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message 1751: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze spoke up,his voice wary and worried. "She said her throat is burning."


message 1752: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha moved roughly from her chair and brought several things down from her kitchen cabinets. She put cold water in a glass then poured some of the things she got from her cabinets into it. She set it down in front of Secura. "Drink it."


Secura shied away from it. There was no way she was going to drink more water.


message 1753: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "just do it Secura." he reminded himself of an upbeat nike commercial.


message 1754: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura shook her head. And hid her face.


message 1755: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Why not?"


message 1756: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "It burns everytime," she whispered hoarsely.


message 1757: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Maybe it won't this time..it's not jsut water."


message 1758: by Stephanie (last edited Jan 10, 2010 03:55PM) (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura shook her head and his her pressed her face into Blaze's shoulder, waiting for the burning to stop.


message 1759: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze wrapped his arms around her and looked pointedly at Samantha. 'What should we do?' he mouthed


message 1760: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha shrugged. "She has to drink it."


message 1761: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Did you hear that Secura?"


message 1762: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura nodded. "but it'll burn," she croaked.


message 1763: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze tried to sooth her.


message 1764: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura cried softly then turned and took a sip of it. Instantly, her throat started to stop burning.


message 1765: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "How is it?"


message 1766: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura took a few more sips than wiped her tears. "Better," She whispered.


"I thought so. The first time you eart this soup can be a little rough," Samantha said as she relaxed.


message 1767: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Good," he grinned at Samantha and stared at the soup "I'm not sure I want to eat it now."


message 1768: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha shrugged. "You already started. Might as well finish."


message 1769: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze laughed and did so; thankfully, nothing appeared to happen.


message 1770: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura pushed her bowl away. "I'm never eating that again."


message 1771: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments This made Blaze laugh and he spit out his water by accident.


message 1772: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura looked at Blaze in shock although she wasn't sure it was because of the disgusting sound she heard or the fact that she could see again. at teh moment though she whished she couldn't see. Seeing water fly out of Blaze's mouth was disgusting. "Gross!"


message 1773: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze laughed. "Thanks, I try." that was before he noticed that she saw him; he blushed wildly.


message 1774: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura laughed. "Nice to see you again. And what was so funny?"


message 1775: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Nothing.."


message 1776: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura raised an eyebrow disbelievingly. "Uh-huh."


message 1777: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yup."


message 1778: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "Liar."


message 1779: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yup." he repeated.


message 1780: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura took a deep breath and folded her arms. "You can be so annoying," she said as she scowled.


message 1781: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "You too.."


message 1782: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) She peered at Blaze then stood up and walked outsid. Secura sat on the house's steps. Why did he have to do that?


message 1783: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((lol he doesn't think much before he says stuff))

Blaze sighed.


message 1784: by Stephanie (last edited Jan 10, 2010 05:04PM) (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((haha. I g2g. sorry))

Secura put her head in her hands and held back tears.




message 1785: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((bye!))


message 1786: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((bye))


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) ((Y couldn't Secura see?))

Drake walked inside, "Oh you're here," He gestured to Blaze and Secura.


message 1788: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((Don't remeber the shaodw? Secura's outside on the poarch))

Samantha nodded to Drake. "You going to eat?"




message 1789: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze made a face and went to the porch. He sat in silence beside her.


message 1790: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura turned to Blaze irrtably. "What?"


message 1791: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I'm sorry."


message 1792: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura sighed and looked at Blaze. "Fine."


message 1793: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I truly am...." he trailed off. "forgive me?"


message 1794: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) She took a deep breath then look at Blaze. She smiled kindly. "Yes and I'm sorry." She scooted closer and wrapper her arms around one of his and leaned her head against his shoulder.


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) "sure," Drake says to samantha.


message 1796: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Stephanie wrote: "She took a deep breath then look at Blaze. She smiled kindly. "Yes and I'm sorry." She scooted closer and wrapper her arms around one of his and leaned her head against his shoulder."

He wrapped his arms around her and blushed. "Thanks."


message 1797: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: ""sure," Drake says to samantha."

Samatha gestured to the table and smirked. "Go ahead and eat then."


message 1798: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) The Non-Edible Cannibal (Kenny) wrote: "Stephanie wrote: "She took a deep breath then look at Blaze. She smiled kindly. "Yes and I'm sorry." She scooted closer and wrapper her arms around one of his and leaned her head against his should..."

"For what?" Secura wondered.


message 1799: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Forgiving me." he said seriously.


message 1800: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) She looked at him and put her arms around his neck- hugging him. "How can I not?"


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