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Jan 22, 2010 06:52PM
"You want me to wake up Patrik?" Liv asked not having the slightest idea what to do.
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Teeghan bent over as another pain attacked her.Shadow gasped, having seen what was going to happen. "You better wake him."
"Ok," Liv went to get PatrikShe came back seconds later with Patrik and Emmy in tow.
"What's wrong teeghan?" Patrik asked
Se couldn't breathe well enough to tell him so Shadow walked over cautiously. "It's the baby."
Patrik patted the ground next to him to get Shea to sit down. Patrik brought some water to his hands and placed them on Teeghan's stomach. "What's wrong with it Salem?"
"It's..well..it's coming. I don't know why, all I know is something went wrong and the baby is coming- now.""But it's early..isn't it?" Shea asked, utterly confused.
Blaze stood beside Liv.
Liv looked up at him and stood up crossing her arms.Patrik looked down and said "Yes almost three months early. Well we're gonna need to move her so we all aren't in a corner. Liv you and Blaze want to find a spot where we can put her down and put some pillows and blankets down?"
Liv nodded and started moving.
Blaze followed, veering off when he saw blankets. "Get pillows Liv, I've got blankets!"Shadow paced, hoping for better news then the first time.
Shea felt useless as Teeghan screamed in pain.
Liv rushed to get the pillows. She called out to Blaze when she found a smooth-ish space for teeghan.Patrik looked at Teeghan "Breath." He put a hand under her and picked her up.
Blaze carried a bunch of blankets over and spread them on the ground.She tried her hardest,managing a few ragged breaths.
Shea watched Shadow pace; it seemed the most normal thing in the room, almost calm and definately silent. Either the silver haired girl had no heart or just plain did well under pressure.
Patrik set her on the ground.Patrik put his hands on her stomach an dtried to lessen the pain some. Liv stepped back not wanting to get in the way.
It worked,just enough for her to breathe and the future to change.Shadow stopped pacing, no more gentle footsteps echoing off the walls. "Oh good!"
Liv's head whipped to look at her "What?" Patrik was busy concentrating on managing Teeghan's pain to notice. Emmy put a hand on his shoulder and lent him some of her strength.
"The baby lives...as of now. Thanks Patrik."Shea glanced once or twice at every seperate scene, Shadow- no longer pacing, Patrik and Emmy-concentrated, Liv- concerned, and Blaze most likely feeling as odd as she did, perhaps more becuase he is male.
Patrik nodded and kept his focus. Liv looked at Blaze and smiled gently.
Blaze did the same, mood lightened a bit with the news.Shadow went back to walking, no longer pacing..not exactly. Instead she walked quietly up and down the rows of shelves, in and around the warehouse.
Teeghan clenched her teeth and fists.
Liv walked over to a window sill and sat down.She had the wind blow through the open window.Patrik looked at Teeghan "You need to talk to me, ok? I can tell that it hurts I just don't know where."
"I can't-" she gasped, pointing to her chest and then to her lower abdomen.
Patrik nodded and placed a hand on the spots she pointed to. Liv looked at Blaze, then at Emmy and Patrik, Her eyes drifted to Salem then Shea.
((Ok....ummmmmm.......................................))
Instinctively, Shea felt Liv's eyes on her and looked back, offering up a small smile tinged with worry.Shadow disappeared behind the shelves,sitting and mumbling something about a thought she'd heard somewhere.
Teeghan's face relaxed, only to be tensed again moments later.
"Contractions!" Shadow yelled from her invisible perch. "Soon!"
((lost here, someone please help?))
"Well shit," Patrik said "I can't take away it all." Liv smiled in the same way.
((um..Teeghan is having a baby. and I know, that's weird. anywho...Drake is at the warehouse.))
((k))Drake sat quietly in one corner.
Shades of Grey wrote: ""Well shit," Patrik said "I can't take away it all." Liv smiled in the same way. "
Shadow appeared by his side, "That's not what I meant." she sighed. "I meant these are the contractions; the baby is almost ready. I estimate only twenty minutes max."
He kept to the shadows.
"Hey, you are Drake right?" they'd met the first day she'd come here, when Blaze was even more immature.
Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "Shades of Grey wrote: ""Well shit," Patrik said "I can't take away it all." Liv smiled in the same way. "
Shadow appeared by his side, "That's not what I meant." she sighed. "I meant these ..."
Patrik nodded "I'm going to need your help." He said to Salem.
"With what?" she asked tentatively,knowing she was far from calm.
"This." He almost laughed at the obviousness.
Her face blanched. "Oh, um.."Teeghan glared at her. "You can't possibly think you will hurt me more than this!"
Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " "Hey, you are Drake right?" they'd met the first day she'd come here, when Blaze was even more immature.""Yeah," His voice was small, but overpowering.
"Salem. It's ok, seriously. I just need your help." Patrik said soothingly. Liv walked over to Teeghan and knelt by her side.
I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " "Hey, you are Drake right?" they'd met the first day she'd come here, when Blaze was even more immature.""Yeah," His voice was small, but overpowering."
"Cool, we sort of met..but not really. Anyway..this is weird."
Shades of Grey wrote: ""Salem. It's ok, seriously. I just need your help." Patrik said soothingly. Liv walked over to Teeghan and knelt by her side. "
"Okay, just..um, ya." Shadow knelt beside him.
Teeghan reached for Liv's hand without noticing.
Liv gripped her hand reassuringly. "Yeah," Patrik said in that same sort of insecure voice.
((wanna skip this part?))Teeghan sighed.
Shadow's purple eyes were like hurricanes; sparkles swirling and her pupil the eye of the storm. "I don't know if I can.."
((yes pls))"Yeah you can, just like the rest of us." Patrik said in a firm voice.
Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " "Hey, you are Drake right?" they'd met the first day she'd come here, when Blaze was even more immature.""Yeah," ..."
"We have meet?" He said again with the same overpowering voice.
Shades of Grey wrote: "((yes pls))"Yeah you can, just like the rest of us." Patrik said in a firm voice."
"Fine." she said,letting out her breath.
*skip*
I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " "Hey, you are Drake right?" they'd met the first day she'd come here, when B..."Shea shied back, his tone was sort of odd to her. "Yeah..."
Patrik sat back resting on his heels.Liv placed her hand on Teeghan's shoulder.
Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " "Hey, you are Drake right?" they'd met...""WHen?" this time his voice was more of curiosity.
"That time, when Blaze was being weird, we had just appeared..and he was beating around the bushes about his gift things..you ..uh, you wrapped him in shadows." she paused. "I think."
Emmy watched Teeghan and her baby with a content interest. Patrik leanded against her leg. She put her hand on his head. He closed his eyes.
"Oh yeah," this time more of the I-remember-that tone.
Shades of Grey wrote: "Emmy watched Teeghan and her baby with a content interest. Patrik leanded against her leg. She put her hand on his head. He closed his eyes. "Teeghan stared at the tiny baby girl, precious and perfect.
Shadow had disappeared as soon as the danger was gone and Blaze had gone red from embarrassment.
Teeghan looked up at Liv. "I don't know what to call her..she's-" her throat caught. "She's perfect."
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