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message 8651: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik stared at her
"Say that again...?"

Rife smiled and wrapped his arms around her.


message 8652: by [deleted user] (new)

Elly planted a light kiss on the skin of Rife's neck. "Are you ticklish?" she asked mischievously.


message 8653: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem gave Patrik a funny look. "I think they sedated her. Why?"


message 8654: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Oh no way I'm answering that. It's just asking for trouble." Rife said smiling

Patrik looked distant as if his real self was long gone and all you were looking at was the projection
"What did she do?"


message 8655: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Almost killed every single shadow...plus two almost 'human' kids."


message 8656: by [deleted user] (new)

Elly laughed. "Ah... I can guess that the answer is yes, then." She smirked and looked up at him. "What would you do if I tickled you? Other than laugh and squirm. You're not one of those people who gets violent when they're tickled, are you?"


message 8657: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean listened silently.


message 8658: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "WHAT?!" Patrik said rather loudly. "What the hell happened?"

"Of course I am." Rife said with a playful smile
"Tickle me and die."


message 8659: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Um.." Salem was startled by his tone of voice, though she could hear his swirling and somewhat angry thoughts. She curled into Sean, "She was mad, trying to prove a point."


message 8660: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik lurched forward as if to move towards her, but stopped himself
"What point?" he said in a forced even tone.


message 8661: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments A silver tear slid down her cheek now and she shuddered, "That they can't make her do anything. She doesn't want to die, Patrik. But she doesn't want any of us to die either."


message 8662: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean put his arms around Salem, somewhat protectively, and shot a warning glance at Patrik.

"Oh, really? You'd do that to me?" She put a hand over her heart, pretending to be hurt.


message 8663: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik sighed putting both hands behind his head. He was muttering something under his breath.


message 8664: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem turned, hiding her face in Sean's shirt, whispering as if to someone. Anyone. Emmy.


message 8665: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean rubbed her back and sighed quietly. "It'll be okay," he whispered in her ear.


message 8666: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments If only it were that simple..


message 8667: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm sorry, he whispered in her mind now, Sometimes I feel like if I say it enough it will be true.


message 8668: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I know, in her mind she sighed, but outside she was still whispering, her lips like feathers against his shirtfront.


message 8669: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik's super hearing picked up on what Sean had said he wanted to laugh, laugh untill his insides hurt at the absurdity of that comment. It wasn't going to be ok, it never would be. There was a war comming and their greatest soilder was unreachable and going on a hero trip. All he said was
"How is this going to be ok?" And he left.


message 8670: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments It won't Patrik. What the hell happened to you? Emmy needs the real Patrik, and whatever you've done to him-


message 8671: by [deleted user] (new)

"Oh, really? You'd do that to me?" Elly put a hand over her heart, pretending to be hurt.


message 8672: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean tightened his arms around Salem. "I'm so sorry," he whispered, "Everything is going wrong, isn't it?"


message 8673: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yes, every damn thing," she said quietly, like wind through the trees.


message 8674: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik stopped in his tracks
Don't even start with me Salem. Emmy has the real Patrik, this is me trying to deal. This is me with more power than I know what to do with- He growled like a caged animal, and he technically was, just the cage was his own mind.


message 8675: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 23, 2010 05:56PM) (new)

Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: ""Oh, really? You'd do that to me?" Elly put a hand over her heart, pretending to be hurt."

((Posting this again. XD))


message 8676: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Her eyes flashed and she disentangled herself from Sean's grasp. Patrik. You started it. And if you're gonna be this pissy I think you should find a way to cool down, an outlet? Fighting?


message 8677: by [deleted user] (new)

"Don't, Salem. Please. Let me go talk to him." He caught her hand.


message 8678: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yes, yes I would." Rife said

Patrik's eyes were blazing
I started it? I started it? A laugh resonated through his mind What do you think I've been doing these past four months? I haven't been talking to anyone, I've been off by MYSELF the whole damn time. What did you think I was doing?


message 8679: by [deleted user] (new)

Elly grinned and reached down slowly, dramatically, towards his stomach.


message 8680: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Sean, let me." Patrik. Kay, you didn't start it. The stupid friggin' shadows did. But I don't regret the other thigns I said.


message 8681: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean shook his head. "I know what he's going through. Except that it's worse for him than it was for me- because you came back. I can imagine how hard that must be."


message 8682: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife was across the room before she blinked.

Patrik stopped walking again
Salem, let me ask you something. Why do you think Emmy and I are never apart? Honestly, why do you think we are always together?


message 8683: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I know dammit," she whispered to him. Because you two need each other. It's like twins, only so much stronger.


message 8684: by [deleted user] (new)

Elly raised one eyebrow. "Now that's unfair. You'd better never do that when I want to kiss you."


message 8685: by [deleted user] (new)

Poetic Ingenius- [Kenny:] wrote: ""I know dammit," she whispered to him. Because you two need each other. It's like twins, only so much stronger."

Sean was suddenly smiling, and he wasn't completely sure why. "Salem, you are a pain," he said. "Go on, then. Just don't fight."


message 8686: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem reached for his hand.


message 8687: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik laughed
Someone gave you the cliffnotes version. You are obviously no stranger to Emmy's unlimited ammount of power, but nearly everyone is a stranger to MINE. Just for the mere sake that I use so much of it trying to keep her balanced out. She's not here and we have me who has way to much power to handle in one dose. Salem there are no Shadows here, no nothing. No outlet, as you say.

Rife laughed
"Life isn't fair."


message 8688: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean took it and slid off of the bed.


message 8689: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim wrote: "Patrik laughed
Someone gave you the cliffnotes version. You are obviously no stranger to Emmy's unlimited ammount of power, but nearly everyone is a stranger to MINE. Just for the mere sake that ..."


But there could be an outlet. Would you fight me Patrik?


message 8690: by [deleted user] (new)

Elly strode towards him. "Life? Don't talk to me about life..." She grinned. "Guess who said that?"


message 8691: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean shook his head. "No, you will not! Salem!"


message 8692: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments No, I wouldn't, I will hurt you.


message 8693: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Stop it Sean," she said quietly. I could hurt you back.


message 8694: by [deleted user] (new)

"No, dammit, Salem! I don't care if he's a friend! You're not going to fight him." Salem grabbed her other hand. "Please. Don't."


message 8695: by [deleted user] (new)

Elly strode towards him. "Life? Don't talk to me about life..." She grinned. "Guess who said that?"


message 8696: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife eyed her
"Who said that?"

A smile whisked across Patrik's face
Perfect.

Emmy was back in dream hell.
"Are you shitting me?!" She screamed at the emptiness.


message 8697: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: ""No, dammit, Salem! I don't care if he's a friend! You're not going to fight him." Salem grabbed her other hand. "Please. Don't.""

"Let go," she said stiffly.


message 8698: by [deleted user] (new)

Elly laughed. "Marvin the robot, from A Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy." She had distracted him just enough to get close, and she took away his powers as she reached out and tickled him.

((It's okay to make him get mad. XD Drama is good.))


message 8699: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim wrote: "Rife eyed her
"Who said that?"

A smile whisked across Patrik's face
Perfect.

Emmy was back in dream hell.
"Are you shitting me?!" She screamed at the emptiness."


Kay, when?


message 8700: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean's face was pained as he let go of her. "Maybe I should get Elly. If things start going bad- you know what she can do."


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