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Shannon rolled her eyes and changed the subject. "So what is she so passionate about?"


message 16502: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "Getting her way. She's really...stubborn. And kind of pissy sometimes. I don't think she really likes me."


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"Really?" Shannon started to ask, who wouldn't like you, but stopped herself and instead said. "Sounds like a teenage girl to me."


message 16504: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments He nodded, "Touche."
((Hehehe, I love her.))


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((Yeah, me too.))

"Yeah, it looks like we're here too," Shannon said pulling up to a cozy-looking cottage.


message 16506: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Doesn't the dude that they're going to see like her?))

"Awesome," he said, almost sarcastically.


message 16507: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yeah, sortof, he kinda just wants her to want her and because his brother wants her too...))

Shannon climber out of the car and walked to the cottage door opening it she peered inside. "Shawn?" She called. She didn't expect an answer, and it was pitch black inside, but it was worth a try. "Looks like we might have to hang out here a while," She said turning to Ben.


message 16508: by Julian (last edited Jul 08, 2011 12:22AM) (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Ah. Ben isn't happy about this. *smiles*))

Ben nodded and muttered, "Fine."


message 16509: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 08, 2011 09:57AM) (new)

((Haha, wouldn't expect him to be.))

Shannon found the light switch and flipped it on. The house didn't look that dusty, it actually looked like it had been cleaned recently. Leave it to Shawn to do something like that. She plopped down on a plush couch and sighed. "Well, I'm exhausted, this was a long day."

((Gtg to bed, it's like 1 in the morning!))


message 16510: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Yep. :)))

Ben sat down on a couch near her. "Yeah."

((Goodnight!))


message 16511: by [deleted user] (new)

"I hope Shawn's alright." Shannon said quietly, it was unlike him to get himself in such trouble. He could get himself out of anything really so she knew he'd be there.


message 16512: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments He grunted a response. He wasn't very good at hiding his jealousy.


message 16513: by !ĘŁÏŻÅ¡ (new)

!ĘŁÏŻÅ¡ | 152 comments ((how can I join in?))


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Shannon glanced at Ben and realized this might not be the best thing to talk about. She resorted back to their previous topic, "Is Abby in school?" She asked.

((Kay, I don't know where anyone else is but Shannon and Ben are in a cottage in the middle of nowhere waiting for Shawn to come meet up with them. Jordan and Shawn are brothers and are apart of this organization that takes people who are gifted in being extremely charming and persuasive and uses them to sway governments all over the world to do whatever they want. But that's just my story, so you can incorporate your charrie and/or into my story or your charrie and/or story in somewhere else and I can add someone else I have or just whatever you want really.))


message 16515: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments He nodded. "Yeah. Do you have any siblings?"


message 16516: by [deleted user] (new)

"No, I'm an only child, but sometimes I wish I wasn't," She shrugged.


message 16517: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben nodded again. "Yeah, it's nice having siblings."


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"Even if they are teenage girls who don't like you very much?" Shannon asked teasing.


message 16519: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments He laughed. "Actually, yeah. I hadn't seen her for a few years until...the day I met you. And even if she can be a brat, it's still nice to see her, you know?"


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Shannon laughed back, actually having a good time, "That must have been a crazy day."


message 16521: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments He raised his eyebrows. "Yeah, it kind of was." Ben glanced at her.


message 16522: by [deleted user] (new)

"But I'm glad I met you," Shannon smiled.


message 16523: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "Me too," Ben smiled back.


message 16524: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((I believe it's still the same day, although, to get Matt and Abby back together we need school or some sort of excuse.))


message 16525: by !ĘŁÏŻÅ¡ (new)

!ĘŁÏŻÅ¡ | 152 comments Ratch (The Animal Wrestling CIA Agent) wrote: "Shannon glanced at Ben and realized this might not be the best thing to talk about. She resorted back to their previous topic, "Is Abby in school?" She asked.

((Kay, I don't know where anyone else..."


((Thanks))


Ivy walked around, her leather boots making no sound on the leaves underfoot.


message 16526: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Lav [rather fall in chocolate than fall in love] wrote: "((I believe it's still the same day, although, to get Matt and Abby back together we need school or some sort of excuse.))"

((Indeed. Excuse?))


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((No Problem))

Shannon jumped when she heard something at the door and stood up, hoping it was Shawn but ready to fight if it wasn't. Shawn walked through the door and smiled. "Always on the defensive," He said and shook his head. Shannon laughed and introduced Ben to Shawn.


message 16528: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben nodded at him.


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Shawn nodded back, not happy to find Ben there. Jordan hadn't said anything about another guy and you'd think he definitely would have noticed something like that. "So what's the plan?" Shawn asked.
"Well, that's what we were going to talk about." Shannon shrugged.


message 16530: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben sulked and listened to their conversation.


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"We need to stop your uncle," Shannon said getting up and pacing. "We need to tell someone."
"But who, no one will believe us," Shawn added, glad that Ben wasn't saying anything.

James stood outside a window listening to the conversation. Did Shawn really think they hadn't known that he was going to get away? Did he really think it was going to be that easy? He had known the moment Jordan had taken Shawn out of the isolation room what was going on and had followed them. Of course he had been right about Shawn helping the girls, and that Shawn was going against his uncle. But now Shannon and Shawn wouldn't have that insider they thought they'd have.


message 16532: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben really actually had no idea what they were talking about. He was starting to regret coming in the first place.


message 16533: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Emmie {all things go} wrote: "Lav [rather fall in chocolate than fall in love] wrote: "((I believe it's still the same day, although, to get Matt and Abby back together we need school or some sort of excuse.))"

((Indeed. Excus..."


Abby realized she'd left her backpack... somewhere. All her homework and her iPod were in it and she needed it. She decided the most logical place to look was school. There were only about 15 minutes until the final bell would ring so she headed toward the building full of adolescents, chewing on her nails.


message 16534: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt found Abby's backpack and wondered what to do with it?


message 16535: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((How about he's walking out of school with it and she sees him and flips out thinking he's taking it?))


message 16536: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((YES.))

Matt shrugged and walked out with it.


message 16537: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby was about a block away from the school when she noticed Matt walking out in her direction. She started to wave when she realized he was carrying her backpack. She froze. Should she confront him? Should she tell the principal? Maybe if she just stood there he'd see her and just give it back.


message 16538: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt looked around, hoping that maybe she'd come back.


message 16539: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Why do you have my backpack?" she mumbled. She was too far away for him to hear her, but she considered it a step in the right direction.


message 16540: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments He finally spotted her and started walking towards her.


message 16541: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
He was walking towards her. Which meant he saw her. Which meant he was probably going to talk to her. He still had her backpack. She could feel a mental breakdown waiting to happen so before it could take her completely she yelled. "GIVE. ME. BACK. MY BACKPACK."


message 16542: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((dang. I'm sad I missed Gwen's return.))


message 16543: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((You did. Tsk, tsk, tsk. I was even here and I never knew her.))


message 16544: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((well nobody told me. I figured it was you and Emmie.))


message 16545: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((I'm sorry! I didn't realize you would've wanted to be notified. D: But she's here!))


message 16546: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments He blinked. "Um. Yeah." He held it up by one strap "That was kinda what I was planning."


message 16547: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Or are you just saying that because I caught you trying to steal it?" Abby said, with her eyes closed.


message 16548: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo it's okay. I'm not mad! She's gone and deleted herself again. Ah well.))


message 16549: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((She did? D: That's frustrating.))


message 16550: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I know right?))


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