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message 14201: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What happened to no fire?" she said, grabbing Emmy's wrist.

Damien nodded. "Yeah. Doesn't look like much, but it should work."

"I've never seen this many!"


message 14202: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked at her
"And when have you ever known me to be fair?" she looked slightly amused

Josiah nodded
"Alright. Let's go."

"I thought you've never seen any of them." Patrik laughed


message 14203: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Oh I an go the same way Emmy. Remember the last time we fought?" Salem smiled slowly. "I know you do."

Damien nodded. "Quick."

"Well...I've seen bits through memories of Salem's, but there are so many here!" she giggled.


message 14204: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy took her hand back, fires still going on around her.

Josiah was already moving


Patrik smiled
"There are so many."


message 14205: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Fine. Play dirty," Salem didn't use her energy tricks yet, choosing instead to be a major brat and make Emmy remember things she hated to.

Damien poked his back. "Vite! Hurry, faster."

"How are we supposed to choose?" she spun, looking shocked and confused. "I don't think I can."


message 14206: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy nodded, she was going to do so.

Josiah didn't say anything he just ran.

"Enie meanie miney moe?" Patrik ventured

((I gtg tryouts in the morning. I'll be on late tomorrow.))


message 14207: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((alright. I have to get up early tomorrow too. Good luck at tryouts!))

Salem sent the images, allowing sound and feeling to accompany them.

Damien ran behind him, praying they'd get there in time and that it would work.

Farrow grinned. "Sure."


message 14208: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I MADE JV VOLLEYBALL!!!))

The Emmy that would have hurt at those images was tucked away in a box far away from the light. THis Emmy was what they wanted, stone cold and willing to bring their every whim to life.

Josiah skidded to a stop at the entrance of the arena the girls were in and looed down on the scene.

Patrik nodded
"Go for it."


message 14209: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*claps loudly* CONGRATS HANNAH!))

"Ah, I see..." Salem said slowly. ((I think that there should end up being pain at some point.))

Damien did too. "It doesn't look like they've gotten too far for these to work..."

"Eenie meenie, miney, moe..." she trailed off. "This one!"


message 14210: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Declan stood in thet shower letting the hot water seep into every pore.

Emmy laughed
"Sorry Salem. I wont anymore. That was my one last one."

Josiah looked at him
"What?""


By four PM, Dani wanted to crawl into a hole an die. She couldn't get Declan out of her head.


message 14211: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((:DDD THANK YOU!!!!!))
((And I agree))
((But who does what to who?))
Emmy shrugged and the fire flared up around her licking at their feet and climbing up the air.

Josiah looked again
"HOw are we going to get these close enough to them?"

Patrik nodded
"Alright!"

Declan was ready to die himself, everything was so much worse than it ever had been before.


message 14212: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Emmy could burn Salem. I'm trying to figure out what Salem would do to Emmy, since Emmy's fire is a lot stronger. :D))

Salem's eyes flashed. "Turning up the heat, eh?" Apparently she still had bad jokes.

Damien frowned. "Will they ever have a break moment?"

Farrow grinned. "It looks cool."


message 14213: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((That could work for me. So Sorry Salem, Emmy will be too when she'd herself. How Bad?))

Emmy stared the flames leaping in response to her mood.

"NOt untill one or both is dead." Josiah said

Patrik nodded and rented it
"Let's go."


message 14214: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Um, just...I dunno. Enough that she would be forced to acknowledge the pain. As long as you don't mark her face. :D))

Salem put her hair back under her hat. There was no way she'd let it burn.

Damien swore. ((now would be a good time to figure out what these things are, so we know what we can do with them.))

Farrow held it in her hands. "You have to make a portal right?"


message 14215: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Ok I can do that))

Emmy let the fire twist and tangle around Salem's feet and moved up one of her legs.

((Yeah... Maybe its a frequency that jams the mind control. or maybe its a recording of the Shadow Song....))
Josiah watched unhappy with teh turn of events.

"Yeah. I can do it though"
((I gtg i have a drs appt. Ttyl))


message 14216: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okay, ttyl))

Salem's face contorted in pain as she tried unsuccessfully to suffocate the fire.

((maybe there's one of each, and the frequency thing allows them to actually hear the shadow song for what it is.))
"We have to do it soon, Josiah. Really soon."

"Well, you did it before, so I figured."


message 14217: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Hello hello hello!))

Emmy just let her eyes keep the fire in check it didn't move past her knee.

((alright. Sounds like a great plan))
Josiah was already gone, moving through the place in seconds he was a few yards away from the girls.
"Please work." he breathed placing the devices next to eachother and flicking the switch.
The sound that left them made him want to cover his ears.

Patrik nodded and in seconds they were standing on the brink of the portal
"Ladies first?"


message 14218: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((hola! How goes it?))

((*smiles*))

Salem flinched at the sound until she heard what it truly was. It still took a moment for her to get out of the control, and when she did, the fire seemed to burn hotter, the pain just that much worse now that she had her senses back. The Shadow Song...

Damien watched in anticipation.

Farrow hesitated and then stepped through.


message 14219: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Pretty well. You?))
((Hehehe))

There it was again, the song that had done so much to her. That song, she was sure she knew it, like some childhood lullaby that you knew right from the first word. Emmy blinked quickly, regaining control over herself. The first thing that hit her was the sound, fire on skin how happy it felt to be surving its purpose. She killed it instantly, everything that she had just been dying with it.

