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message 16151: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem smiled slightly and leaned against the wall. Exactly.


message 16152: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy found she couldn't keep herself up any longer. She leaned against a wall and slid to the floor


message 16153: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Her own actions were nearly mirror images.


message 16154: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments The protective part of Josiah hoped that they would both fall back asleep. The girls needed it desperately, but he knew that they shouldn't. Farrow was still pacing, and they all still had no clue what was comming.


message 16155: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem fought the coming darkness admirably but succumbed to it when it became impossible to keep a hold on consciousness.


message 16156: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy, who was beyond the point of even caring, didn't fight it all that much.

Josiah sat down
"I need something to do." he decided


message 16157: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow paused. "Like what?"


message 16158: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I don't care."


message 16159: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I'm sure the babies would like their daddy."


message 16160: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah stood going to find his kids.


message 16161: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow nodded. "Good."


message 16162: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments What would have been good, was knowing why the hell they were all stuck here, and for how long.


message 16163: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments But Farrow couldn't tell him that, so he was stuck with what he had.


message 16164: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments That didn't mean he had to be happy with it.


message 16165: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem gasped in her sleep.


message 16166: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah looked over at where Salem had passed out, hearing her gasp he silently cursed Aloysia and that damned room.


message 16167: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No...don't..."


message 16168: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Hann-twin?))


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Rohan looked confused. "Why is she sleeping?" (he's 5 years old)
"Shush," Divya hissed. She knelt beside Salem. "Can you hear me?"


message 16170: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I'm sorry... I keep forgetting about this one, and it's like my favorite one! I'm a bad writer... :/))

Josiah glanced around, Patrik was nowhere in sight. Which struck him as odd. Patrik was always there. That was one of Patrik's personality points, especially where the girls were concerned.
"Huh..." he muttered keeping an eye on the four people that were in his immdeiate line of vision.

Even in sleep everything ached. Her every breath burned and she could sense the slight change in temperature when someone moved. her head hurt with all the information that was simultaneously getting put in it.


message 16171: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((It's alright, my dear. And you are not a bad writer! *scolds* Don't think it.))

Salem's expression grew pained and frustrated, almost as if she wished to not be asleep, as if she thought being awake would somehow be better.

Fallon stood against the wall watching her sisters and wishing she could do something for them.


message 16172: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I won't.))

Josiah sat down next to her and put his hand on her head.

((Farrow??))

Emmy cringed at some unseen force. Power hurt, it hurt a lot, and it seemed more than willing to remind her of that.

Patrik walked in, he came to a stop beside Farrow and closed his eyes.


message 16173: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((good. :D)) ((And yep...wrong charrie....*facepalm* Fallon, you don't belong here!))

Salem sighed, body tensing.

Farrow looked siddeways at Patrik and then back to the scene in front of her.


message 16174: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Hahaha No, no you don't Fallon))

Josiah's hands were gentle.

Emmy jolted awake, not too soon after she sorely regretted it.

Patrik looked at Farrow then moved to sit next to Emmy.


message 16175: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Fallon's embarrassed now. :P))

Salem whimpered, eyelids clenching further closed. Her lips parted and she gasped.

Farrow just continued to watch them all for a moment. She then went to the kitchen and began making drinks.


message 16176: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((OH MY GOLLY. HI!))


message 16177: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((HI. *huggles*))


message 16178: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((*huggles back* Hullo, darling! How are you?))


message 16179: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I'm okay, you?))


message 16180: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kenny [I've fallen in love with the unwritten] wrote: "((Fallon's embarrassed now. :P))

Salem whimpered, eyelids clenching further closed. Her lips parted and she gasped.

Farrow just continued to watch them all for a moment. She then went to th..."


((OMG HEY YOU TWO!!! IVE MISSED YOU SO MUCH!!!!))

Josiah closed his eyes, his heart aching at the sound. He wanted her to wake up, or atleast have there be some way for him to help.


Emmy glanced at Salem and her brother, and she hated the looks that were on their faces. It was pain, each with their own perspective pain. She felt awful for unleashing this on her best friend.
"Emmy..." Patrik said in that cool voice of his. She loved the sound of it, it reminded her of rain.
"What are you doing?" he asked placing his hand on her hip as she went to stand up.
"I need to get out of here for a while," Emmy said in a raspy vioce, that reminded even herself of crackling flames.


message 16181: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((me too.))

((gawd, I missed these characters.))

Farrow jumped, startled, when one of the twins awoke. She quickly left the room to go and settle the child.

Salem's hands grasped at Josiah even as she remained in the dark. This instinctive search for her love gave her body a way to expend energy.


message 16182: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I know it's so sad!))

Josiah wmanuvered his body underneath hers and draped his arms over her shoulders.

"You shouldn't," Patrik said in that tone he used to reason with her.
"Why not? Please, I can't be here anymore. I can't," she was pleading with him. Her eyes had a metallic silvery edge surrounding the dark grey her eyes naturally were, but there was something in them that Patrik couldn't identify.


message 16183: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I agree.))

Salem relaxed a little into Josiah's body, a soft sigh escaping her parted lips.

Farrow sidled back into the room with a tiny bundle in a green blanket. She moved to a chair and curled her legs beneath her as she sat with her nephew in her arms, humming to him quietly as he sucked on her pinky.


message 16184: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah gently ran his free hand through her hair and listened to her breathing.

