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message 2301: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv almost wanted to ask him what was wrong but she decided that might not be the smartest thing.

Patrik stopped at teh next stop sign. "What now?"


message 2302: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "We need to get out, they saw the truck."

Blaze stopped.


message 2303: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik swore again and jumped out.

Liv skidded to a stop next to him "What is it?"


message 2304: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shea did the same,followed quickly by Shadow.

"Nothing, we better get hidden though."


message 2305: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "How fast can you climb a tree?" Liv asked

Rife and Gwen jumped out of the truck. Patrik helped Emmy down.


message 2306: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Real fast."

"Do you guys need help with her?" Shadow asked quickly.


message 2307: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Sweet. Go then." Liv started climbing.

"I can carry her, for a little while. I just hope she wakes up soon." Patrik said smoothly picking her up.


message 2308: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He climbed it expertly and soon sat in the higherr set of branches,well camoflagued.


"I can help, and it'll be a lot faster if I do." she told him.


message 2309: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv sat on the branch above him.

"Ok then please help," Patrik said


message 2310: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze looked up at her. "They close?"

Shadow nodded and used her mind to lift Emmy,allowing a dry wind to cradle her as extra support. "Now go to that building over there." she pointed to a warehouse,closed for the weekend.


message 2311: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Not as close as they were at the lake." Liv answered.

"Ok" Patrik started running to the warehouse.


message 2312: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((gtg to bed soon))

"Good then."

Shea followed quickly, right on his heels. Shadow sprinted after them, not going as fast because she was concentrating,but going fast enough.


message 2313: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok:( ))

Patrik blasted through the door and held it open for the rest.


message 2314: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow set Emmy gently on the ground and waited until everyone else was in before she slamemd the door with wind.


message 2315: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik barracacded the door with some random things in the warehouse. Then he went to stand by Emmy and Shea and Salem.


message 2316: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "We shouldn't stay near the door.." she muttered. "They don't know yet..but they are searching..depending on their decisions they might end up here.."


message 2317: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Dont use your powers anymore ok? They can sense it." Patrik said

"THey are right below us." Liv breathed.


message 2318: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Got it." she replied.

Blaze didn't move.


message 2319: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Pat moved away from the door and sat down.

Liv could hear talking
"... one of them snapped. Can you feel all of that residue? The air is think with it." Liv bit her lip remembering how Emmy freaked.


message 2320: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze held his head in his hands.

Shadow gasped,having accidentally used her gift. Crap no, oh gosh no.


message 2321: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv closed her eyes.

Patrik looked at her. His eyes wide. Please tell me...


message 2322: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "They know she snapped...Blaze and Liv are right above them." She coughed.

What the heck are we going to do!?

((gtg now,should be on tomorrow))


message 2323: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok ttyt))
Patrik looked at her "Well this sucks, majorly"

Oh my god, they are going to find them.


message 2324: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "They better not move.." Shadow said.

Blaze coughed.


message 2325: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Liv wont," Patrik said smoothly.

Blaze! Are you kidding me?! Liv thought angrilly.
The Shadows below them stopped and looked around
"Did you hear that?" One hissed in a voice that sounded like water hitting a hotplate.


message 2326: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze kept a hand over his mouth,stifling a sneeze. Stupid allergies!

"I can't say the same about Blaze.."she groaned. "Oh he just did it, oh.my.gosh."


message 2327: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv silently slimbed down next to him. Her eyes bored into his, What the hell? they seemed to scream.
The Shadows looked up, sensing something. Liv tensed up.

"Oh god, please tell me he didn't attract attention to himself." Patrik moaned.


message 2328: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "He has allergies...and he so just did!" Shadow cried out.

Blaze looked at her,conveying his message with his eyes and an almost motionless shrug. Allergies!


message 2329: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Oh dear god," Patrik said.

Liv closed her eyes praying that this wasn't enough for the Shadows to sense. She blew some clean air at his face.


message 2330: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze nodded at her in thanks; it helped.

Shadow held her head in her hands. "No.no.no.no.no!"


message 2331: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv stiffened up. This wasn't going to end well and she knew it.

"What happened?" Patrik said nervously looking up at Salem


message 2332: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze's eyes portrayed the same thoughts.

Shadow looked up at him slowly, lips moving as if she were speaking. When the sound finally came, she wished it hadn't. "They-they...it's inevitable."


message 2333: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv looked at him and mouthed the words 'What are we going to do?' She ran a hand through her hair as a looming dark shape came up behind her.

"No that would mean... I.. she can't.. we need her.. we need them both..." Patrik said trying to convince himself she wasn't already dead.


message 2334: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze's eyeswidened. Holy crap!

"They don't die...yet."


message 2335: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv whipped around. Her eyes widened in fear. She jumped up into the next branch. "Blaze MOVE!" She yelled

"Yet? What do you mean?" Patrik said


message 2336: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze jumped into motion and climbed up.

"I mean they aren't close to dying, at all. They know we are somewhere around and they need them to-to guide." She swallowed hard.


message 2337: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv brought her hands together and the wind picked up to almost hurricane speeds. It blew everything around except Blaze and Liv.

"They don't know where we are." Patrik said slowly.


message 2338: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze watched as the Shadows tried to resist it.

Shadow shook her curls. "We left a bit of a trail."

Shea was so mad.


message 2339: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv made the winds faster and harsher. More shadows came as Liv used more power.

"What kind of trail?" Patrik asked slowly turning to face her.


message 2340: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "You might want to save that.."Blaze suggested. "It looks like they'll get through sooner or later anyways, you need to be able to fight."


"Scent, broken things...etcetera."


message 2341: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv looked at Blaze, and the winds died instantly. Liv tensed into a fighting stance. The Shadows recovered instantly they lunged at the pair.

"Sent?" Patrik asked


message 2342: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze held his hands in a defensive position.

Shadow rolled her eyes.


message 2343: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv met one in midair and took it back down to the forrest floor.

"Emmy's power trip right?" Patrik asked


message 2344: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze tackled the one the same way Ellis had tackled Patrik, but they were way outnumbered.

"Yes."


message 2345: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv killed the one that she had tackled and moved on to the next.

"Damn," Patrik said


message 2346: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze managed to kill the on he had tackled just as another two tackled him. "Damn!"

Shadow shook her head, "Liv's doing great."


message 2347: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv's head whipped up and went to help Blaze.

"I bet she is. She hates Shadows more than I do." Patrik laughed softly.


message 2348: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze kicked and clawed at them, but they were bigger.

"she's-she's helping Blaze now." she said incredulously.


message 2349: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv landed next to Blaze and attacked one of them.
"Blaze start moving now."

"huh," was all Patrik said


message 2350: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze leapt up and roundhouse kicked the one closest to him. "Thanks Liv."

Her brow darkened. "It looks pretty eve- nevermind."


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