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message 1551: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha was shocked and sent a ball of flame towards the area were the yellow eyes had been. They had already disappeared. The flame lit a tree on fire but the eyes were gone.


message 1552: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shea walked over, "Are you okay Secura?"


message 1553: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura stirred. She took a deep breath and tried to open her eyes. When she did she met an unexpected surprise. Everything was dark. She could hear and feel things but her eyes, her sight was gone.


message 1554: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((hmm..how odd.))

Blaze was so confused.


message 1555: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((lol. I'm thinkign just about the same thing! Haha))

"Blaze," she whispered.


message 1556: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((lol))

"Yes?" Blaze rumpled his eyebrows.


message 1557: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((Its' true. I'm making it up as I go. Kind of like I'm doing for my story with Kriskin in it.))

Blaze," Secura moaned. "Where are you. I can't- I can't see."


message 1558: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I usually do that..depending of course.))

Shea gasped, "What?"

Blaze hugged her close, "I'm right here...shh.."


message 1559: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((yeah))

Secura stifled a sob. "Where is it?"


message 1560: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Where is what?"


message 1561: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "The eyes. The yellow eyes. Don't look at the," Secura's voice broke on the last word.


message 1562: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shea nodded, though secura apparently couldn't see. "I promise, none of us wil look into the 'yellow eyes'."

Blaze rolled his eyes at Shea.


message 1563: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((Shea's a guy? lol, sorry. I can't remeber! It's so hard to keep track of these things sometimes!))

Secura felt around for Shea. "That's not enough."


message 1564: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((no Shea is a girl..*confused*))

Shea moved a bit. "Why not?"


message 1565: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((sorry))

Secura grabbed Shea and pulle dher towards her as she whispered fiercly, "Don't look at it at all."


message 1566: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((no it's fine..lol))

Shea was extremely weirded out. "Okay, I promise!"


message 1567: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((I need a chant. For somethign bad to happen....in my story))

Secura nodded, a bit content. "I just want to see again."


message 1568: by Ky (last edited Dec 25, 2009 09:45AM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((hmm....))

"So would I if this happened to me," Shea whispered, much mroe serious than she had been before.


message 1569: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Tears slid from Secura's eyes. "Don't look at the eyes," she warned as she allowed herself to go unconscious again.


message 1570: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I promise," Shea whispered, sorry for her previous behaviour.

Blaze kept his hold on her.


message 1571: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha looked at Secura wairly. "We need to get out of here. Let's go."


message 1572: by Ky (last edited Dec 25, 2009 09:58AM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze picked her up,bridal style, and nodded. Shea spoke for him, "let's go."


message 1573: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha led them towards her cottage. It was small but woudl do. It was far either. It was probably a five minute walk.


message 1574: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shea followed,a slight,perky bounce in ehr step.

Blaze carried Secura with ease.


message 1575: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((gtg))


message 1576: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samatha unlocked her cottage's door and opened it. She stepped into the cottage and waved everyone in.


message 1577: by [deleted user] (new)

Jake just walked in silence, head down.


message 1578: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "What's wrong," she whispered.


message 1579: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Kenny (is a Christian girl) wrote: "((gtg))"

((k, bye))


message 1580: by [deleted user] (new)

He looked at her, "I'm tecnicly a creature of wildlife and when my people get destroyed it hurts me." He said honestly.


message 1581: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha looked at him curiously. "Who got destroyed?"


message 1582: by [deleted user] (new)

"The trees." He replied. "The animals in the trees...." He trailed off sadly.


message 1583: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "Oh..." Samatha sighed. "I'm sorry."


message 1584: by [deleted user] (new)

"It's fine." He said sadly. He leaned against a wall and slid down so he was sitting with his head burried in his knees and his arms rapped around himself.


message 1585: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha sighed and sat down next to him. She put one of her arms around him and rested her head on him.


message 1586: by [deleted user] (new)

((awwww thats adorable lol))


He smiled and hugged her.


message 1587: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((lol))

Samatha laughed. "Someone's easy to please."


message 1588: by [deleted user] (new)

"You make me feel better. Usualy people are repulsed by me, but you dont seem to care." He said smiling.


message 1589: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) She smiled. "You'd be surprised how many people are repulsed by me."


message 1590: by [deleted user] (new)

He grimaced, "Why? Being a witch isn't bad. I have witch blood in me and im not bad." He said making a fire ball in his hand. "See?" He said.


message 1591: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samatha grimaced. "People just...don't like me."


message 1592: by [deleted user] (new)

"I like you." He blurted, then he blushed.


message 1593: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Smantha looked at Jake and smiled softly. "Well, I like you too? Why are you blushing though?"


message 1594: by [deleted user] (new)

"I-...." He cut off. "I guess I like you more than a friend." He said painfully.


message 1595: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samatha stopped for a moment then smiled again. "That's okay," she whispered.


message 1596: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 25, 2009 10:46AM) (new)

"What about you?" He asked in a whisper.


message 1597: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((g2g))

"Same."


message 1598: by [deleted user] (new)

He smiled.


message 1599: by Ky (last edited Dec 25, 2009 11:23AM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze set Secura down gently, Shea aloowing him to rest her head on her own lap. "Thanks," he whispered. Shea just nodded.


message 1600: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha smile dback at Jake then got up. Turning to blaze she said, "Follow me. I have a bed you can rest Secura on."


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