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message 2051: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You can't help yourself" Emmy said as if she didnt expect much else.

Patrick laughed cynically and closed his eyes.


message 2052: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Ya..um..I just wanted to know why you choose to call me Salem. Almost no one does...'cept Blaze and my parents."


message 2053: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Shadow to us is the most evil thing ever. They hunt and kill elementals. We prefer Salem over Shadow." Patrik said, eyes closed the immage of leisure.


message 2054: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Really?" Shadow grimaced. "I'm just glad to be as far as I can from Cobra..and Torch."

Blaze snorted. "Not far enough."


message 2055: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Who?" Emmy asked ...Torch sounded like fun.


message 2056: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze elucidated. "They aren't people..well they are groups of people."

Shadow rolled her eyes. "They hunt us, all the gifted people."


message 2057: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ahhh." Emmy said

Figures, Patrik thought darkly


message 2058: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Why'd you say, 'Not far enough'?" Shea asked hesitantly.

Blaze looked at her sadly and then pointed to three figures in the distance. "That's why."


message 2059: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Damnit" Emmy cursed. She walked out into the light fire already in place in her hands and her tatts were already glowing dully.

Why am I not suprised? Patrik thought jumping up, ready to fight.



message 2060: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Wait!" Shadow stated. "Don't do anything yet. They don't know."


message 2061: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah right," Emmy said "If they aren't your people then they are Shadows if they are here they know already." Emmy stated

Patrik looked at them. "They arent' shadows Emmy relax."

Emmy killed tha fire and crossed her arms.


message 2062: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She shot Emmy a glance. "I know they are from Cobra, and they don't know yet."


message 2063: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Do you see fire? Am I glowing? No I'm not, so dont look at me like that." Emmy growled

"Emmy relax," Patrik said again


message 2064: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow laughed nervously as the figures approached. The colour drained from her face. "Ellis."


message 2065: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Ellis is her man isn't he? Emmy looked at Blaze figuring it all out. She walked to Patrik.




message 2066: by Ky (last edited Jan 16, 2010 10:09PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze's face hardened, but the look in his eyes betrayed him. "I'll kill him. Who else is there Salem?"

She stayed silent; terrified.


message 2067: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Salem. Tell us. who else is there?" Emmy said moving away from Patrik.


message 2068: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Oxford and Kensington." she stuttered.

Blaze clenched his fists. "Of course!"


message 2069: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "So kill Oxford and Ken?" Emmy said with a dark grin in place


message 2070: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Please?" she said quietly.


message 2071: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Blaze you get Oxford?" Emmy said as she started running.

Patrik moved to stand next to Salem.


message 2072: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Sure," he muttered.

Shadow started crying.

Shea was confused. "Can I help?"

Ellis noticed the two figures running at them and grinned. Kensington's mouth curled upwards. "They are Oxford,you were right."


message 2073: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik put a hand on her arm. He thought some peaceful thoughts and pushed them out to her. "Keep your head Salem."

Emmy was on Kens. She brought some fire to her hands and placed them on his chest.


message 2074: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She calmed slightly, enough that only a few tears managed to escape. "Sorry about that.."


Kensington pushed her away,shouting. Oxford leapt at Blaze, but hee moved too late. Blaze tackled him. Ellis continued walking as if nothing had happenedl he was only a few metres from the others now.


message 2075: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "No problem. Dont Worry about it" Patrik said
((Can ellis get Patrik? Like kill or injure him vry badly?))

Emmy rolled and then kicked kens legs out from under him.


message 2076: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((you want Ellis to hurt Patrik?))

Kensington collapsed and rolled over to her.

Ellis stood in front of Patrik, a gleam in his eyes.

Oxford was now speaking to Blaze in soothing tones, deceiving him into believing nothing bad was going on.


message 2077: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((yup))
"BLAZE!!" Emmy yelled hurling fire at them both. She Burned Kens face. Then looked up and saw very faintly Patrik with Ellis in front of him.

Patrik knew what was going to happen a second too late.


message 2078: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis flipped Patrik and jumped on top of him, Shadow screamed at him but he ignored her.

((he won't kill him..I like Patrik too much...tehe))

Kensington reached out to grab her hands.

