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Sep 06, 2009 10:44AM
The twins had nighmares. Flashes of flames and screames echoed in there heads. THey woke up drenched in cold sweat panting.
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Ivy frowned and stopped in her tracks. There were too many people.
Gwen opened her eyes and looked out her window, and saw D.C. Home, she thought. "Turn at the next exit."
"Where are going?" Lilly asked once she had regained her breath
"Gwen's house," Liv said as Rife woke up.
Yeah, and actually it's my grandmother's house." Gwen corrected
"Oh." she said not sure how this makes a diffrence
"Turn left up here," Gwen called to Patrik.
"Take a right at the next street and it's the third house on the left, it's the green one." Gwen finished giving him directions.
"OK," Patrik followed her directions accuratly. As he pulled up to her house Rife jumped down.
"Lets go get some answers," Gwen got out of the truck and walked through the door. "Grandma? Grandma!" Her cries got more and more frantic the more time went by without an answer.
((dun dun daaaa!!!))Rife followed her "Whats wrong?"
"She's not here," Gwen told him. "She's not here," She said again letting it sink in.
"What do you mean? Where else could she be?"
"She never leaves, Grace looked after her and did all of her shopping," Gwen shook her head.
Gwen leaned against the table as she started to feel dizzy. She fainted and was once again in her fathers study. "Mother, you will tell me what you know!" Her father yelled, slapping her grandmother.
"How dare you," Gwen said disgusted as she ran towards her grandmother.
"How dare you," Gwen said disgusted as she ran towards her grandmother.
"Honey, just wake up, don't come here, stay safe. Wake up!" Gwens grandmother told her.
"But grandma!" Gwne tried to untie her but her hands went strait through the ropes.
"Don't worry about me, just stay wherever you are, don't come here!" Her grandmother told her.
"It's too late," her father said, "She's already here."
Gwen woke with a start.
"But grandma!" Gwne tried to untie her but her hands went strait through the ropes.
"Don't worry about me, just stay wherever you are, don't come here!" Her grandmother told her.
"It's too late," her father said, "She's already here."
Gwen woke with a start.
Rief had knelt down next to her "What did you see this time?"
"He has her," She said slowly. "She knows something that he doesn't and he's trying to get her to tell him." She stood up and had to lean on the tabe for support because she was still dizzy. "I have to go help her."
"Didn't she just say not to?" Rife asked
"You don't understand, I have to help her," Gwen cried, but secretly she wanted to see Grant as well.
She looked in his eyes, the ashamed of her selfish motives looked away, thinking he somehow knew. "I have to go alone."
"Now how did I know you would say that? Suddenly become all self sacrificing did we?" Rife said, he was angry
"No, if you knew what my father could do," She put her hands on his chest and said softly, "I don't want it to happen to you too."
"Yes self sacrificing." Rife said. he couldnt help but get angry.
Gwen looked at him one more time then walked down the hall to the room she stayed in for so much of her life. She sat down on her bed and looked at the photo's of her childhood friends, her grandmother, and Grant, which caused her eyes to tear.
Rife stood there. As Liv walked over to him she placed a hand on his shoulder.
She went to her closet and pulled out her .22, the gun her grandmother told her was only to be used in emergencies, if she couldn't get out of a bad situation by pursueding. Then climbed out her window into the backyard, as she had done so many times to meat Andrew. She stopped at the sudden thought, then kept on carefully, going through the neighbors backyards untill she got to a main street. She hid her gun and cought a bus.
She stopped for a moment before she got on the bus, looking back, wondering if she made the right choice.
"You getting on sweetie," the bus driver asked.
"Yes," She replied climbing the steps. It has to be this way, she thought
"You getting on sweetie," the bus driver asked.
"Yes," She replied climbing the steps. It has to be this way, she thought
Rife stood still as he heard her land on the earth outside and forced himself to stay still as she walked on to the bus.
She looked out her window, almost convincing herself she could see Rife staring out the front window at her. She turned away from the window and concentrated hard on bringing up the image she had seen so many times in her mind, only this time she hid behind a bookshelf.
Her father, grandmother, and Grant were there, as if they were waiting for her. Her grandmother seemed to look straight at her, even though she was completly concealed. She shook her head and checked the stop, hers. She got off the bus, telling herself she could do it. She walked up to the front gates of the place she once called home and collapsed to her knees. "I can't do it," She whispered to the air.
When she looked up she saw her old bulter. "Oh hi Jasper," was all the could get out before he knocked her out.
Gwen woke up in a familiar place, her old bedroom. She tried the doors and windows, but they were all losked. She sank to the floor in despair. Rife, Rife. She tried several times and without getting a reply she gave up. They probably left, she thought shedding a tear for the friendships she had started.
Rife stood where Gwen left him untill an echo of his voice reached his mind. Gwen he thought walkign oot. "Come on!"
((Man, holy cow the monologues of non dialouge.))
The door opened and she looked up to see the face of the man she loved, "Grant," She gasped. "I-I thought that you were dead."
The door opened and she looked up to see the face of the man she loved, "Grant," She gasped. "I-I thought that you were dead."
((lol can i just say how in love I am with the Palace rp and this rp??))Rife got everyone and jumped in the truck.
"I wasn't, I'n not," Grant said stepping closer to Gwen.
"Then why did you leave," She asked her blue eyes shinning with unshed tears.
"Because they would have taken you," He said.
"Then why did you leave," She asked her blue eyes shinning with unshed tears.
"Because they would have taken you," He said.
((lol I love your characters!! like all of them!!))
((I TOTALLY love you're too!!!)) ((Yeah, I think I'm gonna have the guy she thinks is Grant be Andrew, and the real Grant be locked in one of the many, many rooms of her house))
Gwen stood up and looked into his eyes, "What did they do to you," She asked quietly, putting her hand on his cheek. Instead of answering her he kissed her roughly.
She kissed him back, getting dizzy remembering the times before she ran away. This isn't how Grant kisses something told her, but she ignored it, not wanting to believe it.Gwen she heard faintly in the back of her mind, too faintly to notice with all that was going on.
Gwen stepped back and looked up at Grant. "Come on Gwen, come wih me, you'll see that what your father's doing will help us all."
She started at him, how could he, he was using her. She turned away from him, "Never!"
She started at him, how could he, he was using her. She turned away from him, "Never!"
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