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message 13851: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I won't call you Taps if you don't want me to." Farrow said, tracing designs on the counter.

((thanks))

Waverley kept it up until she was sure he was ready. Then she took her hands back and smiled slightly. "Jojo."


message 13852: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan looked back at her


message 13853: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani half-smiled at him.


message 13854: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "it's ok" Patrik shook his head

((your welcome))

The real Josiah was caged up in his own head, the ultimate prison.


message 13855: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No it's not. If you don't want to be called something, why should I be allowed to?"

Waverley clapped once. "He's ready, are they?"
Damien shook his head. "Not unless they're meant to wear the clothing they came in."


message 13856: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "Dani half-smiled at him."


message 13857: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik laughed
"Ok, please don't. Unless you want to bug me then by all means call me Taps."

((Josiah hates me right now...))

Josiah just stood there, silently.

Emmy stopped back in the spot she started in, she listened. Footsteps were approaching she could hear them echoing down the hall.
Salem....


message 13858: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan grinned at her


message 13859: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani's smile grew.

((Something needs to happen...))


message 13860: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Josiah would, yes. Salem and Emmy are going to hate us too.))

Farrow smiled at him. "Got it."

Waverley smiled. "I haven't done something like this in a long time...I think they should change...I'm guessing the clothing they wear now covers much too much of their skin. Have them changed."
Damien thoughr it was weird to have a five year old ordering people around.

Salem sat up too fast. What's going on?


message 13861: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments (( i gtg my sisers in my room and the comp is keeping her up XP i'll talk ti you two tomorrow))


message 13862: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((aw okay. Talk to you tomorrow!))


message 13863: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Bye!))


message 13864: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan laughed a little ((Yes I agree with you Emmie))

Patrik nodded and sat
"So what else?" he needed someone to keep his mind off Emmy and Salem.

People are comming. I thought you should be awake, don't let anyone take you by suprise. Especially while you're at their mercy. Emmy listened as the footsteps came closer.


message 13865: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What's your favourite....car?" Farrow asked randomly, like most other things Farrow did.

Thanks Em....oh...I hear it now.


message 13866: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani raised an eyebrow.

((So...))


message 13867: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Pickup" Patrik told her

Yeah. It's going to be hard for them to find me though... I blend in.

Declan kissed her quickly


message 13868: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani was shocked for a second before kissing him back.


message 13869: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan pulled back and smiled but apologized.


message 13870: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani kissed him again.


message 13871: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: ""Pickup" Patrik told her

Yeah. It's going to be hard for them to find me though... I blend in.

Declan kissed her quickly"


"Really? What company would you have it manufactured by?"

Salem laughed. I don't blend in at all. I stand out like a sore thumb. The doors to both rooms opened.


message 13872: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Chevy or Ford." Patrik said naturaly

We're fucked either way,
Emmy looked down to see the floor under her glowing white. The fact that it was visible made her stomach hurt with nerves.

Declan pulled her close


message 13873: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani wrapped her arms around his neck.


message 13874: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Ford. I agree with that."

Salem flinched when she saw the shadow creeping across the floor, following it to the open door. "Well that's just dandy."


message 13875: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments DEclan pulled away
"Stop. We're drunk, well... you're more drunk than I am."


message 13876: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani frowned. "I'm not drunk," she said before trying to kiss him again.


message 13877: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik smirked
"Their F-150 is pretty impressive" he said

"Emmeline." A voice sneered coldly
"We can see you," the same voice said "Even though you can't see us..."
The voices seemed to bounce off the walls and creep up on her tap her on the shoulder and then vanish again.

Josiah was moving down the hallway with out a sound, he stopped in front of a nondescript door and waited untill he got the all set.

Declan held her
"Yes, you are."


message 13878: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani was about to cry.


message 13879: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan kissed her gently
"Hey. Let's go home."


message 13880: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani sniffled.


message 13881: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Don't." He said softly


message 13882: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "My dad had one," she exclaimed. "And it was tan, almost gold."

Waverley smiled. "Go in."


message 13883: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani glanced at him.


message 13884: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah? Was it one of the big ones or the smaller ones?" Patrik asked

Emmy was forced into the clothes that were thrown infront of her. What she ended up in was a metallic silver tanktop and stark white spandex with all black high top cons. The fact that she was in different clothes alerted her to what was about to happen to her.

Josiah leaned on the door and pushed it open slowly
((Who first?))


message 13885: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "Dani glanced at him."


message 13886: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan looked back at her


message 13887: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani blushed.


message 13888: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan ((needs to have something happen.)) felt his phone vibrate, which was a miracle n and of itself, he talked to no one. He answered it
"Yes...?"


message 13889: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Mmmhhmm...OMG! I KNOW!))

Zack was walking out of bar, when he saw Dani sitting in a cab with some dude. ((Dani's ex...))


message 13890: by Ky (last edited Aug 10, 2010 07:42PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I don't know. You choose. Or we can make Emmie choose....haha))

"Big one," she said, looking at her hands, lost in memories. Farrow smiled slightly.

A black bundle landed with a soft thud at her feet and she got to her knees, fumbling with the ties that held it closed. Inside was clothing that she desperately did not want to wear. She had no choice, though, as the people who'd brought it, people she couldn't see, forcefully undressed and redressed her. She felt like a doll, helpless and undignified. Salem wanted to cry and lash out at the same time but she couldn't. Something wouldn't let her.
The long, loose white shirt dress was paired with black shorts so scant she wasn't sure if they could ever be considered appropriate, even under a shirt that covered them fully. The only part of the outfit that she didn't mind was the tuque she was now wearing, her hair trapped inside, only her bangs and short, wispy tendrils left to frame her face. The shoes made her want to gag. White. So. Much. White. And as soon as they came, they were gone, taking the shadows with them.

(( her outfit, minus the shorts. http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=21... ))


message 13891: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Um. I'm lost now...))


message 13892: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Emmie wrote: "((Um. I'm lost now...))"

((We're trying to figure out who will be tortured first.))


message 13893: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Oh. Who are the options?))


message 13894: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Emmy or Salem.))


message 13895: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((hahah I think we should...))

Patrik smiled
"Those are the best ones."

The floor beneath her feet was still that startling white that made her eyes hurt. The firey copper of her hair was the only splash of color in this place and it reflected off the metallic of her tanktop. She felt so exposed in that moment she longed for the darkness. So she would at least have the upperhand, which if she knew anything about kidnapping and torturing, she would need.


message 13896: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I know," she said quietly, still remembering.

Emmy! Salem's fists were clenched around the hem of her shirt, wishing it were dark so she didn't feel so lost in this sea of white.


message 13897: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Mmmhhmm...OMG! I KNOW!))

Zack was walking out of bar, when he saw Dani sitting in a cab with some dude. ((Dani's ex...))

Dani watched him.


message 13898: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((So Emmie....who should go first? *smiles*))


message 13899: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Ummm... I think Emmy.))


message 13900: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmie wrote: "((Mmmhhmm...OMG! I KNOW!))

Zack was walking out of bar, when he saw Dani sitting in a cab with some dude. ((Dani's ex...))"


Declan looked like someone had just shot him
"What do you mean?"

Patrik fell silent.

What? Emmy said trying to move out of the white spot, it didn't work. It just followed her.


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