"Are you alright?" Patrik asked hating the look in her eyes
Emmy put her palms against her temples and pressed, closing her eyes
"It hurts, God it hurts."


message 16185: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments From that moment on, for a while at least, Salem was calm and almost peaceful in his arms.

Farrow felt like she was eavesdropping on Patrik and Emmy's conversation but it didn't bother her. Since when would learning information she probably shouldn't know be something she didn't want to do. And this time it wasn't even intentional. She wasn't about the kick a gifthorse in the mouth. Unless the baby started wailing again. Then she'd be likely to march over to them and deposit the little bundle right in one of them's arms.


message 16186: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((HANNAH! KENNY!))


message 16187: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Hola Emmie! It's been a while. :D))


message 16188: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((HEYYYYYY!!!))

Josiah leaned back, rested his head on his free hand and let the other trace small shapes on Salem's burnig skin.

Patrik went to put his hand on her arm, before his hand even reached her his hand was burning. Yelping he snatched his hand back.
"What the hell?"


message 16189: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited May 08, 2011 05:54PM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Divya tiptoed around shyly while Rhea clung to her hand. "What's happening?" she whispered.
Divya picked her up. "I don't really know."
Rhea's dark eyes grew round. "How do you not know? You're a big sister! Big sisters know everything!"
Divya smiled. "No they don't, Rhea."
"They don't?" Rhea sighed. "Then who does?"
"Nobody, really. But together, we have a lot of knowledge. And we're always learning new things."
"So one day, will we know everything?" the little girl asked.
"You'll have to wait and find out," Divya answered her calmly.
Rhea frowned. "I don't like waiting."

THAT SOUNDED LIKE A SCENE FROM THE STORY.

Anyway...

Ravi quietly sat down beside Josiah and Salem, trying not to watch them.


message 16190: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "((HEYYYYYY!!!))

Josiah leaned back, rested his head on his free hand and let the other trace small shapes on Salem's burnig skin.

Patrik went to put his hand on her arm, before his hand even..."


Farrow's head snapped up, her eyes immediately catching the scene. "What's going on?"

Salem shivered in his embrace.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Ravi inched toward Divya. "Who are all these people?"
Divya shrugged. "From various places...probably had a long journey."
"But why are they all here? What are they doing?"
Divya sighed. "I don't know everything!" She tried not to snap. Ever since Amma's accident, I'm expected to know everything. I'm just twelve years old!
She shook her head. "Come on, let's get Anjali and Rohan and go sit somewhere."


message 16192: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((this rp has a really long background, as is able to be seen by the number of pages. I'll at least explain that they are in a safehouse and that Emmy and Salem just had a rather dangerous and powerful thing happen to them. And the babies are Salem's. Josiah and Salem are together. Patrik and Emmy are together. They have had a pretty tough journey, you could say.

I'm sorry if it seems like we're ignoring you.))


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments (It's fine. =) So Ravi and Divya and their siblings are also on a journey, from India to Canada. Rhea and Rohan, the littlest kids, are going in hiding. Maybe they could stop at the same safehouse as Salem, Josiah, Patrik, and Emmy.....)


message 16194: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I would say "Sure!" but I forgot to add that they aren't in a normal dimension. They're not on Earth.))


message 16195: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited Jun 09, 2011 07:38AM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments (Ahhhh.....hmm....perhaps I could use different characters. I could use Livva, Leila, Elise, Robert, and Carmen, who are on a mission to stop world destruction. The Creators world, who kind of MAKES the human world, is being attacked by the Destroyers World, and these five are working for the Creators to stop them. It's not as cliche as it sounds. But..yeah. Can I use them?)


message 16196: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((They're probably more likely to be in another dimension. :D))


message 16197: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited Jun 09, 2011 07:38AM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments (Yep =) Okay I'll go ahead with them...)

Livva burst into the house, almost collapsing with fatigue. Sweat poured down her face and every breath of air was a struggle.
"Livva!" Strong arms grabbed her as she fell- Carmen.
"We're safe now. We're fine," Elise whispered to her.
"I'm - not - a - child," Livva gasped. "We're - not - okay."
"No, really." Elise's silky hair brushed her cheek.
I've failed all of you, Livva thought. This'll prove Robert's point - people living in the mortal world become outsiders forever.
The faces of the older children faded away as she fainted.
"Told you that was useless," Robert pointed out. "We didn't get the mirror. Livva's only twelve. She can't take it."
Carmen glared at him. "Just shut up. She can do it, okay? There's something about her."
Elise nodded. "Livva can save us. It's NOT a fairytale fantasy," she snapped at Robert. "She's special."


message 16198: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy whirled around at the noise. Her black and amber eyes flashing entirely silver. Patrik moved closer to her slowly.
"Emmy..." He murmured quietly trying to keep her under control.
Emmy ignored him and moved towards the new commers.
"I should hve sensed them" She said to hrself

Josiah tensed up his eyes going immediately to his children at the sound of people


message 16199: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((I miss this RP.))


message 16200: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Holy goodness! Hey. :P I wish I could stay on, but I've got to go to bed. Talk to you tomorrow, Twin!))

Farrow rolled her eyes. "After what you went through, you're on power overload right? That's probably why. Don't freak on yourself."

Salem froze in his arms, her eyes snapping open. "Josiah..." she whispered. "People are here?"


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