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message 9651: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv followed Salem and stopped short at the sight of the girls.

Emmy looked up, she heaved herself off the floor
"I have no clue. I have a freaking mind numbing headache and then BANG they're here."


message 9652: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Waverley was crying by then. "I'm so sorry miss Emmy!"

Salem was confused. "Just like that? Poof?"


message 9653: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked up and said to the crying girl
"No, it's ok. You- How do you know my name?"

Liv stepped in and answered Salem's question
"Yeah, Poof."


message 9654: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments For a moment,Waverley's tears ebbed. "Miss Emmy, I feel you inside. All the time."

Salem raised an eyebrow.


message 9655: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy was panting, like she had just sprinted a mile
"What do you mean, you feel me inside?"

Liv held up a hand
"I'm getting Patrik."


message 9656: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((gah, stupid gr hid this from me!))

Salem spoke up for the little girl. "She's empathetic. Beyond any ordinary human capacity. She feels what we feel, but your feelings come out stronger. Am I right, little one?"
Waverley nodded, wiping the tears from her cheeks. "Uh-huh."


message 9657: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I hate it when that happens! ))

Emmy nodded slowly, understanding
"What's your name sweetheart?" Patrik asked comming up behind Emmy and placing a calming hand on her shoulder.


message 9658: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((same heres))

Waverley looked up at him, the different emotions of people in the house trailing across her face before landing on his. A small smile came to the four year old's mouth. "My name is Waverley. I'm this many," she held out her hand with four fingers up in the awkward way that children do. "I think," she added, unsure.


message 9659: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik smiled nicely
"Really? You're a big girl." He walked around Emmy and knelt to eye level of Waverly.
"I'm Patrik."


message 9660: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Her smile widened and she waved, "Hi Patwik," she messed up her 'r' sound and seemed a little embarrassed by that.


message 9661: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik laughed
"Hi Wave."
Emmy smiled then looked to Salem
"What I still don't get is HOW she got here..."


message 9662: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "You are how she got here," Salem said simply. "It's why I didn't see it."

Waverley was giggling now, "You know my nickname? How'd you know that, silly?!"


message 9663: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked anxious, then aggrivated
"Me? Salem. I didn't even do anything, I've never met her before in my life."

Patrik smiled and offered his hand to her
"It was a good guess. Are you hungry, Wave?"


message 9664: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem shook her head. "Not like that. It wasn't your fault. Those two are different, I can't put my finger on it. They, or one of them at least, knew how to make you help them here." she shrugged but kept her eyes on Emmy.


"Yes!" she replied giddily, grasping his hand with the trust of an innocent.


message 9665: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy's eyes widened in realization then said to Salem
"YOu remember when the Queen spoke to us? And she made you make me remember killing Ellis's sister? How she said she knew whenever that happened? That happens because I lose control of my emmotions. Hello, little Empath that just poofed into my kitchen."

Patrik laughed and scooped her up, placing her gently on the countertop.
"So Miss Wave, what would you like to eat?"


message 9666: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem nodded, "That actually makes sense."

Waverley shrugged, "I dunno. What is theyre?"

((olo I had to put in the y so you'd know how she is saying it))


message 9667: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Lol its wicked cute!))

Emmy nodded
"Should we ask her?"

Patrik made a show of looking through the cabinets
"Chocolate milk and grham crackers?" he asked placing them on the counter.


message 9668: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((thankie))

"Ask the kid?" Salem inquired. "Maybe. You choose."


"Yes pwease!" she exclaimed, eyes wide and happy. Her blonde hair was in major need of washing and a good brish to get the tangles out. Her face was dirty from tear tracks and dirt, but her smile let it like a party lantern.


message 9669: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked and muttered something about going soft and said
"Later. She needs food, and a bath first."

Patrik poured her some milk and handed her a couple crackers.
He looked over the top of Wave's head and caught the looks of Salem and Emmy. He sighed, his eyes flicking down to Wave


message 9670: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem smiled knowingly, "Emmy, you are sooo right." Nice to know you care about the Empath.


Waverley munched on her cracker, oblivious to most of the feelings right now, most of them muted enough that she wasn't assaulted every second. Though Teeghan and Limerick's feelings were certainly affecting her. But happiness isn't a bad thing..right?


message 9671: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Little kids in the middle of a war kind of hit home with me Salem...
Emmy smiled a little and nodded, drawing her gaze back to Patrik, who smiled at her. It made her whole day better that one smile.

((Awkward for Wave, but she's too little to get it....))


message 9672: by Ky (last edited Apr 21, 2010 08:48PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I can tell, Salem nodded.

