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message 13751: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "Declan sighed
"My turn right? I have anger issues.""



message 13752: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: ""You rock Farrow" Patrik decided

Me too. SO no, it's not wrong of you. EMmy walked in to the building lighting little fires where her footprints were.

Josiah threw a look at him
"That's rea..."


"Really?" Farrow grinned. "I'm glad you don't actually hate me like Damien and Jo think you do."

Salem chuckled at the fires and used her wind to turn them into stationary tornadoes.

Damien grinned. "I knew you liked her. Right from the first day."


message 13753: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "Declan sighed
"My turn right? I have anger issues."""


((Right, sorry.))

Dani nodded. "I have trust issues."


message 13754: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Hannah had to go to bed.))


message 13755: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Okay, thanks Kenny.))


message 13756: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((no prob))


message 13757: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik shrugged
"I don't have a temper and prejudice like Emmy does."

Emmy smiled sweetly at the glares she recieved.

"It wasn't about liking her." Josiah said "It was about staying true to my word."
Lair... the voice in his head said


message 13758: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((If I disappear it's because I'm being driven home, but I'll be back either way.))


"Yeah, well not everyone does," she said. "You're a good guy, Patrik, in every sense of the word. Perfect for Emmy."

Salem sent the tornadoes after all those who dared glare at them.

"You like her. Mon Dieu, you're in love with her. I can tell."


message 13759: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok i'll see you when you get back))

Patrik looked up and smiled at her
"Thanks Farrow, it means a lot to me."

Emmy bit back the laugh that was bubling up.

Josiah sighed and leaned against the wall
"And if I do love her?"


message 13760: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((kay, but I'm not gone yet. They just said they'd be back before one.))

Farrow grinned. "I think you're the first person to ever say that to something I've said."

Salem chuckled, fingering the necklace that she still wore from the night of her party. She didn't ever want to take it off. It felt...like Josiah was there with her. She had just begun to notice it, the sharp but warm tingling coming from the pendant.

Damien sighed and closed his eyes. "Love is doomed, and yet it blooms. Darkness and light, love endures," he quoted. ((He quoted me.))


message 13761: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Nice...Babysitting?))

Patrik laughed and shrugged
"Maybe you should say nice things more often..."

Emmy kept walking untill she was shoved into a side room, one that was dark and cold.

((Whoa deep))
Josiah looked at him
"That was intense, Damien."


message 13762: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yuppers!))

"I just tell the truth," she countered. "Lying is something I consider to be cruel."

The room Salem was locked in was purely white, no shadows at all. It scared her more than it should. Hey...Em.

((Thanks.))

Damien shrugged. "I don't know where it's from, it just popped into my head. Was it a good enough answer?"


message 13763: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "Declan sighed
"My turn right? I have anger issues."""

((Right, sorry.))

Dani nodded. "I have trust issues.""



message 13764: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((:D fun?))

Patrik thought about that
"You would be one of the few..."

Emmy was standing in the middle of the room, unable to see through the peircing darkness. She set fire to the ground infront of her hoping for some releif. Nothing happened, there was no heat no light, yet she could feel teh fire there. How it wanted to speed through the room and devour everything within.
Salem...

JOsiah put his head in his hands
"Yeah, maybe..." He sighed "But now to the more pressing matter, how much trouble am I about to be in?"


message 13765: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Boring. This part is fun, but in the in-between parts I usually do polyvore stuff. Since this isn't my computer I don't have that available and there's nothing good on tv.))

"Because truth isn't valued enough," she said, looking around. "Do you want a drink?"

Is your place as disturbing as mine?

Damien grinned. "I'll try to soften the blow for you, but I can't fix everything."


message 13766: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "Emmie wrote: "Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "Declan sighed
"My turn right? I have anger issues."""

((Right, sorry.))

Dani nodded. "I have trust issues."""



message 13767: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((XP no fun...))

"No because people don't want to hear it." Patrik said simply.

I feel blind, it's worse than the Shadow prison.

Josiah shook his head
"Just don't interfere, I'll be fine.'


message 13768: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "((XP no fun...))

"No because people don't want to hear it." Patrik said simply.

