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message 12701: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt watched her write for a second.


message 12702: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"What are you listening to?" Jason asked, poking Kaylee's shoulder.
"Hannah Montana," she mumbled.



message 12703: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt was reading over her shoulder.


message 12704: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby stopped, not sure what to put next.


message 12705: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt was thinking hard on what to write next.


message 12706: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "((Okay. Bye!))

Zack turned to smile at her."


"So..." she said, turning to look away from Zack when she knew she was blushing. I just met him today. Why do I like him so much?


message 12707: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Any ideas?" Abby asked.


message 12708: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments [Just:] Kendall wrote: "Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "((Okay. Bye!))

Zack turned to smile at her."

"So..." she said, turning to look away from Zack when she knew she was blushing. I just met him today. W..."


Zack saw her blushing and smirked.


message 12709: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Just ignore him, Riv. IGNORE HIM! You don't need to drag this guy into your twisted life. Riviera had to look back at him and frowned when she saw him smirking. Or maybe I do need to.


message 12710: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack raised an eyebrow.


message 12711: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Drama Queen Lav (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""Any ideas?" Abby asked."

Matt shook his head.

((I think he somehow just dumped you...))


message 12712: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Riviera was the one to smirk this time, just slightly, as she took her hand out from his and opened the lid of her tea so she could drink it. She glanced over at him and mischief once again danced in her eyes.


message 12713: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Who just dumped me?))


message 12714: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Hayden just gave up on you.))


message 12715: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments [Just:] Kendall wrote: "Riviera was the one to smirk this time, just slightly, as she took her hand out from his and opened the lid of her tea so she could drink it. She glanced over at him and mischief once again danced ..."

Zack grinned.


message 12716: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Smiling back at him, Riviera turned off the sidewalk and onto the path that led through the park.


message 12717: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack followed.


message 12718: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Drama Queen Lav (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""Any ideas?" Abby asked."

Matt shook his head.

((I think he somehow just dumped you...))"


Tears started spilling out of Abby's eyes, unbidden.


message 12719: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Once inside the plant infested park she threaded her way through the taller grasses by the more overgrown section and found herself near a line of bushes. Peeking back, she slipped through, disappearing from sight. She moved quietly, hiding from Zack for fun. Riviera found a circular garden that --even overgrown as it was-- looked breathtakingly mysterious and beautiful. She sat down on a cracked stone bench in the centre and drank her tea.


message 12720: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack wondered where she was.


Matt looked at her, concerned.


message 12721: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I can't do this," she whispered, and ran out of the classroom.


message 12722: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt followed her.


message 12723: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Riviera didn't plan on telling him where she was. She wanted to know if he would even try to look or if he would just leave.


message 12724: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
She tried frantically to find a bathroom, but all the doors in the hallway led to other classrooms.


message 12725: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt dashed out after her, and grabbed her arm. "Hey, hey, what's wrong?"


message 12726: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack finally found here.

((Sorry, I can't do long descriptions right now. My characters depressed me.))


message 12727: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((That's okay.))
"Everything."


message 12728: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Zack finally found here.

((Sorry, I can't do long descriptions right now. My characters depressed me.))"


((olo, okipoki then.))

"Oh hey!" she exclaimed. "You found me."


message 12729: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Yeah...And Lav, you have no say in this. You ARE my character.))

Matt frowned. "What do you mean?"

Zack grinned. "Yep."


message 12730: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((why/how did they depress you?))

"I'm glad," she said seriously. "I wondered if you would or not...I was right," Riviera stood up and smiled brightly.


message 12731: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((I'm sorry!!!!! That makes me feel even worse!))
"I'm the one who's worthless. That no one will ever like," Abby said through her sobs that were getting worse and harder to control.


message 12732: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Gah, I'm not depressed about that anymore...Now I'm depressed because of my own pathetic life.))

"No, no," Mat said and wrapped his arms around her. "You're not."


message 12733: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack held out his hand to her.


message 12734: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Do you want to bet?" Abby said. "I bet if you knew the story of my life you wouldn't dare to say that."


message 12735: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Your life can't be pathetic. You're just that awesome. *states as fact*))

This time she took it with a soft smile and she left her tea --poor, forgotten tea-- on the bench. Riviera looked at him closely. Aw...Riv, what have you gotten yourself into?


message 12736: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt looked her in the eyes. "Well, then, tell me," he said softly.


message 12737: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"It consists of five people. Dad, Jay, Josh, Brooke and," she could barely choke out the last name, "Ben," Abby finally said. "And you know what hurts the most? I thought each and everyone of them loved me at some point in my life."


message 12738: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments [Just:] Kendall wrote: "((Your life can't be pathetic. You're just that awesome. *states as fact*))

This time she took it with a soft smile and she left her tea --poor, forgotten tea-- on the bench. Riviera looked at ..."


((Thanks, Kenny. You're awesome.))
((I just started crying for the tea.))

Zack smiled at her.


message 12739: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((So are you. xD And same. Now I want tea...))

"I like your smile, Zack," she was surprised to hear herself saying this and her eyes widened slightly.


message 12740: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Yeah. And I wanna pet my mug.))

Zack grinned. "Thanks. I like yours, too." He mentally slapped himself, Wow, that was not dorky at all. Way to go, Zack...


message 12741: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*chokes on laughter* Do it!))

Heat rose on her cheeks when she smiled shyly. "Hey, thanks..."


message 12742: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Yay!))

Zack grinned at her. Wow. She's beautiful, he thought.


message 12743: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments As long as nothing happens...Lee can't get mad...right? Oh...but Zack is so nice...and he's so handsome...gah! Riviera's grip on his hand tightened. "I just remembered something."


message 12744: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack looked at her. "What is it?"


message 12745: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Drama Queen Lav (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""It consists of five people. Dad, Jay, Josh, Brooke and," she could barely choke out the last name, "Ben," Abby finally said. "And you know what hurts the most? I thought each and everyone of them ..."

Matt listened, frowning, "Don't they?"


message 12746: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Ben might," Abby admitted. "But he's the only one."


message 12747: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt hugged her.


message 12748: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Zack looked at her. "What is it?""

She grinned. "We're skipping school...in school uniforms."


message 12749: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Zack laughed.


message 12750: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Matt hugged her."

Abby let herself stay in Matt's arms for a few seconds.


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