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message 2251: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv ran for a few more minutes and then skidded to a stop at the edge of the lake.

Patrik woke up the second Salem spoke. "What is it Salem?"


message 2252: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze stopped a little bit later and was awed. "Wow."

"Something. I mean, in my head, but something." she looked confused and terrified. "People! They were..they were angry and dark..and-" something seemed to dawn on her. "shadows. They looked like shadows."


message 2253: by Hannah (last edited Jan 17, 2010 05:36PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I know. The water is so beautiful. Patrik would love it. But I just like to swim in it." Liv smiled at him and took off her sneakers, socks, swaetshirt and t-shirt and jumped in.

Patrik jumped up.
"What? You're sure?" Patrik asked desperate she wasn't.
Please dont let it be them. Anyone but them, not now.


message 2254: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze stared in disbelief. "Seriously?"


message 2255: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You don't have to and I can dry off instantly," She shrugged "I don't care its just quiet."


message 2256: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze chuckled, taking off his shirt and doing a cannonball.


message 2257: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "Blaze stopped a little bit later and was awed. "Wow."

"Something. I mean, in my head, but something." she looked confused and terrified. "People! They were..they were angry and dark..and-" some..."


Patrik jumped up.
"What? You're sure?" Patrik asked desperate she wasn't.
Please dont let it be them. Anyone but them, not now.
~~~~~~

Liv laughed and held up her hands sheilding herself from the splash.


message 2258: by Ky (last edited Jan 17, 2010 05:44PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze went under and popped up laughing.

"Well I-" she jumped back,startled. "they were in Shadows and they were saying...murderous things..about people like us..they're coming." she whispered the last words.


message 2259: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((brb, washing dishes real quick!))


message 2260: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv laughed and dove under the water she popped up and shook her hair out of her face.


message 2261: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze swan around.

Shadow waited for Patrik's response.


message 2262: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "it's really nice tonight." Liv smiled.

Patrik put his hands on his head and spun around.
"Damnit. Ummm.... We need to either lay low or leave. Right now."


message 2263: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Incredibly." he answered.


"Right now? What about Liv and Blaze?"


message 2264: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv smiled and dived again.

"Liv will sense them if she hasn't already." Patrik was nervous, horrendously so.


message 2265: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow stopped listening, something else was showing itself to her. "Damn."


message 2266: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze ducked under.


message 2267: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What is it?" Patrik asked whirling to face her aagain.

Liv swam up to the surface and was instantly anxious.
"Blaze. We need to go."
She started to climb out of the lake.


message 2268: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "We don't have time." Shadow said anxiously.

Blaze swan to the edge and got out,slipping his shirt on. "What's wrong?"


message 2269: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "We need to go now." Patrik said "Liv and Blaze will have to cath up."

Liv looked at him "Shadows, we need to leave now." She threw on her shirt and sweatshirt but left her feet bare.


message 2270: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow grabbed Shea from inside and then nodded to Patrik. "They'll come from the East."

Blaze was speechless.


message 2271: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik looked to a still unconsious Emmy. "Ok. We're leaving now,"
Rife came out of the house with Gwen.
"What happened?"
"Shadows."
"Damn. You want me to get Emmy?"
"yeah"
Rife picked her up easilly.
"Go," Patrik said to Salem.

Liv stared at him. Then looked up. "They are almost here. Run,"


message 2272: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow dragged Shea behind her as she headed South.


Blaze did as he was told and ran.


message 2273: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv didnt outrun him and stayed next to him. It drove her crazy how slow this was.

Patrik ran after them.


message 2274: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Go ahead." he mumbled.


"Hurry up!"


message 2275: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "No I dont want them to get to you. You wont stand a chance." Liv said looking at him

"I'm right here" Patrik said.


message 2276: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Can't you, like, drag me or something?" he smiled despite the cirumstance.


"Kay,good." she said,relieved slightly.


message 2277: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "oh haha." She smiled inspite of herself. "And no I can't run with anyone."

Patrik looked around "The next store we see find a truck"


message 2278: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze smiled. "Hey it was worth a shot."

Shadow nodded.


message 2279: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "yeah but if you can run any faster it woudl be a really big help." Liv looked at him

Patrik ran a little ways ahead of them.


message 2280: by Ky (last edited Jan 17, 2010 06:48PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze sped up as much as he could.

"There!" Shea shouted.


message 2281: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv nodded in thanks.

Patrik ran ahead and found a truck and hotwired it in the span of a few seconds.
"Get in"


message 2282: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze kept racing forward. "Are we going the right way?"


The two girls did so.





message 2283: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "It doesn't mater we just need to keep running." iv replied

Rife jumped in with Gwen and Emmy. Rife sat in the truck bed with Emmy laying down. Patrik revved the engine and sped away.


message 2284: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze accepted this answer.

"Holy crap! What the heck is happening! Nobody told me anything!"


message 2285: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv nodded and ran a little faster she ran untill she felt the threat of Shadows had diminished enough to slow.
"Blaze, you can slow down now."

"Shea, Shadows are almost here. We needed to leave." Patrik said smoothly pulling out of the parkinglot and onto the highway.


message 2286: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He did,but just barely.

"Shadows..are those the people who hate y'all?"


message 2287: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Blaze, Salem is with Patrik, Rife and Emmy. Along with Shea. She will be fine." Liv said smoothly.

"YUp they are," Rife said from the bed of the truck.


message 2288: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He looked at her sharply. "I could care less about her."


"That's jsut dandy." she mumbled,causing Shadow to chuckled bitterly.


message 2289: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Don't lie. When she walked in you looked like every peice of you borke into a million tiny peices." Liv said smoothly remembering when she had looked at someone like that.

"Isn't it just?" Patrik said through clenched teeth.


message 2290: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze blushed. "It..it doesn't matter okay? I have Secura.."


"Yes."


message 2291: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I know," Liv nodded and looked at him. "And it's ok if it does mattter." She shrugged not wanting to push him.

Patrik drove fast. Needing to get as far away as possible.


message 2292: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze sighed. "You got me, now let's go."


Shadow tensed. "Holy friggin-!- there's more."


message 2293: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv sighed "Run then,"

Patrik swore again and sped up. "How many?" He asked tersly.


message 2294: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments And he did,gladly.


"Seven." she managed to speak.


message 2295: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv ran behind Blaze.

"Holy Hell." Patrik said. "We can't fight them like this,"


message 2296: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow shook her head.

Blaze continued on.


message 2297: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv ran after him letting him lead.

Patrik was swearing an drunnign a hand through his hair extremely anxious.
"Patrik! Jesus man relax!" Rife called


message 2298: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Hurry up."

"Turn left." Shadow commanded.


message 2299: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "If i go any faster i will be miles ahead of you." Liv said

Patrik did as he was told.


message 2300: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Fine." he conceded.

"At the next stop sign..stop."


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