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message 15451: by Elliott (last edited Oct 14, 2010 05:55PM) (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby grabbed her beaten up iPod, turned it halfway as loud as it could go, subconciously remembering her Mom's loud music lectures and selected her Relient K playlist. Be My Escape came on, and she started singing along softly, a little bit off key as she walked to school.


message 15452: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Hawk took a walk outside, feeling empty without her sword at her side. She was used to smelling wood and pine and the ash of her forge. Here she just smelled emptiness and the trash.


message 15453: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Patrik looked her up and down his floppy hair only adding to his nice persona.
"How've been doing?" he asked seriously

Josiah looked at her and shook his head breifly.

Emmy put Eliana down ..."


Farrow shrugged. "I've been...fine. You?"

"Hold him then," Salem smiled softly. "He needs to meet his Daddy."


message 15454: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Lav Stathopoulos (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Abby grabbed her beaten up iPod, turned it halfway as loud as it could go, subconciously remembering her Mom's loud music lectures and selected her Relient K playlist. Be My Escape came on, and she..."


Matt turned his iPod up as loud as it would go, blasting Fall Out Boy.


message 15455: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik almost laughed
"You're on the brink of lying." then he paused "I've been all over the place. Both litteraly and figuratively"

Josiah nodded and kissed her forehead. Moving over to his son's crib he looked down into it. Smiling slightly he reached in and scooped Logan up into his arms. He seemed so small, like if Josiah held him too tight he would be crushed. Moving slowly and easily he took his spot next to Salem again.

Emmy watched them thinking about her life and how she had ended up in this weirdly happy place.


message 15456: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((You don't have to ignore me in the Roleplay though. Hehe. I'm working on my report, promise.))

Abby walked through the doors of the school, and scanned the crowded hallways for Matt. She mentally flicked herself for thinking she could find him in this giant crowd of kids, and willed herself to stay calm and find her English class.


message 15457: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Hannahh...))


message 15458: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Patrik almost laughed
"You're on the brink of lying." then he paused "I've been all over the place. Both litteraly and figuratively"

Josiah nodded and kissed her forehead. Moving over to his s..."


"But I didn't lie," she shrugged. "But you're good now?"

Logan was sleeping peacefully. Somehow, he was just that kind of kid. Maybe it had something to do with the mysterious sickness.


message 15459: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Lav Stathopoulos (Lavendarlol) wrote: "((You don't have to ignore me in the Roleplay though. Hehe. I'm working on my report, promise.))

Abby walked through the doors of the school, and scanned the crowded hallways for Matt. She mental..."


((You betta'!))

Matt walked through the doors to see Abby standing there, all alone. He considered slipping by, merging with the crowd.


message 15460: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
She pulled out the schedule she had tucked into her pants and headed towards the room number that was marked down. She was about to take off her headphones and head into class when someone opened the door, almost hitting her. It missed, but the way the guy looked at her was enough to make her freeze up, standing motionless, as the music played.


message 15461: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I know, but you wanted to..." Patrik said shrugging casually "I'm on the way to getting better." he said with just as much casualty as anything else

Josiah felt as if he was stuck in this crazyily euphoric place that he never wanted to leave.


message 15462: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Lav Stathopoulos (Lavendarlol) wrote: "She pulled out the schedule she had tucked into her pants and headed towards the room number that was marked down. She was about to take off her headphones and head into class when someone opened t..."

((I hafta go! I'mma go take a showa'!))


message 15463: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Okay, bye!))


message 15464: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: ""I know, but you wanted to..." Patrik said shrugging casually "I'm on the way to getting better." he said with just as much casualty as anything else

Josiah felt as if he was stuck in this crazy..."


Farrow sighed, watching him. "How can you be so casual?"

Salem rested her head on his arm.


message 15465: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt walked up behind her and urged her forward with a gentle push. He shot the guy a dirty look.


message 15466: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby blushed, feeling like an idiot when Matt appeared behind her. She stepped into the room when he nudged her forwards and took a seat in the back, mumbling a quick thank you, before laying her head down on her desk as the song switched.


message 15467: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt only nodded as he took a seat beside her.


message 15468: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby let herself completely zone out and get sucked into the song. She was fairly good at English anyways, it wouldn't hurt her to not pay attention.


message 15469: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kenny [AKA Kendie/Kendall] wrote: "({Hannah}) wrote: ""I know, but you wanted to..." Patrik said shrugging casually "I'm on the way to getting better." he said with just as much casualty as anything else

Josiah felt as if he was ..."


Patrik laughed a little
"I'm getting good at it aren't I?" he paused then shook his head and said "You may not lie, but that doesn't stop the rest of us."

Josiah smiled a little.

It was then that Emmy understood how her mother did what she did. How she had given everything, including her children to those horrible people.


message 15470: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow shrugged. "I lie a lot, but not to the people I care for. I'm sneakier than that."

