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message 2901: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv looked at the ground. "YOu wanna go for a walk?"

Emmy looked at the baby.


message 2902: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yeah sure," he said," Walking is my specialty."

Teeghan started crying, frustrated. "I can't make her stop!"

A shadow of a grin swept over Salem's face as she stood, walking in the other direction.


message 2903: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Alright. Come on." Liv said

"Can I try?" Patrik asked holding out his hands.


message 2904: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze followed her happily.

Teeghan nodded and handed Avery to him gently.


message 2905: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik held Avery gently and started to rock her. She quieted slightly,

Liv smiled as she walked next tto him.


message 2906: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Avery's eyes flicked,unfocussed,around the room as she slowly stopped crying.

Blaze was tempted to grab her hand but did not do so.

((kay,now I gtg, be back))


message 2907: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok see ya))
Patrik smiled and walked in a small line.

Liv smiled and spun walking backwards infront of him.


message 2908: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I'm back))

Avery cooed.


Blaze smiled at her,teeth sparkling. "So, where to?"


message 2909: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((hey))

"I don't know. You can decide" Liv smield at him.

Emmy smiled as did Patrik.


message 2910: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*smiles*))

"Hmm, so we've been to the lake.."

Teeghan laid back on the pillow and fell asleep.

Shadow stood ten feet from Patrik and Emmy, watching as Avery gripped her tiny fingers on his shirt.


message 2911: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((this is so cute))

"Mhmm," Liv mused

Patrik started bouncing her up and down.


message 2912: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Do you want to go there again?"

The motion was soothing and the tiny child's eyes soon slipped closed again, her little fingers not losing an ounce of grip.


message 2913: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Sure. It's always nice there." Liv said still walking backward.

Patrik smiled and kept bouncing.


message 2914: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Got it..I think I know the way." Blaze mused out loud.

Avery's features seemed to glow.

Shadow looked away, upset, and stalked off to the back of the warehouse.


message 2915: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Alright," Liv smiled

Emmy went and sat down leaving Patrik with the baby.


message 2916: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He stepped quicker and dodged a few trees.

"Emmy?" Shadow asked,stopping aand looking over her shoulder.


message 2917: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv followed him easily.

"Yes?" Emmy replied standing up.


message 2918: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Can we..talk?"

Blaze chuckled as he zig-zagged.


message 2919: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Of course." Emmy said loking at her. "What's up?"

Liv laugehd when she got infront of him.


message 2920: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Not here."

"Hey! I'm trying to see if I can remember!" he protested playfully.


message 2921: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Alright. Lets go for a walk. Just hang on." She went over and kissed Patrik after she told him. She walked back over to Salem "Let's go."

Liv laughed "I could always show you."


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) "Okay, Shea not that far." He pointed to a hill a little ways away.


message 2923: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shea nodded and continued.


message 2924: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shades of Grey wrote: ""Alright. Lets go for a walk. Just hang on." She went over and kissed Patrik after she told him. She walked back over to Salem "Let's go."

Liv laughed "I could always show you.""


Shadow nodded and walked to the back,exiting through the back door and holding it for Emmy.

Blaze shook his head. "I want to see if I can do it." he ran ahead, looking at the ground.


message 2925: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy followed

"Alright," Liv smiled following


message 2926: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "We might as well just talk here.." she mutterede to herself,closing the door behind Emmy.

Blaze looked up breifly,catching a scent of water, he went that way.


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) When Drake got to the hill he lifted a rock that led to a tunnel, "In here."


message 2928: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: "When Drake got to the hill he lifted a rock that led to a tunnel, "In here.""

She raised her eyebrows, "Okay." Shea entered.


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) There were cave paintings on the wall. "This is the history of shadows," One painting was of a shadow possesing a human and making it attack itself.


message 2930: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " "We might as well just talk here.." she mutterede to herself,closing the door behind Emmy.

Blaze looked up breifly,catching a scent of water, he went that way."


"Alright" Emmy said "What's up?" she asked

Liv followed him knowing he was going the right way.


message 2931: by Ky (last edited Jan 23, 2010 11:14AM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: "There were cave paintings on the wall. "This is the history of shadows," One painting was of a shadow possesing a human and making it attack itself."

Shea ran her fingers along the paintings, understanding some but not others and lingering on the darkest ones.


message 2932: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shades of Grey wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " "We might as well just talk here.." she mutterede to herself,closing the door behind Emmy.

Blaze looked up breifly,catching a scent of water, he went t..."


"I..think I need to apologize for what just happened.."

"We're close right?" he kept going.


message 2933: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What? No you don't" Emmy said shaking her head.

"Yeah we are," Liv said smiling


message 2934: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Her eyes glistened. "Yes. I don't know what that was about but it wasn't..right.


"Good!" Blaze ran off.


message 2935: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "It... i don't know what that was about. I.." Emmy said.

Liv laughed and chased after him.


message 2936: by I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (last edited Jan 23, 2010 11:15AM) (new)

I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) Drake looked around and was really attached by the vampire and a shadow.


message 2937: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow ran her hands through her silver and aquamarine hair. "It's not your fault," she said almost harshly.

Blaze stopped at the edge of teh trees, still amazed by the beauty of the lake.


message 2938: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: "Drake looked around and was really attached by the vampire and a shadow."

Shea followed his gaze and squinted at the picture,amazed.


message 2939: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "It's not like its yours either." Emmy said

Liv skidded to a halt. "Its always beautiful."


message 2940: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It's more mine than yours Emmy.."

"Everytime." But not as beautiful as you..


message 2941: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "That may be true but it couldnt' be helped. You shouldn't worry about it." Emmy said looking at her

Liv smiled and started walking on the edge of the lake.


message 2942: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I can't help it," her hands dropped to her side again as she procaimed it. Shadow's eyes were stormy again.

Blaze did as well.




message 2943: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I know." Emmy said sencerely

Liv turned to face him and walked backwards again. She smiled and ran a hand through her blonde hair.


message 2944: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow's fists clenched without permission and she glanced at Emmy with fear in her eyes. "I should go."


"Well don't fall in.." he said, entranced by her beauty.


message 2945: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You don't have to." Emmy said

"i won't I know you wouldn't let me," She smiled at him


message 2946: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I need to..this won't turn out well," her smile was grim. "I'll come back."

He grinned. "Ah, but I might.."


message 2947: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I should hope so," Emmy said nodding

Liv stopped and grinned "You would?" she laughed


message 2948: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She was confused. "Why?"

"Maybe." he chuckled.


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) Drake saw that Shea had followed his gaze. He looked at some paintings of shadow fighting stances, "There are tons of caves like this."


message 2950: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You shouldn't leave because of what happened here today." Emmy said

Liv laughed "If I fall in you are going down with me."


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