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message 12001: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben rolled his eyes. "You're not going to win, Abby."


message 12002: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby frowned at Ben. "I never win," she said sarcastically, even though it was true.


message 12003: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben looked at her. "That's unfortunate."


message 12004: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Your face is unfortunate."


message 12005: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben laughed. "Lies!"


message 12006: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Your face is a lie," Abby managed to keep a straight face.


message 12007: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben stared her down. "It's kind of late. Go to bed."


message 12008: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"So I get to sit around in this apartment all day, and then I get to go to bed? Sounds like I would've had more fun staying at home," Abby said, even though she knew Ben would know that was a complete and utter lie.


message 12009: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben laughed. "Okay. We'll enroll you in school tomorrow. Now get to bed."


message 12010: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Fine," Abby sighed deeply. "Good night," she gave Ben a quick hug. She dug through her bag until she found her book, A Posse of Princesses and climbed into bed to read.


message 12011: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben layed down on the couch and sat there thinking about Shannon.


message 12012: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby sighed as the words started blurring on the page. She was more tired than she wanted to admit, but she didn't want to fall asleep. She didn't want to dream.


message 12013: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben sighed, turning his thoughts to his past. To Jay, to the idiots he'd pretended to be friends with...He sat there for a second before walking to a closet and pulling an old guitar out of it. He started softly playing Dust In The Wind by Kansas.


message 12014: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((AAAAAAAH I LOVE THAT SONG! My brother plays it on the guitar! PERFECT!))


message 12015: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Why does that not surprise me...? Fizzy grapes, ibuprofen, boating, and now dust in the wind.))


message 12016: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby finally turned out the light and snuggled down under her covers. A familiar melody wafted through the crack under the door. Dust In the Wind. It was just like the old times when she'd fall asleep listening to Ben playing guitar. She let it pull her into sleep, and for the first time in months she slept with a smile on her face.


message 12017: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((It's crazy! :) ))


message 12018: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Haha I know!!))

Ben kept playing until his thoughts were calm enough to let him sleep. He fell asleep thinking about green eyes...


message 12019: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Where is Shannon anyways?))

But sweet dreams never lasted forever and soon Abby's dreams turned to thoughts of home.

((Which will be described in detail as soon as I get back.))


message 12020: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Grrr... I don't know, but we need Gwen.))


message 12021: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((We do. :P))


message 12022: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Haha are you going to describe the dream?))


message 12023: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Yeah. And then I have to go.))


message 12024: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Awww...))


message 12025: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby was standing with their back to a tree, her arms wrapped around the back and tied so tight with a jump rope her hands were losing circulation. There was mud on her white t-shirt and her purple jacket was keeping her legs connected to the tree. There was also mud smeared on her face and cockle burrs tangled in her hair. There were scratches on her bare arms that were covered in goose bumps. Her eyes were closed and she was shivering and whimpering. Josh came up to her and started laughing. "You're so pretty Abby. You know I'll always love you. You're the only one for me." He stepped closer and stroked her cheek with his hand, sending involuntary shivers through her body and a blush across her cheeks. "Beautiful," he snickered and walked away. Abby cried and cried for someone to help her, but nobody did. Nobody did.


message 12026: by Julian (last edited Jul 14, 2010 08:13PM) (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments She tripped on something and stumbled forward, barely catching herself on the edge of the door. And then, she looked up at him with her huge, grass green eyes. Ben was watching her. "You okay?" he asked. The beautiful girl nodded, before walking away. After a couple minutes, she was back. The entire train rode, they talked, and Ben watched her every move, noticed everything about her. Then, the train stopped, and she walked out without saying a word. Ben followed her. "Wait, where are you going? Cristina?" But she never turned around, even as he begged her to stay. All he heard was a gun shot. And he knew his life was over.


message 12027: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby's dream shifted and she saw Ben. She saw him running away from her. "Ben! Come back! Please!" But he kept running. "I need your help!" He turned back and looked at her for a few seconds. Her heart stopped when he waved, turned around and kept running. "He doesn't love you," Jay suddenly appeared, sneering at Abby. "Nobody will ever love you." And then his fist connected with her face, causing her screams to grow silent.


message 12028: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((YAY!!))


message 12029: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((POST SOMETHING ALREADY!))


message 12030: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben woke up to Abby screaming. He ran to his room and gently shook her awake.


message 12031: by Elliott (last edited Jul 14, 2010 08:29PM) (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Did I have a bad dream?" Abby asked Ben, brushing hair that had fallen from her ponytail with a yawn.


message 12032: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben shrugged. "Did you? You were screaming."


message 12033: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I can't remember," Abby said, confused. She never remembered her dreams once she had woken up. "I don't usually have bad dreams."


message 12034: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben didn't believe her, but only nodded. After a pause, he asked, "What do you remember about dad?"


message 12035: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Not much," Abby shrugged. "He was nice?" I hope he was nice.


message 12036: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben nodded again. "What's happened the past four years?"


message 12037: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Life's happened," Abby said blinking quickly. Josh happened."I wake up, go to school, come home, go to sleep, wake up."


message 12038: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben rolled his eyes. "What really happened?"


message 12039: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Stuff," Abby mumbled. "Stuff that doesn't matter."


message 12040: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben nodded and let the subject drop.


message 12041: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"What time is it anyways?" Abby started to shiver and picked her blanket up off the floor and snuggled into it.


message 12042: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben looked at the clock. "Three a.m."


message 12043: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"And what time is school?" Abby asked, suddenly wide awake.


message 12044: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben yawned. "I don't know. We'll get your classes and get you settled tomorrow...Or I guess today, and you van start tomorrow, okay?"


message 12045: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Alright," Abby said. "Now, I can tell you're tired so go back to bed." And I can get back to my book.


message 12046: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben shook his head. "I can't sleep."


message 12047: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Well do whatever you big people do when you can't sleep so I can sleep," Abby said, trying to sound tired. Aka read my book.


message 12048: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben sighed and reached around her, under her pillow. He pulled out the book and read the title, "Is it good?"


message 12049: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"If you like cheesy, cliche books about Princesses and Princes then yes," Abby said sheepishly. "In other words, I love it, you wouldn't."


message 12050: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben nodded and handed it back before getting up and walking to the living room.


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