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message 15251: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments The man was interested in the pair. How they acted around eachother, intreigued him.

Patrik looked at her
"Well believe it."


message 15252: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie (AKA Clementine/Connie/You) wrote: "Dani went with him."


message 15253: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The woman wrote a few things down on a clipboard.

Salem bit her lip. "Like now."


message 15254: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((pillow's got me! XP I'll talk to you later!))

The man watched Patrik closely

patrik looked at her
"Then push."


message 15255: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((dang. I won't be here tomorrow. *sad* Talk to you sunday.)) ((sleep well!))

She kept writing, taking note of pretty much everything.

Salem gritted her teeth and closed her eyes, focusing on what she was doing. For the babies...


message 15256: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Sparrow took out his paints and painted his giant calico cat. He missed her and not being able to ride her here.


message 15257: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments He watched with a detached look going across his face.

Patrik placed his hands on her shoulders.

Declan looked over at Dani.


message 15258: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The woman pursed her lips.

Salem's eyes flashed open and she tensed until she noticed it was Patrik.


message 15259: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani glanced at him.


message 15260: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments The man looked over at the womans clipboard and tapped one section of writing

Patrik gave her a look
"I'm not going to let anything happen to you. But those babies wont wait forever."


message 15261: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie (AKA Clementine/Connie/You) wrote: "Dani glanced at him."


message 15262: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "The man looked over at the womans clipboard and tapped one section of writing

Patrik gave her a look
"I'm not going to let anything happen to you. But those babies wont wait forever.""


"What?" she snapped quietly.

"I'm working on it," Salem murmured, clenching her teeth.


message 15263: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan smiled lightly at her.

The man looked at her

Patrik nodded, trying to use his own power to calm her down.


message 15264: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani smiled back.


message 15265: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The woman scowled. "At least tell me what's wrong with it."

"Pat, don't. I need this." It'll keep me going...


message 15266: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan looked down

"Nothing. I was just looking."

"Alright." Patrik said leaving her be.


message 15267: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani looked away.


message 15268: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan felt that prick of guilt at the back of mind for who he was.
((DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA!!))


message 15269: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan felt that prick of guilt at the back of mind for who he was.
((DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA!!))


message 15270: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Declan looked down

"Nothing. I was just looking."

"Alright." Patrik said leaving her be."


The woman narrowed her eyes but went back to watching the prisoners.

"I feel...like...I need to push," Salem groaned. "Should I?"


message 15271: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((YESHH!))

Dani reached for his hand, feeling guilty for the telltale marks on her wrists.


message 15272: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik nodded
"Yeah Go for it."

((OMG THANK GOD!!))

Declan caught a glace of them out of the corner of his eye
"What's that?"


message 15273: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "Nothing," she said quickly, pulling her sleeves farther down.


message 15274: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan reached for her arm
"No what."


message 15275: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "Nothing," she repeated, kind of sharply.


message 15276: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Dani." Declan said firmly gripping her wrist


message 15277: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani tried not to wince.


message 15278: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments He flipped her wrist over and pulled on her sleve.


message 15279: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani wanted to cry and run away and hide forever and possibly slap him and kiss him and rip her hand away.


message 15280: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What have you been doing?" he asked sounding a little sad.


message 15281: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "Nothing," she said, trying to keep her voice from cracking.


message 15282: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Shit!" she shouted, laughing hysterically afterwards.


message 15283: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Dani" Declan said looking her in the eyes "We'll get through this. I promise."

Patrik was kind of confused


message 15284: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani nodded and hugged him.


message 15285: by Ky (last edited Oct 08, 2010 08:12PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: ""Dani" Declan said looking her in the eyes "We'll get through this. I promise."

Patrik was kind of confused"


"Can't exactly have them..." she slowly calmed down. "In pants."

((it's been so long I don't remember what she was wearing. But I've decided she's in pants.))


message 15286: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik smirked
"Yeah..."

Declan pulled her close to him and breathed her in.


message 15287: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani pressed her face against his chest, trying to hold back tears.


message 15288: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You're my girl, I'm sorry that you feel you need to do that." Decllan said softly


message 15289: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Patrik smirked
"Yeah..."

Declan pulled her close to him and breathed her in."


Salem closed her eyes and shifted around until she could get her pants off.


message 15290: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani shrugged. "It's been happening for about a year now."


message 15291: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik put a blanket under her and then one over her legs.

Declan looked sad for another moment then said
"You should have told me."


message 15292: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "I know," she murmured.


message 15293: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah.." Declan nodded slowly


message 15294: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem opened her eyes slightly. "Thanks Pat," she murmured. He probably didn't understand how much she was glad to have him with her at that time.


message 15295: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani closed her eyes. "I'm sorry," she said quietly.


message 15296: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You're welcome Salem." Patrik said easily

"It's ok Love." DEclan said truthfully.


message 15297: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem pushed with the next contraction, biting her lip to cut off the sounds that crawled and tore at her throat.


message 15298: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "No, it's not."


message 15299: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments The man looked at the woman
"Is Waverly at pur disposal?" he breathed

Declan shrugged
"We'll get through it."


message 15300: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani looked at him. "Really?"


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