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Sep 11, 2009 10:50PM
Gwen the thought jarred her. He heard me, she thought. Rife, I"m sorry, can you forgive me? Grant noticed her silence so he turned to walk out, "I'll be back," He said leaving.
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Thank you She ran to the door the moment Grant left, but it was still locked. They locked my in my old room, I don't know how you could get in though. She felt dizzy, but she fought it, she was not going to go there now.
She couldn't fight the feeling anymore, she blacked out. She was in her fathers study, but no one was there. She went over to the desk and started reading the papers on the desk. "Oh, so this is what you're planning," She said aloud.
"Yes, indeed it is," She hadn't heard her father walk in.
((G2g, with I could stay on though!!))
"Yes, indeed it is," She hadn't heard her father walk in.
((G2g, with I could stay on though!!))
I have to wake up she thought. The room started going fuzzy. "I'm going to stop you," she said as the room went black. As she opened her eyes one phrase echoed in her head. "No, your going to join me."
He's planning to-he's taking all of the goverment's money, and, and he's paying the shadows to work for him. She heard her door open and saw her father, disgusted she turned away.
"I know you're contacting your little friend, you better tell him not to come, I've got plenty of Shadow's surrounding the house." He eyed me carefully. Rife, he knows you're coming, he has Shadows surounding the house.
"I know you're contacting your little friend, you better tell him not to come, I've got plenty of Shadow's surrounding the house." He eyed me carefully. Rife, he knows you're coming, he has Shadows surounding the house.
I don't know, I'll tell you if I learn something-
"Now we can't have that happening," Gwen looked at her father suprised, "Oh course I can do it to," You better stay away if you know what's good for you Gwen's father said to Rife.
"Now we can't have that happening," Gwen looked at her father suprised, "Oh course I can do it to," You better stay away if you know what's good for you Gwen's father said to Rife.
"Dad, now seriously," Gwen started.
"Hmm, Dad,you never called me that befor, it was always father, maybe I'm getting somewhere with you, but from now on, stay out of my study." He said as he slamed the door
"Hmm, Dad,you never called me that befor, it was always father, maybe I'm getting somewhere with you, but from now on, stay out of my study." He said as he slamed the door
Rife- Genw started to say. NO Her fathers voice boomed in her hear. I can't have you talking to that boy now can I He said sickly sweet, and she blacked out.
Gwen was spiraling through her past, though lessons her grandmother had given her to hre first kiss, a five-year-old boy named Josh, to her last one, Grant, but her mind kept replaying one from inbetween, Rife's. She watched the scene over and over again inher mind wishing she hadn't pulled away the she was in those safe arms right now. Then she saw him, driving the truck toward her house. She couldn't help herself, she reached over to touch him, startled that her hand didn't go through his.
She tried to say his name, but no sound came out. She looked at him and smiled instead.
((Sorry, had to help my mom))
She pointed to her mouth and shook her head,
She pointed to her mouth and shook her head,
Gwen shook her head indicating that she couldn't hear him. She made a drawing motion with her hands and looked around for a pen.
She opened the dashboard and found one, she pulled out the registration and drew her house, curcling her window she wrote: This is my window, I'm sorry i don't know where all of the Shadows are.
Gwen put the the pen down and looked up at Rife, thinking back to that brief moment they had kissed.

She smiled and leaned in next to him then wrote: Thank you. She into his eyes and didn't want to wake up, even though she knew she had too.
((sorry it took me so long to respond, and I have no excuse))
She looked out the window at the house looming in front of them, "Here it is," she said before remembering he couldn't hear her. She tapped his arm and pointed at it.
She took his hand and led him around the back to a part of the wall with thick vines covering it.
((Umm, they went to DC to see Gwen's Grandmother, but Gwen went to her house because of a dream thing she had and she saw her grandmother with grant, the guy she was in love with, and her dad there, and then her dad kidnapped her and she somehow got to Rife in a dream and now she's helping him break into her house. I think I got it all...))
((yeah))
Gwen climbed up the vines first and looked around not seeing anyone she signaled Rife to come up to. She jumped off the wall, it was just like when she and Addy used to play spy games, and later when they snuck out to go on dates.
Gwen climbed up the vines first and looked around not seeing anyone she signaled Rife to come up to. She jumped off the wall, it was just like when she and Addy used to play spy games, and later when they snuck out to go on dates.
She looked around and wondered where all those shadows were. As she got closer to the house, she became more cautious. She found her balcony and pointed it out to Rife.
She pantomimed waking up and sending down a rope, the put her hands out in a question.
She looked at him for a moment then stood on her tiptoes and kissed him briefly. Waking up she wasted no time, She grabbed her sheets and, after she had tied them together, she threw them out the window.
Gwen kissed him back and never wanted him to let go. She wasn't going to let someone she didn't know anymore get in the way.
"Gwen," She heard her name but didn't realize it was coming from inside the room, "GWEN!" This time she heard it and turned around seeing Grant she let out a little gasp, he looked sincerely hurt. She looked up at Rife with a let-me-handle-this look and took a step toward Grant. He stepped back and Gwen looked him in the eyes. "I just don't know you anymore," She said sadly.
His hurt looked turned quickly to hatred, "You never knew me," He said spitting out the words he walked out. Gwen walked back to Rife, her eyes watering, and into his arms.
His hurt looked turned quickly to hatred, "You never knew me," He said spitting out the words he walked out. Gwen walked back to Rife, her eyes watering, and into his arms.
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