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message 1001: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 22, 2009 08:28PM) (new)

((ok))
Once Gwen had composed herself, she looked up at Rife. "He's going to tell my father, they'll know you're here," She said worried.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Its ok. Emmy Pat and Liv know Im here too. If I get hurt they'll come." He smiled reassuringly at her.


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"Alright," She said and sighed, she was the one who had gotten them into this mess. "I don't even know how to stop him."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Its alright dont think about it just do it,"


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"Can you help me find my grandmother," She said, hating to ask for another favor. "She can help us."


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Jake walked around aimlessly searching for others. He felt the thirst burning his throat due to the fact he was a vampire. He wasnt telling anyone THAT though.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Of course," Rife smiled at her


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"Ok, let's check my dad's study, that's where I saw her last," she said opening the door and looking out, "he coast is clear, for now," She said


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Alright im right behind you."


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Gwen lead Rife through the maze of hallways, wondering why she hadn't seen anyone. She turned a corner and say several men standing in the middle of the halway, since they hadn't seen her she ducked quickly out of sight. She motioned to Rife that there were three men.


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((g2g))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok))
Rife smirked and put his hand on the wood floor. He closed his hand making a fist the floor turned into somethign like quicksand swallowing the three men.


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"Thanks, we're almost there," Gwen said as they moved over the now solid floor and opening a door.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Anytime," He smirked and followed her through th edoor.


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She looked around and seeing no one, she walked to a door at the back of the library, "It's just right through here," She said opening it and revealing her father and several men having a meeting, "Oops," she said guietly. It was too late to turn back, they had already seen her.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Great," Rife muttered Walking in the room, facing Gwens father.


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"Ahhh, daughter, you've finally decided to join us," He said walking toward her.
"Not if my life depended on it," Gewn said stepping back from him.
"I guess we'll just have to do it the hard way,' He motioned to one of the men in the room and the walked toward her.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "NOt gonna happen," He said making a waving motion putting up a barrier in between them and the advancing men.


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The man didn't stop walking in time and stubbled back as he hit the barrier.
"Dad, where's Grandma," Gwen asked, taking advantage of the situation.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife stayed stock still as Gwen talked around him.


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"She's...unavailable," He said thoughtfully after a moment.
"If you've done anything to hurt her, I swear I'll," Gwen started wishing the barrier wasn't there so she could pummel him.
"I sill need her, and I need you too," He said looking at her with those inteanse blue eyes that she had inherited.
"i'm not going to help you," She said defiantley, looking him straight in the eye


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife snickered as his tattoo started to shift. It swirled and snaked across his skin.


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"Not even for your sister," Hee said carefully as another man walked into the room with a bound and gagged Addy, Gwen let out a small gasp and ran into the barrier, forgetting it was there.


message 1024: by Hannah (last edited Sep 24, 2009 06:48PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife let it down as fast as he could. The barrier hit the ground audibly.
"YOu would do that to your own daughter?" Rief said appaled.


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"I don't think we've met, I'm Mr. Carter, Gwendolynn be a dear and introduce this young man to me," Gwens father said walking toward Rife.
"Don't let him touch you Rife, he can persuade better that way," Gwen said as she ran to Addy.
"Ahh, I see my mother has taught you well," Mr. Carter said, still advancing on Rife.


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Jake walked back outside. He sat down wishing he remembered where he was.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife waved his hand again and the house shuddered


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Jake saw a house shudder and he walked over to it curiously. "What the???" He murmmerd.


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He shook his head and walked away. He sat in the grass.


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"Addy," was all Gwen whisper before two men grabbed her by the arms and pulled her back. "Let go of me," She screamed tugging against them.
"For someone with so much knowledge, you sure don't use it," Mr. Carter said turning his attention to his daughter.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife went over to gwen and punched out the two men holding her. He grabbed her hand and pulled her to his side.


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"Addy," Gwen yelled as she struggled against Rife, trying to run to her sister again. She watched the men who had brought Addy in carried her out. "Where are you taking her," She demanded turning to her father, her eyes full of hatred.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Gwen stop." Rife told her. "We'll get her, your grandmother and Grant. Just stop."


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"Ok," Gwen said as she let Rife hold her back. She glared at her father.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife loosened his grip but he still held on to her.


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"She'll be safe, and so will your grandmother, for the time being of course," Mr. Carter said with a smirk. "If you help me, I would be willing to let them go."
"Why do you need them anyway?" Gwen asked disgusted at him. "You can pursuede whoever you want to do your bidding."
"You'll just have to figure that out for yourself," He said, his mouth in a tight line. "You," He pointed at a man, "Make sure these two don't leave."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "If we want to leave we will." Rife almost growled as teh man advanced.


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"I don't think you will," Mr. Carter said, his eyes glowing as brightly as Gwen's had that day in McDonalds.
"I am," Gwen said defiantly, then stopped, realizing that her father hadn't pursueded her.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "So am I," Rife laughed, "You want to try your pursuading powers again?"


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Mr. Carters eyes flickered with anger, then put his calm mask back on. "Well, I do believe you know the shadows," He said stepping backward, as did all the people around him.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife stepped back. "Yes do actually. They came over for christams ass whopping last year."


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"I just happen to know them too, what a coincidence," He said with no humor. "And I just happen to be close friends with some of them." He stepped back to his deck and hit a button on it, sounding one loud siren. The men in the room ran to the door that Addy had been taken through.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Well your humans are pathetic babys." Rife commented as they all ran out the door. "Oh shadows!" Rife yelled.


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A group of ten some odd Shadows walked in the door from behind Gwen and Rife and made their way around them.
"They won't hurt you unless I tell them to," Mr. Carter said with a smirk. "And you know what you need to do to keep me from saying anything." He looked straight at Gwen.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((srry my dog ran off had rto go get him))
"Oh feel free to hurt me." Rife smirked


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Jake heard people yelling in the house.


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Gwen looked at the ground, she wanted Rife and Addy to be safe, but she didn't want to help her father. She looked from Rife, standing there ready to take anything thrown at him, to her father, who stood as calm and unmoving as a tree. She opened her mouth, then shut it, never had she felt so unsure of what to do before.


message 1048: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife stood behind Gwen, waiting for a Shadow to betray its master. He could tell the were anxious. Some were already Shifting the Shadows around themselves transforming into bizzar animals.


message 1049: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha stood in the shadows outside the house watching the proceedings of Rife, Gwen, Mr. Carter, and the shadows'. She wondered what to do. Who's side to be on?


message 1050: by Stephanie (last edited Sep 29, 2009 03:05PM) (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Veetun walked towards a boy sitting in the grass. He thought the boy looked familiar. He searched for a name until one came. " Ahhh, Jake," Veetun murmured. He hadn't seen him for a bit and wondered what was going on with him. He hadn't seen Jake since that vampire had chased him.


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