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message 3301: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments So those ones don't work on you, that's insanely good..unfortunately, they work on me..most of the time. I think the song helped me out but I don't plan on singing it again anytime soon. I lost myself.


message 3302: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik nodded Yeah I know, and don't loose your self. It will never end up good. His eyes flicked to Emmy


message 3303: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I'll try my best, Captain.

the vans slowed to a stop and in no time the doors were opened.


message 3304: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik smiled and didn't struggle.


message 3305: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis still had the baby: Micah didn't trust him with Salem.

Parker,now awake, grabbed Emmy.

Shadow took a deep breath and opened her eyes to the already dimming light.


message 3306: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik would ahve loved to kill Parker, and was now upset he hadn't when he had the chance.




message 3307: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((hehe))

Someone grabbed Shadow, but she couldn't tell who.

They were all taken towards the doors and inside.


message 3308: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy had fallen asleep on the car ride over.

Patrik was led through the doors first.


message 3309: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Parker set Emmy down on a bench in one of the white and glass interrogation rooms.


message 3310: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik was thrown in the same room as Emmy.

Liv and blaze were in the next room.

Salem and Teeghan Were in the last one with Avery.

Kher had it all planned out.


message 3311: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((evil Kher!))

Shadow rubbed her forehead. "Hey Tee, you aware?"

((would she be?))


message 3312: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yup. Kher is vry evil...))

Patrik went to Emmy. Shaking her awake. Her eyes opened reveiling the silver rimmed black.
"Hey," He said quietly.

Liv shook her head and looked at Blaze.


message 3313: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((hehe I like her so much better like this))

Blaze smiled, but it didn't reach his eyes.


Teeghan looked at her sharply, "Yes, pass me Avery please?" Shadow did and then searched people's thoughts.

"Frig"


message 3314: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv couldn't even bring herself to smile. She crawled over to him and layed down putting her head in his lap.

Emmy sat up. "What happened?"
Patrik started to tell her.

Kher smiled


message 3315: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments HE stroked her hair,the smile gone.

"Frig,frig,frig!" she knew Kher was enjoying all of this.


message 3316: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv just layed there, quiet.

Emmy's eyes were wide by the end of the story.

Kher laughed


message 3317: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "We'll..live at least.."he whispered mostly to himself.

Shadow sent a thought to Kher. We may have been friends before..but I hate you. she knew it was childish.


message 3318: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv nodded hearing every word.

Hate is good. It's gives you strength. You're going to need it here.


message 3319: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He leaned down and kissed her forehead.

Shadow looked up and around the room, through the glass, searching the faces who stood around seemingly doing nothing. It's not that kind of hate Kher, it's not the type you have. It's more like pity. She grinned at her lie, knowing that it was useless, though she did feel pity, to blame it all on that when there was so much anger.


message 3320: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis was watching the rooms from the surveillance booth.


message 3321: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv kissed him back. She was somewhat glad he was here with her.

Emmy sat down and rested her head in her hands. Patrik sat behind her.

Kher scoffed Pity is it? I can smell the anger pouring off of you.


message 3322: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He smiled sadly again, but the love was there.

Well then, she smiled ruefully. I'm not a Deciever Kher, but at least I wasn't lying anyway. There is some...however small the portion. There was one thing she was dying to ask, but she decided to wait for Kherington's next reaction first.


message 3323: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Pity me all you want. It's not going to do much here. Kher purred. Which was odd but if she could have her thoughts purr, she did.

Liv tried to smile, but it was wrong and wasn't worth the effort.


message 3324: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I like that, she purred. olo))

Blaze swept his fingers over her face. "You don't have to smile for me."

Good enough. She thought to herself before sending another question to Kher. Where is Hunter?


message 3325: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol its visual but awkward...))

Liv nodded and placed a hand on his face. The touch was intamate, meaningful to her.

Around. He should be here soon.


message 3326: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yeah, sf))

He closed his vibrant eyes and breathed in.

Tell him he won't win. Shadow thought violently.


message 3327: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Seh went to drop her hand.

He doesn't have to.


message 3328: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze caught her hand and held it to his face for a moment longer.

What do you mean? A little of the angry strength was gone with her inquiry.


message 3329: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv kept her hand there. She was content with the quiet.

Exactly what I said.


message 3330: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments A song popped into his head, but he didn't sing it of course, he just prolonged the moment with Liv.

Shadow stood,placing her hands on her hips. Don't try to be smart Kher, just tell me, or I'll found out from someone else anyway.


message 3331: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv smiled a little, closing her eyes.

Kher wasn't lisening anymore.


message 3332: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He sighed,letting go quickly as if someone had jsut shouted at him to. ((only way I could explain it))

Shadow punched the wall,cracjing the glass but not shattering it.

Teeghan looked at her in awe. "Dude, that was cool, but be careful around the baby."

She just nodded. "She's not listening to me anymore."


message 3333: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv stood suddenly. She started pacing the room like the caged animal she was.

Emmy looked up hearing the glass crack. "That's a good idea." She stood and placed a hand on the glass.
Patrik stood understanding.

Kher smiled. This was exactly what she wanted.


message 3334: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Liv?"

She tried talking to Kher again, but she didn't get two words in before her anger erupted and she attacked the wall again, harder this time, the force shattering the entire pane of glass.


message 3335: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yea?"

Emmy heated the pane of glass causing it to explode. There was a room with a locked door on the other side. Patrik froze and broke the lock.


message 3336: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Just wanted to know what was going on.."

Shadow pulled Teeghan into the short hallway leading to a small,dark room. "Tee, make it really loud in here, but not for us..there are cameras."

Teeghan grinned. "If you tell me what's going on I can do better than that."

Shadow told her where she saw Patrik and Emmy ending up and Teeghan sped up their time to get them there as well.


message 3337: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Blaze I'd move." Liv said facing the wall.

Emmy and Patrik grinned at them.


message 3338: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze moved away from his spot.

"Well we've gotten this far, but it might be something they anticipated.."


message 3339: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv blew the wall out. Like the entire wall, she walked through it and went to Emmy and Patrik.
"Hey," she nodded


message 3340: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze came a second later. "Nice job." he said.

Shadow searched for the thoughts of TORCH's members.


message 3341: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Thank you." Liv smiled. For real this time.


message 3342: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He grinned at her.

"I found some," she whispered, having found Hunter and Parker's thoughts.


message 3343: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Let's go," Emmy said grinning darkly.


message 3344: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Alright."


message 3345: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((sorry guys. I'm goign to have to leave this rp. I can't keep up with you guys.))


message 3346: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Lead the way Salem." Emmy said

"Well, she wont have to" Parker said from behind them.

((:[ ok.))


message 3347: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Stephanie wrote: "((sorry guys. I'm goign to have to leave this rp. I can't keep up with you guys.))"

((sorry))


message 3348: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shades of Grey wrote: ""Lead the way Salem." Emmy said

"Well, she wont have to" Parker said from behind them.

((:[ ok.))"


Shadow turned around. "Frig!" she hadn't seen him coming, nor noticed a change in his thoughts. "How did you-?"


message 3349: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((it's okay))


message 3350: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Easy," Parker smiled and held up one of their weird weapons. Ellis and Hunter filed in.

Emmy closed her eyes and a wall of fire sprang to life.


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