind her and screamed as she ran away, but than stopped short, turned back around, and just looked at the man that had come up behind her.


message 354: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments "Hey," Ryder said, running a finger through his golden hair. "Chill."



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"Sorry, I thought you were someone else," Gwen said embarrassed and a little scared due to the fact that she just risked her life because she thought she saw someone who had been dead for two months.


message 356: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife saw her talking to the man and shrugged turning back to the battle. Ducking a claw as he did so.
"Why are there so many?" Emmy said frustrated
"Got me, Just kill them," Patrik replied drowing on as he stood.


message 357: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments Ryder's jaw dropped. "Kill who?"
Morgan laughed, tossing her long black hair over a shoulder. "Not us. They could never kill us."


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Gwen moved to where she could still keep an eye on the strange man while watching the battle.


message 359: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments Ryder sidled up to Gwen and threw a friendly arm around her shoulders. "Hey," he said, shooting her his most charming grin. "I don't think I've properly introduced myself."
"Oh please," Morgan said, rolling her eyes.
"I'm Ryder Roderick," he said, staring deeply into Gwen's eyes. "And this is my girlfriend, Morgan McAllister."
"Way to crush the poor girl's fragile hopes," Morgan said, absently toying with the sleeve of Ryder's shirt.
"That's my MO," Ryder told her. "Crushing the hopes of poor little girls."
Morgan smiled. "Crush my hopes and I crush you."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments (( Morgan,Ryder!! lol))
Emmy smiled as teh last of The Shadows dropped to teh ground, burnt to a crisp, the gloow from her tattoo's dying down. Patrik straightened up running a hand through his hair, his eyes swirling back to their normal color. Liv laughed and skidded to a stop next to Rife who was grinning and fist pounded her. Then the Lyrs walked back to Gwen and the two new people were standing.


message 361: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 11, 2009 01:34PM) (new)

"Well, excuse me," Gwen said picking up Ryders arm and moving it off her shoulder, "But my dreams aren't crushed and they have nothing to do with you, but I commend you for trying." She finished with a little smile. "And the names Gwen, not 'poor little girl.'"


message 362: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments ((What's funny about Mo and Ryder?))

Ryder shrugged. "Whatever you say. How old are you?"
Morgan laughed and gave Gwen a scornful look. "And what is your power?"


message 363: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife laughed a little at her out right rejection of him. Emmy smirked at Patrik who grinned at her. Liv chuckled at him.
"Can we help you?" Emmy asked stepping forward


message 364: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((they just are funny.... *shrugs*))


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"18, and why does everyone always ask me that," Gwen said exasperated. "Do I look like I have powers, but I do, although I don't call it a 'power,' I call it a gift. I can persuede people."


message 366: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments ((Huh. They aren't trying to be))

Ryder snorted derisively. "I wasn't coming onto her. First off, she's what? Twelve? I'm not a cradle-robber. Secondly, I'm practically engaged."
Morgan's smoky eyes went wide. "You are?" she squeaked. "That's news to me."



message 367: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "We ask so we know if we should kill you or not," Rife said,smirking he shruged
"True," Liv said pointing at him.


message 368: by [deleted user] (new)

"Hello, I'm right here, and I already said I'm 18, an adult, unless your self-centered mind can't process that," Gwen said indignant.


message 369: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Go Gwen," Liv said smiling moving to fist pound her.


message 370: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments "You couldn't kill us even if we had both hands tied behind our backs," Morgan said loftily.
"You persuade people?" mocked Ryder. "Really? Well, little girl, guess what. I incinerate people."


message 371: by Hannah (last edited Aug 11, 2009 01:49PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy stepped up to him and said mecnecingly "Well so do I,"


message 372: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen blushed a little, she hardly ever lost her temper, but this guy just irriated her.


message 373: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments Rose and Lilly were hidden in the shadows. They were not going to get caught up in this.


message 374: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments Morgan, whose control of shadows bordered on frightening, drew the shadows away from Rose and Lilly, knotting them into a ball that floated at her side.


message 375: by Catie (last edited Aug 11, 2009 03:22PM) (new)

Catie  | 243 comments Rose and Lilly froze as they were exposed to everyone.


message 376: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik laughed as teh twins floated over, "Well thats where you went,"
Then he added to Morgan "Very cool power,"


message 377: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments They glared at Morgan.


message 378: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy laughed out loud at their expression.


message 379: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments The looked at Emy suprised.


message 380: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments Morgan smirked, practically radiating smugness.


message 381: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What?" Emmy asked the girls


message 382: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments They stuck their tounges out at her. Glared once more and then walked away from Morgan.


message 383: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments Morgan rolled her eyes. "Children," she said to Ryder.


message 384: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy shrugged and turned back to Morgan
"I'm Emmy, that's Patrik, Rife and Liv" She pointed at each of them in turn.


message 385: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments "Pleasure," Morgan said, not all too sincerely.



message 386: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments "We're six." they said "We are not children."


message 387: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments "Six?!?!" Morgan said, squealing with laughter. "SIX?!?!?!"
Ryder, also laughing, managed to get out, "You aren't even into the double digits!"
"Go back to daycare," Morgan said, kneeling to their level. "Didn't you ever hear about what happens to pups who try to run with the big dogs?"


message 388: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments "Did you ever hear what happens to the older kids when they pick on the younger ones?" they asked "They got burned." Then they shot out a fireball at them.


message 389: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments Morgan deflected the fireball by constructing a shield of shadow. The fireball was whizzing back at the obnoxious six-year-olds when it was joined by three others, all very large and crackling menacingly, care of Ryder Roderick.


message 390: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments They put op a shield of ice deflecting and stoping the fireballs. Then they closed their hands around each others and opened them. Out came a panther snarling.


message 391: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 11, 2009 04:23PM) (new)

Gwen, very carefully, walked toward them. "Ok guys, lets not fight. Just settle down and we can work things out." She already knew she couldn't pursuede Rose and Lilly, so she decided to try Morgan and that jerk whom she didn't care to remember his name. Her blue eyes stred into theirs, glowing intensely


message 392: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Gwen leave it," Rife said watching


message 393: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments They glanced at Gwen. Then they claped their hands and the panther fell to a pile of vines.


message 394: by Hannah (last edited Aug 11, 2009 04:16PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife gathered teh vines together with a filck of his finger and sent them into the ground.
"Well I'm bored," Emmy said "Now if you wouldn't mind don't talk to us again," She turned and led the Lyrs away from Morgan and Ryder


message 395: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments The twins both gave the other rassberries and followed.


message 396: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv gave a high five to the girls, laughing like crazy.


message 397: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments They returned the high fives beaming as they did so.


message 398: by [deleted user] (new)

"Fine," Gwen said and walked over to Rife. "Let's go." She glared at Ryder.



message 399: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments Morgan sighed, rolled her eyes, and said, "Well, I'm off to the GTKYC game. They like me over there."


message 400: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments ((GtG))



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