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message 951: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen the thought jarred her. He heard me, she thought. Rife, I"m sorry, can you forgive me? Grant noticed her silence so he turned to walk out, "I'll be back," He said leaving.


message 952: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Always, he replied


message 953: by [deleted user] (new)

Thank you She ran to the door the moment Grant left, but it was still locked. They locked my in my old room, I don't know how you could get in though. She felt dizzy, but she fought it, she was not going to go there now.


message 954: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Your welcome


message 955: by [deleted user] (new)

She couldn't fight the feeling anymore, she blacked out. She was in her fathers study, but no one was there. She went over to the desk and started reading the papers on the desk. "Oh, so this is what you're planning," She said aloud.
"Yes, indeed it is," She hadn't heard her father walk in.
((G2g, with I could stay on though!!))


message 956: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 12, 2009 10:51AM) (new)

I have to wake up she thought. The room started going fuzzy. "I'm going to stop you," she said as the room went black. As she opened her eyes one phrase echoed in her head. "No, your going to join me."


message 957: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Gwen talk to me, he thought at her


message 958: by [deleted user] (new)

He's planning to-he's taking all of the goverment's money, and, and he's paying the shadows to work for him. She heard her door open and saw her father, disgusted she turned away.
"I know you're contacting your little friend, you better tell him not to come, I've got plenty of Shadow's surrounding the house." He eyed me carefully. Rife, he knows you're coming, he has Shadows surounding the house.


message 959: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Damn, what can we do?


message 960: by [deleted user] (new)

I don't know, I'll tell you if I learn something-
"Now we can't have that happening," Gwen looked at her father suprised, "Oh course I can do it to," You better stay away if you know what's good for you Gwen's father said to Rife.


message 961: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife shook his head. Her fathers voice was to loud and it hurt Rife's head. "Damn it!" Rife yelled


message 962: by [deleted user] (new)

"Dad, now seriously," Gwen started.
"Hmm, Dad,you never called me that befor, it was always father, maybe I'm getting somewhere with you, but from now on, stay out of my study." He said as he slamed the door


message 963: by [deleted user] (new)

Rife- Genw started to say. NO Her fathers voice boomed in her hear. I can't have you talking to that boy now can I He said sickly sweet, and she blacked out.


message 964: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Gwen? His head hurt again he knew she couldnt hear him


message 965: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen was spiraling through her past, though lessons her grandmother had given her to hre first kiss, a five-year-old boy named Josh, to her last one, Grant, but her mind kept replaying one from inbetween, Rife's. She watched the scene over and over again inher mind wishing she hadn't pulled away the she was in those safe arms right now. Then she saw him, driving the truck toward her house. She couldn't help herself, she reached over to touch him, startled that her hand didn't go through his.


message 966: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife looked over in the drivers seat.


message 967: by [deleted user] (new)

She tried to say his name, but no sound came out. She looked at him and smiled instead.


message 968: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments He smiled at her. Glad she was next to him. "What happened?" He asked her softly.


message 969: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sorry, had to help my mom))
She pointed to her mouth and shook her head,


message 970: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((its ok))
he nodded and thought Lets try this.


message 971: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen shook her head indicating that she couldn't hear him. She made a drawing motion with her hands and looked around for a pen.


message 972: by [deleted user] (new)

She opened the dashboard and found one, she pulled out the registration and drew her house, curcling her window she wrote: This is my window, I'm sorry i don't know where all of the Shadows are.


message 973: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 19, 2009 01:24PM) (new)

Gwen put the the pen down and looked up at Rife, thinking back to that brief moment they had kissed.


message 974: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife smiled at her missing how she felt next to him. He took the pen with one hand and wrote "Ill get you soon,"


message 975: by [deleted user] (new)

She smiled and leaned in next to him then wrote: Thank you. She into his eyes and didn't want to wake up, even though she knew she had too.


message 976: by [deleted user] (new)

((sorry it took me so long to respond, and I have no excuse))


message 977: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments He smiled at her again. And drove some more.


message 978: by [deleted user] (new)

She looked out the window at the house looming in front of them, "Here it is," she said before remembering he couldn't hear her. She tapped his arm and pointed at it.


message 979: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments He looked up and nodded. driving down the block and parking.


message 980: by [deleted user] (new)

She took his hand and led him around the back to a part of the wall with thick vines covering it.


message 981: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments ((What is going on and how can the twins jump in?))


message 982: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments He followed her.


message 983: by [deleted user] (new)

((g2g, sorry))


message 984: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok ttyt))


message 985: by [deleted user] (new)

((Umm, they went to DC to see Gwen's Grandmother, but Gwen went to her house because of a dream thing she had and she saw her grandmother with grant, the guy she was in love with, and her dad there, and then her dad kidnapped her and she somehow got to Rife in a dream and now she's helping him break into her house. I think I got it all...))


message 986: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((yup thats all of it. Adn ya ur on! U wanna rp in the palace rp too?))


message 987: by [deleted user] (new)

((yeah))
Gwen climbed up the vines first and looked around not seeing anyone she signaled Rife to come up to. She jumped off the wall, it was just like when she and Addy used to play spy games, and later when they snuck out to go on dates.


message 988: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife followed her.


message 989: by [deleted user] (new)

She looked around and wondered where all those shadows were. As she got closer to the house, she became more cautious. She found her balcony and pointed it out to Rife.


message 990: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife could feel the Shadows in teh air, but he followed her anyway.


message 991: by [deleted user] (new)

She pantomimed waking up and sending down a rope, the put her hands out in a question.


message 992: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments He looked around and nodded.


message 993: by [deleted user] (new)

She looked at him for a moment then stood on her tiptoes and kissed him briefly. Waking up she wasted no time, She grabbed her sheets and, after she had tied them together, she threw them out the window.


message 994: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife caught them and quickly climbed them. He stood in front of her. He kissed her.


message 995: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen kissed him back and never wanted him to let go. She wasn't going to let someone she didn't know anymore get in the way.


message 996: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments He pulled her closer to him and had no intention of letting her go ever again.


message 997: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I gtg ttyt))


message 998: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 22, 2009 08:24PM) (new)

"Gwen," She heard her name but didn't realize it was coming from inside the room, "GWEN!" This time she heard it and turned around seeing Grant she let out a little gasp, he looked sincerely hurt. She looked up at Rife with a let-me-handle-this look and took a step toward Grant. He stepped back and Gwen looked him in the eyes. "I just don't know you anymore," She said sadly.
His hurt looked turned quickly to hatred, "You never knew me," He said spitting out the words he walked out. Gwen walked back to Rife, her eyes watering, and into his arms.


message 999: by [deleted user] (new)

((ok, bye))


message 1000: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((last post...))
Rife wrapped his arms around her. Like she was what was keeping him together not the other way around.


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