I feel blind, it's worse than the Shadow prison.

Josiah shook his head
"Just don't interfere, I'll be fine.'"


((Hannah...))


message 13769: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Im sorry Emmie!))
Declan closed his eyes
"My older brother and I were playing a game one day and he fell and broke his leg. No one ever figured out that he tripped over me and broke his leg because of it."


message 13770: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "((XP no fun...))

"No because people don't want to hear it." Patrik said simply.

I feel blind, it's worse than the Shadow prison.

Josiah shook his head
"Just don't interfere, I'll be fine.'"


((home now though. :P))


"Maybe that's why people don't like me," she laughed lightly.

Oh Emmy, I'm sorry. I wish I could help. Salem sat on the ground and stood up immediately, cursing.

Damien shrugged, "Fine, but you'll have more of a chance if you let me help."


message 13771: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani looked at him, concern in her eyes.

((Man, now I wish I didn't have writer's block on this story...))


message 13772: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Good!))

"I don't know. Maybe." Patrik said walking up behind her and getting a drink.

It's ok, what just happened to you? Emmy sat down, the cold hurting against her abnormal body temperature.

"Fine." Josiah said "Fine."


message 13773: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "Dani looked at him, concern in her eyes.

((Man, now I wish I didn't have writer's block on this story...))"



message 13774: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo))

Farrow shrugged. "I don't usually care as long as I don't have to lie." But it's fun to twist the truth and make people guess.

Well, the floor shocked me. It's weird because it doesn't shock me when I'm standing up. It's white in here, Em. There aren't any shadows at all. It actually hurts just to look at it.

Damien smiled and then got rid of it. "They're almost here."


message 13775: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I didn't do it on purpose." Declan said "We were in a feild playing hide and seak tag. He tripped landed awkwardly. We were supposed to be working but we were tired and bored." DEclan said


message 13776: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani nodded, listening intently. "But accidents happen."


message 13777: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik scrutinized her
"You know how to manipulate the truth though."

Like 'zztt zztt' zap? or like freezing shock? White huh? Is it odd that I get the killer dark room and you get the painfully bright light one?

Josiah made a face
"Do your best to be mad at me."


message 13778: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I know, but I don't lie," she said. "I made a promise, a long time ago."

Like 'zztt zzt' zap. But now that you mention it; it's freezing in here. And yeah, it is kinda weird. Maybe cause if I was in the dark I'd just sleep or something, there was a slight smile in her mind-voice then. I love the dark. But it suffocates you, doesn't it?

"I will."
The door opened.


message 13779: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "Dani nodded, listening intently. "But accidents happen.""


message 13780: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You promised to never lie?" Patrik questioned

Emmy punched at the air in front of her in frustration.
Yeah, it does. I know you get into my head, but you don't get into all of it, at least I don't think you do. But I have enough dark spots in me that try to cancel out everything else, every day.

Josiah took on an air of nonchalance
"Hey boys."

Declan nodded
"They do, they just always seemed to happen around me."


message 13781: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Something like that," she said, avoiding the answer.

I wish we could switch Em, unless being here would bum you out. Salem looked around but settled for closing her eyes instead.

The men made no acknowledgment to him calling them boys. The gestured for him to sit and there was suddenly a chair behind him.


message 13782: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani frowned and leaned over to hug him.


message 13783: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik nodded letting her be.

Just sleep Salem. I'm not going anywhere, if you end up in dream hell. Please tell my mother to go to Hell from me. Emmy was walking in the darkness trying to find an end to the room.

Josiah wasn't suprised at the turn of events.
"And now the fun begins."

Declan hugged her back
((wow he's had a sad life.))


message 13784: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Farrow's outfit cause I had time: http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=21... What Salem will end up wearing sooner or later, made it last night: http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=21... ))

Farrow poured orange juice and then made a pot of coffee and a tea.

I can't sleep, she said suddenly. I just can't Emmy. Not here. Salem knew she wasn't going to open her eyes though.

Damien shot him a glance but didn't say anything.
"What happened back there, in your own words?"


message 13785: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Agreed.))