Waverley finished a cracker and took a sip of the milk. She giggled.


message 9673: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((i gtg... in like 2 mins))

Emmy nodded.

Patrik had brought his attention to Wave again
"What?" he asked


message 9674: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "This is realllllly yummy! And someone is veeeeery happy!" Waverley grinned and took another big sip of milk.


message 9675: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy stifled her laughter, but about to double over in her attempt.

Patrik didn't even try, he just keeled over laughing.


message 9676: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem made a face, chuckling. "I know who that is."

Waverley just got happier, what with Emmy, Patrik, and Salem's new emotions added to the mix.


message 9677: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy was sitting on the floor trying to get air back into her lungs. But everytime Waverly giggled a new bought of laughter washed over Emmy.


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Poetic Ingenius- [Kenny:] wrote: "Nephilim wrote: "((See ya Koo-do!))

Liv laughed
"More, I can already feel it in the air. She'll lose her freaking tree."

Emmy's vision was gradually darkening around the edges. The weird ..."


((not appreciated! I love my Limerick. :P))


message 9679: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) wrote: "Poetic Ingenius- [Kenny:] wrote: "Nephilim wrote: "((See ya Koo-do!))

Liv laughed
"More, I can already feel it in the air. She'll lose her freaking tree."

Emmy's vision was gradually dark..."


((*giggles*))


message 9680: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim wrote: "Emmy was sitting on the floor trying to get air back into her lungs. But everytime Waverly giggled a new bought of laughter washed over Emmy."

((this is awkwardly funny.))

Salem shook her head to stop herself from laughing. "We need to get you cleaned up, hon." She smiled at Waverley.

Waverley looked at Patrik and Emmy, her gaze resting on Liv. "Hi!" she blatantly ignored Salem.


message 9681: by Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (last edited Apr 22, 2010 12:43PM) (new)

Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan gently pulled away from Limerick, "Do you hear that? It's people laughing or something." Teeghan opened the door and instantly heard the erupting laughter from the kitchen. She walked into the kitchen to see a little girl sitting on the counter top and Emmy almost dying of laughter. "What's going on? Who is that?" It sounded a little mean the way she said it. Oops..I didn't mean for that to seem mean. She hoped Salem heard her.


message 9682: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem turned to her in surprise. Waverley stopped laughing. "They ain't happy no more.."
Salem's eyebrows raised her eyebrows at Wave's comment and smiled at Teeghan. "That's Waverley. You and Limerick were making her laugh."


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments "What did we do? I was just umm...showing him Avery." Teeghan smiled. She knew everyone could tell she was lying, but she didn't care.


message 9684: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Liar," she chuckled. "Waverley is an Empath."


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments "Oh..I see. Well it's nice to meet you Waverly. I heard people calling you Wave. I'm Teeghan." She stuck her hand out politely to the little girl.


message 9686: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Waverley grinned. "Hullo!" she hit Teeghan's hand in an awkward high-five, making Salem laugh again.


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan smiled at the little girl. She was funny. She could see why everyone was laughing.

((lol Limerick is still in the bedroom haha))


message 9688: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I know. haha))

Waverley liked how almost everyone was feeling happy.

Limerick came out, eyes dark for a moment before clearing with a bright smile.


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan turned around to see Limerick coming into the kitchen. She went and stood beside him.


message 9690: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Limerick put his arm around her possessively and kept the smile.


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan leaned into Limerick's embrace with great pleasure.


message 9692: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Baby," he murmured, "What's going on in here?"


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan used her Power so that no one could her there silent conversation. "I am not exactly sure. But suddenly there is a little girl here and apparently she is an Empath."


message 9694: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "An Empath?" Shit. Limerick made a face, just slightly. "That is..weird."


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments "Tell me about it. I have never seen one. And she is so...little."


message 9696: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He nodded. "I'd say three."


message 9697: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik looked up
"Four, by her standards."

Emmy smiled darkly at Limerick
"Powers tend to be dulled by me and a friend of ours. But that's not important, Who the hell are you?"

((Have I mentioned I LOVE Emmy?))


message 9698: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yes. she is a good charrie, I like her too))

Limerick jumped. "Four then." acknowledging Emmy he said, "I'm Limerick, Teeghan's boyfriend."


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan realized she hadn't kept her focus on keeping her a Limerick's conversation silent. "I guess you guys have not met. Limerick, Emmy. Emmy, Limerick."


message 9700: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He waved sarcastically, earning an icy glare from Salem.


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