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message 3201: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv just spread the winds in every direction trying to cover as much ground as possible.


message 3202: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Limerick laughed and walked over to Teeghan. "Hey babe."

Ellis strayed as far as he could from Shadow without getting in trouble. He approached Emmy.


message 3203: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kherington laughed from behind Liv and grabbed her. Making her freakishly calm in a second.

Emmy looked at Ellis. "You must have a death wish." She laughed


message 3204: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze kicked Kensington's twin (Kherington) in the back.

"Not at all miss." he said smoothly,deceivingly. "You really shouldn't think that way."

Shadow glared at Ellis and was extremely glad no one had noticed her yet.

Limerick and Teeghan were arguing.

Parker tackled Patrik.


message 3205: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy threw some fire at Ellis.

Liv sagged and couldn't do anything.


Patrik rolled over, now on top of Parker and punched him in the ribs.

Hunter found Shadow "Hello,"


message 3206: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis dodged it and laughed. "Emmy right?"


Blaze continued attcking Kherington.

Parker took in a ragged breath and shifted into a cougar, easily fighting Patrik off him.

Shadow jumped. "Hunter.."


message 3207: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy growled like a caged animal. She tackled him sending him to the ground.

Liv was now a non-issuse and Kherington had moved out of the clearing.

"This is bad." Patrik muttered and dodged Parker's attacks. He created his ice sword again and went to strike him with it.


message 3208: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis laughed and put on his voice again. "Emmy dearest, this is not the way to greet a friend."

Blaze was so mad.

Parker shifted into a polar bear,biting the sword.

Shadow glared at Hunter. "I'll kill you if you try anything."


message 3209: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Oh my god! SHUT UP!" Emmy punched him in the face.

Patrik circled Parker in a sphere of water.

Hunter smiled sweetly. "I'm sure you will."


message 3210: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis did shut up, for liek two seconds. He grabbed her wrist and spoke to her in a heavier tone.

Parker laughed in a growly way.

She pulled the baby closer,not speaking,just glaring at him with death in ehr eyes.


message 3211: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked at him. "Shadows protect me. Your gifts won't work." Emmy heated up her body.

Patrik froze it.

Hunter took a step closer to them.


message 3212: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He jumped back.

Parker ...

She stepped back. "Don't." she said harshly.


message 3213: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy laughed "What do you have to say now?" Her eyes changed as did her tattoos.

Patrik couldn't keep it frozen and the water crashed and flodded the ground.

Hunter stopped advancing. and looked crookedly at her.


message 3214: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Not much, let's hope Salem doesn't see any of this fight."

Parker laughed.

"What?" she was actually surprised at him listening to her. Avery cried. "Frig." she stopped paying attention to Hunter, trying to calm the wailing child.


message 3215: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah sure," Emmy lunged at him again.

Patrik smiled and took control of the water that was in Parker's body. He smashed him into a tree.

Hunter advanced the rest of the way.


message 3216: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis jumped away nimbly.

Parker grunted.

Shadow bounced the baby, not noticing Hunter with her focus.


message 3217: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy stood still, she smiled darkly and raised her arms. A ring of fire errupted around them. "Have fun,"

Patrik smirked.

Hunter grabbed Shadow's arm and called for Kherington. She placed a hand on Avery and Shadow. They both calmed instantly. They left leaving Parker and Ellis with their respective battles.


message 3218: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis grinned, "I will."

Lilac was in the circle too,sneaky little bum that she was. She grinned at her older brother, "I got your back El."

Parker shifted into a bird, pulling out of it and then shifting into a tiger and pouncing at him.

Shadow's mind was aware of it but she had no control over her body whatsoever. Kherington, why the hell would you switch sides? she asked the older girl through her thoughts.


message 3219: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy smirked "Perfect two birds one firey stone,"

Patrik rolled away and jumped up trying to manipulate his body again.

Easy, power sweetie. I don't have to live in fear anymore.


message 3220: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "As if," Lilac said,bringing fire to her hands,bringing it to her face and blowing it at Emmy.

Parker noticed and kept shifting over and over so it would be hard to nail down his mass.

Shadow just wanted control back. Please Kherington, you know this isn't fair..


message 3221: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy caught it and vhanged the color and consistancy. If she could just put her hands on them when they were using their powers. Emmy threw her own fire back at them.

Patrik half gave up and tried to figure out a way to win.

It doesn't have to be fair. It just is. She almost sounded sad at that fact.


message 3222: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Lilac hit it with a spray of water,laughing and enjoying her first real fight.

Parker was laughing.

You don't have to be like this..even if you didn't have control, you guys have weapons, and don't lie, I saw them. Let me fight.


message 3223: by Hannah (last edited Jan 24, 2010 06:19PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments The fire didn't go out. It just heated up more. Emmy's eyes went silver as her tattoos glowed as black as the fire she was playing with.

Patrik smiled suddenly. He focused and lowered Parkers body heat considerably.

Fight for what? This? She flashed pictures of a bloddy Blaze, an unconsious Liv, Emmy fighting, her pure silver eyes and glowing tattoos, Patrik loosing his battle, and Teeghan with Liv and Blaze. There is nothing left for you to fight for. Emmy is about to be lost forever anyways.


message 3224: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Lilac's smile slipped and she threw fire at the ball of fire.

Patrik shivered uncontrollably and accidentally shifted back into human form.