Blaze looked over at her and punched Oxford squarely in the face. Oxford whispered to him angrily and sat heavily on his chest. He choked Blaze until he passed out.


message 2079: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((haha he just needs to get hurt. An dthank you for liking him!))
Emmy screamed "Patrik!" She punched Kens in the face knocking him out. Then moving to Oxford, Emmy was so far beyond pissed a pissed fire elemental is bad and a pissed fighter is worse but a pissed Fire Fighter? That was the worst thing.


message 2080: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((tehe, it'd be hard not to! plus, Ellis can't kill him; he's only 15 and not that skilled))

Oxford tried to calm her but she was so mad it didn't work, he rushed over to the others and grabbed Shadow from behind, pulling out a dagger from her pocket. She stiffened and would gave fought him, but he was armed; with her weapon.


message 2081: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Ahh... lol))
Emmy stood still and looked at Oxford.
"You think her being in front of you will stop me from killing all of you? Ellis unless you want to feel liek you are burning in the pits of hell for the rest of your natural life you will get off of him slowly." Emmy's tatts were silver now, and her eyes now all black. She was a scary spectal.


message 2082: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((last post for tonight!))

Ellis stood,tentatively looking around. He glared angrily at Oxford. "You wouldn't, they want her."

Oxford smirked. "I would and I will if you people don't listen.

Shadow almost started to cry again before she remembered the thoughts Patrik had allowed her to hear.


message 2083: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy laughed darkly "You listen to me. I can kill you very slowly." She advanced slowly "and rather painfully. If you don't move away from her in 10 seconds I will cook you from the inside out. I dont even have to touch you, you will just suddenly feel like you have swallowed hot water." To emphasize her point she demonstrated a little on Oxford.
((ok talk to you tomorrow!))


message 2084: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((hehe! I love this RP!))

Oxford swore angrily. "I'm not letting go; I'm not that easy."

Ellis pleaded with him gruffly and Shadow watched them all warily.


message 2085: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Haha Me too!))
Emmy shrugged and started to heat Oxford from the inside out.


message 2086: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*smiles*))

Oxford's grip tighened instinctively and he continued to swear. The knife was clenched in his hand and he pulled it back, missing her throat but catching her across the chest. Blood gushed from the gash travelling across her collarbone.

Ellis fought to take the knife away and was successful, but only after Oxford's pain-wracked body had managed to cut her again.

Shea stared.

Oxford fell over and brought Shadow with him.


message 2087: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy rolled her eyes and encased her hand with black fire and touched Oxfords hand that clutched Salem. The fire stuck to his skin, burning whatever it touched. Then her eyes flicked to the knife and it glowed red hot.



message 2088: by Ky (last edited Jan 17, 2010 11:13AM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis let go of the knife. "What was that for!"

Oxford writhed in agony.

Shadow crawled away from him and sat, knees to bleeding chest, on the ground a few feet away.


message 2089: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Patrik" Emmy said to Ellis.Her eyes flicked to Oxford.
"Get up." She commanded. Her eyes still black outlined in silver now. There was no going back from this point.

Patrik woke up and got to his knees. He shook his head and then saw the blood and fire. He could tell something wasnt right with Emmy.
"Damn. She wont be able to stop now." Patrik saw Salem hurt and bleeding. He went over to her.


message 2090: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I'm sorry..I didn't know she-" he just stopped,knowing it didn't matter.

Oxford stood,shaking with anger.

"She doesn't need to," she whispered, crying.




message 2091: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy smiled at him a dark viciuos smile one that had his death written in the dark spaces. She walked up to him, she placed a tattooed hand on his chest and without a sound he fell limply to the ground. Emmy now turned to Ellis, there was only one thought in her head. To kill, she didn't have any control over it thats just what happened when she went overboard.

Patrik could sense this he knew if he just stood there she would not be able to go back to herself after this.
"Emmy!" Patrik said jumping up.

Emmy didnt hear him. She just kept walking.

Patrik tried again
"Emmiline. Look at me." his tone was softer this time.

Emmy stopped in her tracks.


message 2092: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow's eyes were wide with fright.

Ellis was standing stiffly a few feet from Emmy.


message 2093: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik went to her and stood in front of her.
"Emmy, you need to look at me."
She brought her eyes to meet his. The freakish color was still there.
"Come back to me." He put a hand on a side of her face.
Emmy closed her eyes for a few moments and then slowly opened them again. THey had returned to their normal ash grey color. Her knees buckled a little.

Patrik caught her and smiled
"Hey."
"Hey. Thanks"


message 2094: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis let out a sigh of relief, "I should leave."

Shadow ran her hand across the bleeding wounds, pulling her hand away crimson.


message 2095: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yes you should" Patrik said not looking at him. He picked up Emmy and them walked over to Salem.
"Hey lay down Salem." Patrik said gently


message 2096: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis stalked off into the trees, not planning to come back.

Shadow stared into the trees long after he'd left, "No."


message 2097: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I can heal you if you liike." Patrik shrugged putting down Emmy.


message 2098: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She shook her head, not caring enough to let him.


message 2099: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ok.You want me to get Ellis?" Patrik asked


message 2100: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No." She was shocked.


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