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I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) Drake thought about things he could do but thought of none.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shea sat.


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The rumbleing finally stoped but jake said, "We can't leave yet there is always an aftershock." He said.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) A ball of flame appeared in Samantha's hand. "To light up this dark celler," she informed.


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Catie  | 243 comments "You can do that too" Lilly said
Rose and Lilly both made a ball of flame a pear in their hands also.
"Can you do the other elements." Rose asked


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Smantha raised an eyebrow. "I'm a witch."


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Catie  | 243 comments "We don't know what we are. We can just use elements: Fire, water, ice, earth. " Rose said


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "I have a scalding hot chain."


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Catie  | 243 comments "A what?"


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "Really hot chain."


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Catie  | 243 comments "Ookkaayyy" Rose said drawing out the word


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha rolled her eyes. "The earthquakes done. Let'sgo."


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Jake nodded.


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Catie  | 243 comments They stood up.


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Jake opened the door and walked out. The whole area was destroyed. He frowned at all of the trees that had fallen over.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shea gasped, Blaze just looked like his usual self. "Where is Secura?" he said nervously.


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) Drake was sorry for them. he turned back.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura scremaed and ran into Blaze. "There's HUGE spider down there!"


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) Drake heard a scream, he ran faster.


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Jake was trying to climb out of the cellar FAST


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha raised her eyebrows and rolled her eyes.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Stephanie wrote: "Secura scremaed and ran into Blaze. "There's HUGE spider down there!""

Blaze hugged her,smiling. "It's okay,just a spider."

Shea giggled nervously, she hated spiders.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura nodded and looked around, as sh epulled away. "Well, this was a beautiful place..."


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Merry Christmas!))

"It is," Blaze smiled.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((YOU TOO!))

"All the trees are, on the ground. Or almost all." Secura caught her breath what was that? A shaded figure was standing several yards opposite them. Sh ecouldn't see it's face but did see its bony hand's fingers.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((merci))

Shea shuffled closer to Secura and Blaze.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) The figure's breathing was heavey and wet. It could be heard from were everyone was standing.

Secura tried to, unsuccessfully, steady her breathing.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What IS that?" Shea said anxiously.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura shook her head and whispered. "I-I don't know."

The mysterious figure slowly back into the trees. It's hood got caught on a branch and part of it's face was momentarily visable. It was dark green with white spoltches on it.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Um..I'm not too sure I want to be here right now.."Shea clenched a fist gently. Blaze's smile slipped.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura looked at Blaze. "Why are you smiling?"

The figure quickly moved its hood back into place, hiding its face. It backed farther into the woods, carefully this time. It was soon invisable to everyone.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I'm not..anymore." He looked thoughtful. "At least I don't think I am."

Shea was shaking.

((she is acting nothing like herself..darn.))


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((haha. I know Secura has changed a bit from what she usually is. I think it's natural though. They're in a totally different storyline.))

Secura scowled. "You still have a smirk on your face."


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ya. Shea isn't a spy right now..lol))

Blaze tried his hardest to frown.

((Blaze on the other hand..I liek this version of him))


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Jake put a smirk on his face to annoy secura MORE. He scoffed.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((lol))

Secura smiled at Blaze's effort and scowled at Jake.

Smantha snickered, what was wrong with Jake?


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shea laughed, not nervous anymore.

Blaze was forced to smile, but it wasn't snarky.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) A growl soudned from behind Secura. She whipped her head around. What was that?


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze didn't hear,but his smile faded to a straight line...almost.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((is this Kriskin?))


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((um, not the growl))

Secura's eyes were wide she saw yellow eyes looking out from the forest and let out an ear piercing- scream.




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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((but the splotchy dude is right?))

Shea jumped,frightened by Secura's scream.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((uh, yeah))

The yellow eyes seemed to float closer to them and Secura coudl feel them pulling her into their endless depths. She tried to tell Balze, call for help. But it was like they disabled her. She couldn't speak.

((idk what this thing is. I'm just kind of doing it. Haha))


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki,lol))

Blaze looked at her,worried and stood beside her,looping his arm through hers.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Secura's eyes started to blur. It felt like she was...what was happening? It was like she was stuck in in between reality and something else....


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze spoke to her urgently. "Secura! Secura,are you okay?" he gripped her shoulders.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Line's started appearing in Secura's mind's eye. She knew if she didn't do soemthign make a sound, something bad was going to happen. After what seemed to be a life long struggle Secura was finally able to scream. Releasing herself from a terrible fate. She gripped her head and lost her footing.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze held her steady,confused.


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Stephanie (chasmofbooks) It was hard to breathe. Secura was gasping for air. She felt herself starting to slip away into a somewhat familiar darkness, unconsciouness.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze pulled her closer,talknig urgently into her face.

Shea stared,wide-eyed.


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