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She nodded. "I'll let you have that. But so help me, if you two ruin this-" How 'bout now?
Elly stumbled slightly, not expecting that. She stopped taking his powers away and stammered, "I-I'm sorry!" Tears appeared in her eyes.
Patrik was back at the door."If Elly so much as touches me, she'll die. I'm too much for her."
I glare at her "I want to go back to Patrik," I say slowly.
"I know you do. But Patrik needs to figure a few things out first." She replies
"He, HE NEEDS TO FIGURE A FEW THINGS OUT FIRST?!" I scream at her
"She won't touch you," Salem promised, stepping towards the door. "Outside?"
Sean nodded, and listened for a moment to make sure he wouldn't be barging in on anything. He bit his lip. "I don't think it's the best time to talk to her," he murmured. "She just made Rife upset..."
Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Elly stumbled slightly, not expecting that. She stopped taking his powers away and stammered, "I-I'm sorry!" Tears appeared in her eyes."
((Posting again, 'cause we posted at the same time.))
((Posting again, 'cause we posted at the same time.))
Rife shook his head"What?"
Patrik eyed Sean
"It's not yoru promise I need." But he followed her none the less.
"Yes, you aren't the only one with untapped power, Warrior." She says, using my childhood nickname.
I sigh shaking my head
"Patrik, isn't.."
"A shadow? Oh gods no." She replies swiftly
Elly bit her lip. "You're angry with me, aren't you? You told me before to never try it- my power."
Sean sighed. "I don't know if I should bother her just now..."
((Will be disappearing soon.))
Sean sighed. "I don't know if I should bother her just now..."
((Will be disappearing soon.))
Salem nodded swiftly in understanding and went outside.
Rife stared at her"No, Don't worry about it."
Patrik nodded and walked outside.
"Thank God." I sigh
"I'm pretty sure he had nothing to do with it," A new voice says.
Patrik smiled darkly"So,I'll go easy on you?"
((Btw is it ok that I did this??))
A person steps out of the Shadows, she looks so like Salem I trip over the chair that's behind me.
"Salem?" I ask bewildered
Both my mother and the woman laugh
"No, though I do look alot like my daughter."
I stare open mouthed at the woman
"You can't be, I've met her mother. She's a bitch."
((yes, it's cool!))"If you feel the need to."
Elly shivered slightly, remembering other times she had used her power on people, and it had not turned out well. "Really?" she whispered, barely audible, tears trickling down her cheeks.
((Sweet I'm glad you like it!))Patrik shruged
"Maybe not, you can handle yourself."
The woman nods
"I'm sure she is. That is the reason Salem went to them."
I gape then regaining my sarcastic air I ask my mother
"Is Patrik's mother here too? Because then you can have a book club."
She glares at me.
Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Elly shivered slightly, remembering other times she had used her power on people, and it had not turned out well. "Really?" she whispered, barely audible, tears trickling down her cheeks."
((Posting again... Lol, I have to do that a lot.))
((Posting again... Lol, I have to do that a lot.))
((Sorry Bellie!))"Yeah really." Rife said tiredly
Patrik lunged at her.
"Please just listen." My mother says in her negotiating voice
I listen just out of habit
"I am. I just don't know what I'm supposed to be listening to yet..."
((No, it's okay.))
Elly climbed to her feet and sat on the bed. "I... really didn't know it would upset you. I should've."
Elly climbed to her feet and sat on the bed. "I... really didn't know it would upset you. I should've."
"No it's fine seriously." Rife said, he didn't want to have to deal with this right now.
Salem ducked to the side, blowing wind at him.
Patrik was already behind her, shrouding himself in invisibility.
"Okay," she whispered. Still, she looked at him almost warily, with fear in her eyes. So many times she had been made to do as she was told, or had been hurt for using her powers. It stuck with her.
"Elly, you're fine. You don't have to be scared of me." Rife said
((gtg,sorry))"I know you're there," she said calmly.
Elly bit her lip to make it stop quivering. "I- I guess I'm used to people getting angry at me... They hurt me sometimes."
((k see ya tomorrow))Patrik smiled and froze her feet to the ground.
"I Promise I will never hurt you. No matter what you do." Rife said
"Just LISTEN!" My mother yells at my face
"Alright! I will," I say the 'Jez' implied at the tone of my voice.
Elly attempted to smile, but she was crying too hard now. She just nodded and tried to breathe as the sobs shook her.
((I'm just checking in))((I'll be at almost nine, 8:40-ish))
Salem cursed, keeping him at least two feet away with a forcefield-like thing.
Sean stood in the doorway, watching with worry clear on his face.
((Ok See ya then Kenny. I have HW to do anyway..))Patrik chuckled and froze the forcefield then smashed it with one well placed punch.
Rife moved to her side.
Salem's "mother" glares at me
"What? I'm listening and no one's telling me anything." I say defensively.
"What you need to know is that you're suppposed to be with the Shadow's, if only for a little while. There are things that Patrik needs to understand, and you being there wouldn't have helped anything." My mother says in the calm knows more than she's telling voice.
((I won't be here much tonight. Watching a movie.))
Elly flinched away from him instinctively. "I-I'm sorry for being such a... baby..."
Elly flinched away from him instinctively. "I-I'm sorry for being such a... baby..."
((oh ok.))Rife looked over at her then slid away giving her some space
"It's alright,"
Elly dried her tears, and her sobbing finally quieted. She curled up in a ball sadly. "I'm so pathetic," she muttered.
Rife looked at her unsure what to say, much less how to deal with crying girls. The ones that he spent all of his life with never cried, not even when they were in so much pain they were near delirium.
She wrapped her arms around herself and hid her face.
Rife sat for a moment then stood up to leave.
"Don't go!" she exclaimed, sitting up and catching his hand. "Please..."
((Gtg, watching the movie now.))
((Gtg, watching the movie now.))
((ok. see ya))Rife nodded
"Alright."
((Changed my mind. I'm going to sit in the living room with everyone else, but movies have been hurting my head, so I'll be here for a while.))
"Thank you..." She bit her lip. "Rife, I- I'm sorry I'm so pathetic..."
"Thank you..." She bit her lip. "Rife, I- I'm sorry I'm so pathetic..."
((ok sweet.))"Anytime, and you're not. I have a feeling anyone with your past would be the same, if not worse..." Rife said
((Lol... XD))
She bit her lip and sighed. "I- I suppose..."
She bit her lip and sighed. "I- I suppose..."
Elly turned onto her side and laid her head on his chest, reaching for his hand hesitantly.
Rife squeezed it reassuringly. Using his other hand to stoke her hair.
Elly sniffled and closed her eyes with a quiet sigh. "Thank you so much- for being here for me."
She smiled. "You won't ever be able to get rid of me."
"And here I though I could just turn off this feeling. My mistake." Rife winked
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Whenever.
"No I'm not." My mother says calmly despite my anger
"Jesus christ! Why am I here again?" I yell in spite of her damned calmness.
"You wanted to." She shrugs.
"I want to KILL someone." I snap.
She laughs musically
"Go ahead."