Dani breathed in his scent.


message 13786: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Fun both of them.))

"You wanna sit down or something?" Patrik asked tiredly

Ok well then talk to me. I'm not functioning in here anyway. I might as well be asleep She was fuming, this place was disorienting and she could feel it eating at her big thick walls in her head.

Josiah looked up at the celing smirking
"They were losing and I helped them. I said I would, so I did." he was going to be a pain. he hoped Damien understood that.


message 13787: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((haha. Thanks. Salem's is for the place they're at. She's gonna hate everything...'cept the hat. :P))

"I'm not done," she said quietly, moving stuff around.

Salem threw her a picture. Wanna watch a movie?

Damien scowled, both seriously and as part of his role.
"You said you would. And why is that?"


message 13788: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "((Agreed.))

Dani breathed in his scent."



message 13789: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((hahah I bet she will it's soooo White and not Salem!))

"Ok." Patrik nodded

Emmy shook her head
Play it anyway. I could do with the backround noise, thanks.

Josiah looked at him, annoyed and amused at teh same time. Nothng playing across his features.
"Does it matter?" he asked. I already said I wasn't telling you Damien.


message 13790: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "Emmie wrote: "((Agreed.))

Dani breathed in his scent.""



message 13791: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I think he needs to change... Drunk Declan isn't the guy I like...))

DEclan held her close, needing her to hold him together as much as she did.


message 13792: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((:P Yuppers.))

Farrow got out a large mug and poured some of the orange juice in it before pouring coffee in and topping it off with tea. She put the orange juice away and got milk and cream, putting both in before she added sugar and stirred it together.

Any requests? Romance? Comedy? Action? Thriller? Salem yawned and stretched.

((it isn't Damien asking the questions. :D))
"Yes, it does matter."


message 13793: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik looked confused
"REally?" he asked

No just whatever you put on... Emmy shrugged still pacing

((oh.... ok I gotcha.))

Josiah shrugged
"I don't know I felt bad for her."


message 13794: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "((I think he needs to change... Drunk Declan isn't the guy I like...))

DEclan held her close, needing her to hold him together as much as she did."



((I see what you mean.))

Dani felt safe in his arms.


message 13795: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow shrugged. "It just jumped out at me. It will probably taste really bad."

Okay. Just remember you said that. Salem began playing 'Pirates of the Caribbean 3: At World's End' for them both, chancing another try at sitting on the floor. It wasn't as bad this time so she laid down, almost throwing up in the process but managing not to.

((:D))
"For who?" they asked.


message 13796: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yeah... XP))
Declan pulled back
"Sorry.." he said when he did

Patrik laughed and nodded
"Yeah, it will. I may not know things like you. But I know that will taste bad."

Emmy moaned
Can I take it back? This is like 5 hours long...

Josiah looked at him
"Both of them. They gave me the puppy dog eyes, it was hard not to."


message 13797: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani blushed. "It's okay," she said, slurring slightly.


message 13798: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow grinned at him, "I have to do it."

It's this or Twilight, she teased. Nah, how about...G.I. Joe...um...Alice in Wonderland...Shutter Island...When in Rome?

Damien had to turn away. Puppy dog eyes? Ha!
The men rolled their eyes. "So you committed an act of insubordination because of that?"


message 13799: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan sighed "Let's get you home." he was slightly buzzed but still coheret. He hailed a taxi, he didn't feel like walking bak.

Patrik averted his eyes
"This is so wrong."

Emmy grinned and thought through her favorite movies
You got Terminator Salvation? The one with Christian Bale?

Josiah nodded solemnly, the perfect little sarcastic liar that he was.
"If you had been there , you would have done a lot more than just that." ((Ok I FREAKING LOVE him!!!))


message 13800: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow laughed lightly and agreed with him. She stared at the noxious concoction for a little while before taking a big sip of it. She swallowed slowly, setting the cup down on the counter.

I've never seen it, so no, I don't. Sorry.

((*laughs* I already loved him but now I think I'm obsessed. :D))
The men exchanged glances and Damien froze time for a minute so he could laugh and then put it back.
"Too bad we can't just kill him," one said to the other.


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