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message 101: by [deleted user] (new)

"Then we better get moving" Gwen said. "But does anybody have anything to eat, I feel like I haven't eaten in weeks, wait, I haven't eaten in weeks. Well anything besides nuts and berries."


message 102: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv chuckled and looked back at the McDonalds "Well there is food in there,"


message 103: by [deleted user] (new)

"Ok, um how do I get it?" Gwen asked embarrassed


message 104: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You go in and ask for it. Well, now you can take it," Rife chuckled.
"I'll help you," Liv said walking to Gwen


message 105: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen looked at all of the options on the brightly colored menu board. "What's a hamburger, is it like ham on bread?" she asked confused.


message 106: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "No like ground cow on bread," Liv said


message 107: by [deleted user] (new)

"Do they have any salad?" Gwen looked seriously sick.


message 108: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Um maybe, Why you would want it is beyond me," Liv shrugged


message 109: by [deleted user] (new)

"It's healthy, but that's pretty much all I've been eating the last couple weeks. Ok, you get me the most fattening things they have here, ok? And...I'll...eat it." Gwen shuddered a little.


message 110: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ok sounds good," Liv said standing up


message 111: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen waited nervously for her meal.


message 112: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Returning Liv ploped down a Double bacon cheese burger and sat down grinning. "Enjoy,"


message 113: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen looked from her to the burger and finally picked it up. She raised it to her lips and took a small bite. "Oh, this is amazing!" She said before devoring the thing in almost record time.


message 114: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv laughed "I knwo how anyone lived with out them," She shook her head.


message 115: by [deleted user] (new)

"That filled me up, and I don't want to keep the others waiting, so lets go." Gwen said lazily.


message 116: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ok sounds good," Liv said standing up and walking out of the McDonalds.


message 117: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen followed her out secretly thinking about how she didn't want to go anywhere. She could live off of Double Bacon Cheese Burgers.


message 118: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "ok all ready to go?" Liv said slipping into stepp beside Rife.


message 119: by [deleted user] (new)

"Are there going to be McDonalds where we're going?" Gwen asked hopefully, her blue eyes twinkling.


message 120: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy laughed throwing a glance at Patrik "Most likely not,"


message 121: by [deleted user] (new)

"Oh well, I guess I'm ready then." She shook her head disappointed.


message 122: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I'm just waiting for Thaya to tell us where we are going," Patrik shrugged as the first few rain drops fell.


message 123: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 05, 2009 07:48PM) (new)

Gwen leaned her head back and felt the droplets on her face, remembering the tropical storms of her childhood. She let out a sad sigh when she thought of spending them with Grant.


message 124: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy laughed at the drops as they hit her hot skin. She looked up and grinned at Patrik, he grinned back at her.


message 125: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 05, 2009 07:48PM) (new)

As Gwen watched Emmy and Patrik she got a mischeveous gleam in her eye. I'm not matching anyone up anymore, look where it got Addy, she reminded herself.


message 126: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv saw the look and rolled her eyes and whispered in Gwen's ear "Don't bother. They already are together, I swear when they did I was so happy. It took them like 7 years."


message 127: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yeah, I know that feeling." She got a far of look in her eyes, as if she were in an entirely different world.


message 128: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You have your eye on anyone?" Liv grinned


message 129: by [deleted user] (new)

"Not anymore," She practically whispered.


message 130: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I'm sorry," Liv said


message 131: by [deleted user] (new)

"It was my fault, it was all my fault. I could have prevented it anytime since we left." She seemed to say this more to herself than Liv.


message 132: by Hannah (last edited Aug 05, 2009 07:58PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Why do I have a feeling it wasn't entirely your fault?" Liv said gently


message 133: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen wouldn't meet her eyes and wiped away a tear.


message 134: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik looked at Gwen and said "You ok?"


message 135: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 05, 2009 08:05PM) (new)

"Yeah, I'm fine, just the rain." She rambled still not meeting anyones eyes. "Do we know where we're going now?"


message 136: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Nope, We don't know yet, if you dont like the rain go into the woods. You can go with Rife, if you don't," Emmy said her smile faltering when she saw Gwen face.


message 137: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 05, 2009 08:13PM) (new)

"Yeah, thanks, I think I'll do that." She said, her voice breaking, and practically ran into the woods before anyone could say anything else.


message 138: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked at Liv "What happened?" she mouthed
"NO idea," Liv mouthed back


message 139: by [deleted user] (new)

When Gwen got into the woods, she sat on a rock, her hands on her face, and thought about all that had happened the last month, her body racking((is that the right word)) with sobs.


message 140: by [deleted user] (new)

When Gwen got into the woods, she sat on a rock, her hands on her face, and thought about all that had happened the last month, her body racking((is that the right word)) with sobs.


message 141: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((yeah)) Rife walked into teh woods after her, he sat down next to her and let her cry
((I gtg))


message 142: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 05, 2009 08:30PM) (new)

((ok see ya later))
She leaned into him and put her head on his chest. He reminded her so much of Grant. Oh, she missed him so much. His big smile, how he would just hold her and let her cry when she thought she couldn't do it anymore, and how he always loved he even when she told he she didn't love him. And now she would never be able to tell him how she really felt.


message 143: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife put an arm around her shoulders and held her.


message 144: by [deleted user] (new)

When she couldn't cry anymore she looked at him. Thank you was all she said, but she stayed there with his arm around her shoulder and her head on his chest.


message 145: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Anytime," He said gently


message 146: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 05, 2009 08:42PM) (new)

"We probably better go see if they want to leave," She said still in his arms. It felt like home.((I'm not keeping you am I))


message 147: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((nope i'm sneaky! I'm technically in bed sleeping))
"I don't think we'll leave untill the rain stopps. And Emmy won't let Patrik move the storm so... It'll be a while." He shrugged


message 148: by [deleted user] (new)

((sorry, a fried of mine came over, so I sort of abandand, abandend(whatever) you))
"Ok," She said and just stayed where she was. Eventually her breathing became even as she fell asleep.


message 149: by Hannah (last edited Aug 06, 2009 05:58AM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife smiled gently as he untangled himself from Gwen and went back to the group.
When he got out of the woods he said
"She fell asleep,"
Liv looked up, hair dripping from the rain and relpied "Is she ok?"
"Yeah, she's upset about something,"
"Oh,"
Liv looked over to where Emmy and Patrik were standing, well not as much standing as they were kissing. Liv smiled and said to Rife
"I can't believe it took them so long to finally get together,"
"I know, I mean even I saw it before they did,"
"They are soaked," Liv said laughing at how Patrik and Emmy didn't notice.
"Oh I think they notice, they just don't care. A fire Lyr and a Water Lyr, who would have thought?" Rie said shaking his head, water droplets rained down from his brown curls.
Liv smiled at him "They are like two halves of the same whole, complete opposites and a perfect fit. It's almost funny, they are so different and still the same. It's har to wrap your head around if your not them,"
Rife looked over at them now smiling himself, Emmy's tattoos were glowing softly and Patrik's eyes, he could see the color they were from here, a bright blue. He laughed softly to himself.



message 150: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen woke up in the dark cold, wet, alone, and hungry again. She had a panic attack thinking she was still on the run untill she remembered Rife and Emmy. She was still calming herself down when as she made her way out of the woods towards the group.


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