Despite Kherington's skill, Shadow freaked out, her mind overcoming the sense of calm for a moment. "Liar!"


message 3225: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy laughed darkly. Her smallest movements sent the fire where she wanted it to go. The fire moved at Ellis and Lilac.

Patrik left him like that concentrating on him needing to sleep. If he got cold enough he would inevitably sleep.

"No I'm not. Look." Kherington said smoothly spinning her around. Showing her Emmy and Patrik.

((Loosing Emmy isn't in my plans... crap!!!)))


message 3226: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Lilac kept tossing fire and water.

Parker's body relaxed and he was no longer conscious.

"Emmy's winning." Shadow said,confused.

((olo, you don't have to!))


message 3227: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Lol she going to loose to herself. live when she spazzes. Patrik is almost done anyways... hehehe PLAN!!))
The fire Emmy was controling didn't falter. It kept chasing after Lilac and Ellis.

Patrik made sure then spun to see Emmy in all her Fire-Shadow glory. "Oh shit." He swore he was almost too late.

"It may look that way to you. But she is in all actuality, loosing. To herself as a matter of fact. Look at Patrik, he understands the severity of this. You see those tattoos that cover her right arm?"

((THis is going to be a long-ish story...))


message 3228: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((PLANS ROCK..when they aren't mine..ahahaha))

Lilac pulled Ellis through the ring, protected by her own fire, but not for long.

Shadow nodded. "You.Won't.Win."


message 3229: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy expanded her own ring. "I'm not done yet." She growled.

Patrik went to the edge "Emmy!" He yelled but his voice was lost.

"We won't have to. She will do that much for us. THose tattoos on her arm cover the majority of her body.They twist around her arm and splash onto her back. Then there is another set that covers her stomach and down her left leg. Those aren't there because she put them there. She was born with them, her mother, she was a test subject. The only one that lived. Emmy has Shadow in her and when she goes deep enough into her gift she can unleash the entierity of her gifts."


message 3230: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Lilac glared at her fearfully. "Well I am!"

"How do you know all of this Kher?"Shadow asked her, having broken through Kherington's power.


message 3231: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I don't think that matters." Emmy said silkenly.

"I watched most of it." Kher said smoothly. "She is their greatest fear. She will be the one to rule her world. She just needs to access her full gift. And Patrik holding her back isn't helping. She needs to do this, if he stands in the way he will be killed."


message 3232: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Lilac was about to cry: something she never did.

"No!" Shadow said, using her gift to uprrot a tree and throw it at Kher.




message 3233: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy laughed. It was scary laugh, not like she normally sounded. Her eyes were completely silver and the fire danced around her, perfectly content to do anything she sked of it.

Patrik stood still watching her.

Kher dodged the tree and looked at her "Watch. Shadow, she will come back to herself."


message 3234: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Lilic peered up at the girl with terror in her otherwises evil eyes.

Ellis was confuzzled.

Parker was unconscious.

Shadow calmed slightly and nuzzled Avery to her cheek ignoring the weapons and most of all:Hunter.


message 3235: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy's fire surged in heat and size, moving towards Lilac.

Kher looked at Emmy. Her gaze interested.


message 3236: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Lilac screeched and backed up towards Ellis. He smiled sweetly, "Lilac,go closer." she listened to him.

Shadow tried to ignore the screams.


message 3237: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy's eyes flicked to Ellis. "She's your sister. You won't take the fall for her even now?"

Kher looked up. "Shadow, pay attention."


message 3238: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Never, she's evil to the core." it was just a part of his plan.

"No."


message 3239: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "As are you." Emmy stated the fire around her expanding and contracting.

"Fine. But I would tell Patrik to move."


message 3240: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Not true." he said. "Even ask Salem.."

Shadow looked up quickly. "Patrik! MOVE!"


message 3241: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy laughed and hurled a fireball at him.

Patrik looked up at the sound of her voice and did as he was told. He ran to her
"What happened?"

Kher smiled darkly.


message 3242: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis moved out of the way.

"Them," she said harshly. "She's essing with my emotions,frig. and she said you'd need to move..or you'd get hurt." Frig


message 3243: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy watched him and tilted her head her copper hair reflecting the light of the fire.

"Damn, whats wrong with Emmy?"


message 3244: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow shook her hair out of her face for the third time in a row. "She said something about 'unleashing her full power', or something like that. Damn I can't think straight right now."


message 3245: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "WHAT?!" Patrik yelled

Emmy continued to attack Ellis and Lilac.

Kher stopped the waves of emmotions she was sending at Shadow.


message 3246: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow flinched back, "It's just what she said, dont kill me."

Lilac wasn't really in a trance, but she was trying to figure out a way out of the circle.


message 3247: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I wouldn't do that." Patrik said as he started pacing. "Tell me what she said. Please."

Emmy looked at her "You can't leave unless I'm done with you."


message 3248: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow nodded. "Okay, so this is what she said, word for word..'She is their greatest fear. She will be the one to rule her world. She just needs to access her full gift. And Patrik holding her back isn't helping. She needs to do this, if he stands in the way he will be killed.'."

Lilac looked up,tears in her eyes. "Please..I'm only 13."


message 3249: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik's eyes widened

Emmy smiled viciously.


message 3250: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What does that mean Patrik?" Avery cooed and Shadow looked down,smiling at the baby.

Lilac sat on the ground,giving up.


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