Logan made a quiet cooing sound, his mouth opening and closing, his tiny pink tongue peeking out over his pouting lips.


message 15471: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Lav Stathopoulos (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Abby let herself completely zone out and get sucked into the song. She was fairly good at English anyways, it wouldn't hurt her to not pay attention."

Matt took out a notebook and started doodling.


message 15472: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Suddenly, the music stopped and Abby was jolted back to reality. She looked at her iPod. It had died. "Drat," she muttered.


message 15473: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik laughed
"It's more of a cover up than a lie..." he edited

Josiah smiled again.


message 15474: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt looked up to glance at her.


message 15475: by Ky (last edited Oct 14, 2010 07:51PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Patrik laughed
"It's more of a cover up than a lie..." he edited

Josiah smiled again."


"It's not funny, Patrik."

Logan coughed in his baby way.


message 15476: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
She took the headphones out of her ears and shoved her iPod in her pocket and drummed her fingers on her desk.


message 15477: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "THe fact that I've been doing it so long that I can't tell the difference anymore is." Patrik told her simply.

Josiah ran a finger down Logan's cheek.


message 15478: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: ""THe fact that I've been doing it so long that I can't tell the difference anymore is." Patrik told her simply.

Josiah ran a finger down Logan's cheek."


"Not really."

The baby boy moved his face so his mouth found Josiah's finger.


message 15479: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Lav Stathopoulos (Lavendarlol) wrote: "She took the headphones out of her ears and shoved her iPod in her pocket and drummed her fingers on her desk."

Matt went back to doodling. Then, he remembered he hated doodling and sighed.


message 15480: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Emmie (AKA Clementine/Connie/You) wrote: "Lav Stathopoulos (Lavendarlol) wrote: "She took the headphones out of her ears and shoved her iPod in her pocket and drummed her fingers on her desk."

Matt went back to doodling. Then, he remember..."


"Nice drawing," Abby said, in a dry whisper.


message 15481: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt rolled his eyes. "Yeah, right." He randomly wished he had his camera to capture the way the light made the teacher look unaturally pale. He chuckled to himself, remembering what his friend had said. I swear, you think in rectangles...


message 15482: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Is he a good drawer or a bad drawer?))


message 15483: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik looked at Farrow, his mood flipping like a switch
"What is it then?" he was almost annoyed

Josiah laughed silently.


message 15484: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Bad drawer. He's a photographer.))


message 15485: by Elliott (last edited Oct 14, 2010 08:11PM) (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Ever heard of sarcasm? Abby thought, but she couldn't bring herself to say it out loud, even in a joking way.


message 15486: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt leaned back in his seat and tried to pay attention.


message 15487: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
The teacher handed out a grammar worksheet and told them to do the first 5 questions, and then they'd discuss them in class. Abby scanned the worksheet, reading the instructions. Apparently her old school was slightly behind on what grammar they were teaching, because she had no idea what a subject compliment was.


message 15488: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Patrik looked at Farrow, his mood flipping like a switch
"What is it then?" he was almost annoyed

Josiah laughed silently."


She chuckled, amused at that of all things.

Logan began to suck on Josiah's fingertip.


message 15489: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Lav Stathopoulos (Lavendarlol) wrote: "The teacher handed out a grammar worksheet and told them to do the first 5 questions, and then they'd discuss them in class. Abby scanned the worksheet, reading the instructions. Apparently her old..."

((Emmie had no idea either.))

Matt got to work.


message 15490: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Right. That's high school English stuff. I can't remember anything from middle school.))

Abby looked over at Matt. He seemed to know what he was doing. She wrote down what he had put for his first answer.


message 15491: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Or you could just explain...))

Matt looked at her and shrugged. He kept writing.


message 15492: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((It's... augh, my brain is off. It's like in this sentence: Emmie is a unicorn. Unicorn is the subject compliment because it comes after the verb and renames the subject, Emmie. It's... easier to understand when my English teacher explains it.))

After the first couple of answers, Abby thought she saw a pattern so she did the rest of the questions by herself.


message 15493: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Interesting. Eh, I guess I'll understand it next year.))

Matt finished and drummed his fingers on the desk.


message 15494: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Yep.))

The teacher started to explain the first answer and Abby tried to pay attention and understand how it worked, but she was clueless.


message 15495: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt tuned her out.


message 15496: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Finally Abby gave up trying to understand it and laid her head back down on her desk.


message 15497: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt glanced at her.


message 15498: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
She sat up and raised her hand, asking if she could go to the bathroom. When she got permission she reached into her backpack, pulled out her book, and walked out of the classroom. She looked around until she found a bench in the corner, and sat down on it to read. She had learned from experience teachers never thought the kids reading for fun were skipping class.


message 15499: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt was dying of boredom. He asked if he could get a drink, and hurried out of the room.


message 15500: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby kept reading the same page over and over, as her mind wouldn't focus on the words.


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