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((didnt' see this one...))Patrik almost laughed
The man just glared.
((it's 'kay. Happens to me all the time.))Her stomach clenched and she held a hand to it, wincing. "Agh.."
((hey Emmie!))Declan almost dreaded the hours that went by too quickly.
Patrik looked at her
"You sure you're ok?"
Dani wondered what was up with Declan. ((Time skip?))
"Nope," she said simply, holding her abdomen tighter.
((Yup.))Declan was at Dani's house, wishing that he had canceled.
Patrik made her sit down.
The man shot a smug look at the woman.
Dani heard the knocking and opened the door, flying tackle-hugging him.
The woman nodded.Salem clenched her jaw to stifle a cry.
Declan stumbled back a few paces"Jez Dani."
The man waved for some one to get Patrik the things he would soon be asking for.
Patrik swore under his breath
"Figures."
((Dani glomped Declan!))The woman laughed coldly.
"No," she whispered. "It can't- they can't- it's not time yet!"
((Yay! Haha.))Dani smiled against his shoulder. "Hello."
((lol))Declan grinned a little
"Hey." he said in his adorable Irish accent.
The man just stood there, smug in all his correctness.
"Well they are Salem, and I can't do anything about it here." Patrik said with forced calm. He knew what happened to babies that were born while their mothers were kidnapped.
"No," she whispered. "This wasn't supposed to happen." In that moment she found herself able to hate something, if not someone, and it felt horrid. Salem couldn't stop herself from crying out the next time the pain hit her.The woman disappeared for a bit.
"I'm sorry Salem." Patrik said sitting with her. He couldn't do much for the pain. But he did what he could.Declan grinned at her
Declan took her hand and looked around "so you're positive you want to go to Lookin' Out?"
Patrik looked at her
"Honestly? I have no clue, except keep these people away from your kids when they get here." he said it so simply and calmly.
Patrik was always the best person to have around in this situation.
"Oka-" she was swept away by a wave of pain that --surprisingly-- had a vision attached.
Dani shrugged. "We can go somewhere else..."
Declan shook his head"I'm asking you, do you want to go there?"
Patrik just sat with her.
She grabbed his hand and unwittingly formed a connection that let him see what she Saw.
Patrik was jerked back, taken off gaurd by the vision.Declan looked at her
"Dani. Pick. PLease...?"
"Well, there was this other place..."
It was horrible and terrifying. She Felt it all as if she were truly there and she winced. "Sorry Pat..." she managed to mumble.
((oh lord! I've been forgetting them!))Declan brightened
"What place?"
Patrik nodded
"THat sucked." he managed to say.
"A park. I've been wanting to go to it since we moved here."
((olo it's okay Hann.))"Yeah...I know..."
((HORAY!!!!))Declan nodded
"I'll take you there."
Patrik sat back shaking his head to clear it.
The pains were getting closer and closer to one another at a steady rate.
Patrik looked at her again"You got to keep talking to me Salem."
Declan pulled her to his side.
Dani smiled and moved closer. Then she remembered and stealthily pulled her sleeves over her wrists.
Declan smiled at her."Because my powers are all wonky now thanks to the vision." Patrik said
The man walked back in with a stack of things.
"Here. You were about to demand those."
Hawk glared around her shop. She shared it with Sparrow, so it was a music/art shop.
({Hannah}) wrote: "Declan smiled at her."Because my powers are all wonky now thanks to the vision." Patrik said
The man walked back in with a stack of things.
"Here. You were about to demand those.""
Salem closed her eyes hard, biting her lip. "I can't, Pat."
Hawk watched as Sparrow strode in, grabbed a viola, and paced back to his studio, no doubt to paint it.
Declan walked with her"You have to tell me where the park is."
Patrik gave her his hand and nodded
"Alright."
The woman was back and she watched them closely.Salem clutched his hand like a lifeline. "Ohmigawd."
Dani told him where it was as they walked.
The man stood next to the woman and her scrutiny. Patrik's hand hurt after a few minutes
"I can't do more than I am, Salem. I'm sorry."
Declan followed her directions.
She was tempted to speak, but instead only watched."No..I know...they're coming...they're really coming...I can't believe it." She loosened her grip.
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"I don't think that has anything to do with me needing to throw up," she said with false sweetness.
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