Josiah sighed in releif when the flames died and it was silent. No one moved, no breath stirred the air, they were all waiting just as he was.

Patrik followed her quickly.


message 14220: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((YEah. :D))

Salem reached out a hand to Emmy, her eyes dark with pain. "We have...we have to get...out.."

Damien went to stand by Josiah. "It worked."

Farrow set the movie on the counter. "Two portals in one day.."


message 14221: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah, we do." Emmy nodded taking her hand.
"THank God." Josiah said "Girls!" he raised his voice to them.
Emmy's head whipped over to him, he was waving them over
"This way."

"Not so bad right?" Patrik asked


message 14222: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem winced. "He's loud," she murmured. As long as she didn't think about the pain....okay who was she kidding? It still hurt like hell.

Damien froze time except for them to give them a moment.

"It's still weird...but not scary anymore."


message 14223: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy thanked Damien with her eyes.
Josiah was at Salem's side as soon as time stopped
"You good to walk?" he asked concerned.

"That's good." Patrik said nodding.


message 14224: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Damien nodded slightly.
"I think I can," she said slowly. "To get out of here? I think I could do anything."

"Yeah. Really good, thanks Patrik."


message 14225: by Hannah (last edited Aug 18, 2010 07:05PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Alright good. You wont have to go far anyway." Josiah said pointing to a spot on the wall and making a portal.
"Josiah, you go first, then Salem." Emmy said nodding at it.

"You're welcome." Patrik said trailing off. He looked around,
"Portal is going to be here." he pointed at the spot seconds before it appeared


message 14226: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem went over the fastest she could without screaming. She gave the okay sign.
Damien urged them on. "I can't hold the time much longer."

"Woah," she said. "That's insane. How'd you know?"


message 14227: by Hannah (last edited Aug 18, 2010 07:12PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah followed then Emmy, landing in the living room.
Patrik looked happy to see Emmy and Salem again then he noticed the blood
"What happened?"
"Can you heal her please?" Emmy asked ignoring the question
"Sure get Salem up on the counter." Patrik said nodding.
Josiah scooped Salem up and placed her on the counter like he was asked.


message 14228: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem was embarrassed, but she didn't have time to dwell on that. It amused her that this was a lot like when she'd first met them all. She had refused to let Patrik heal her then, but she sure as hell wasn't going to refuse it now.

Farrow was struck speechless.


message 14229: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik looked at her funny
"You run into your own fire Salem?" he smiled a little
"And it's not that bad, I know it hurts like hell but it's not that bad." he was already healing her leg as he was talking.
Josiah was watching Patrik as he worked, just as Emmy was.


message 14230: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem frowned. "Why are you looking at me like that? And no, I didn't. My fire doesn't bite me," she said simply.
Damien went to stand with Farrow.


message 14231: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani was horribly confused on what had happened the night before.


message 14232: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Mine got her." Emmy said evenly, feeling guiltier than she let on. She was sure Salem could tell as could Patrik.
Patrik looked confused
"What?"
"Jedi death match" JOsiah said by way of explaining
"What?" Patrik said again

Declan looked at his watch an dfigured it was time to go see Dani or at least talk to her.


message 14233: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani was helping her brother with his homework.


message 14234: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan was there in minutes and knocking on the door


message 14235: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani got the door. "Hi."


message 14236: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan smiled at her
"Hi."


message 14237: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "As in the stupid people used mind control and tried to make us kill each other." Salem murmured. "And Emmy, don't worry about it."


message 14238: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Emmys normal clothes http://www.polyvore.com/emmys_day_to/... ))
Patrik made a face
"That's just great."
Emmy nodded and Josiah sat down.


message 14239: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "So," Dani was trying to think of something to say.


message 14240: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Im sorry about last night. It couldn't be avoided." Declan said in a rush.


message 14241: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((love it!))

"Yeah. But Josiah and Damien fixed it."


message 14242: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Thank you! I'll get better at it. Im excited for the potential this has...))

Emmy nodded in agreement
"So I owe you two a thank you?" Patrik said to Josiah and Damien
"yes, you do." Josiah nodded "But more Damien than me."


message 14243: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((so much potential.))

Damien tipped his imaginary hat. "No problem."

Salem looked at Emmy closely. As closely as she could manage, that is. Don't dwell on it. We weren't ourselves.


message 14244: by Ji Mei (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) (sorry to interrupt, but i want to join so can some one give a brief summary? again sorry!)


message 14245: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((hells yes.))
((Ji Mei, breif summarys are long gone. It's hard to explain....))

Patrik grinned at him then finished Salem's leg.
"Alright. You're all set."

Emmy nodded
I know. Trust me hun, I know.
Josiah looked at the pair closely


message 14246: by Ky (last edited Aug 18, 2010 07:55PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Thanks Patrik. I don't even want to think about what I would've done if you couldn't do that." Salem breathed, sitting up at stretching out.
Then stop feeling guilty. She could feel Josiah watching her.


message 14247: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Yeah I am about to riiiight now! Emmy grinned at her.
"Yup anytime." Patrik said moving from his position.
Josiah stood up silently and moved outside.


message 14248: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem smiled at Emmy and then jumped off the counter, patting Damien's shoulder. "Thanks bro."
She hugged Patrik and then went outside after Josiah.


message 14249: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik stood and Emmy didn't wait any longer, she was in his arms in seconds.

Josiah looked up at the sound of the door opening.
"Salem." he said gently


message 14250: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Josiah," she murmured. "How are you feeling?"


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