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"You do," She asked.


message 752: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah. I mean we run our whole lives. We can't kill them and if they are near and we use, they just sense us. So we can't really fight. And they were sent after us by our own people, so there's no going home," Rife told her.


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"Whst happend to make them send such horrible things after you," Gwen asked seriously.
((sorry g2g))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok byes))

"We are the marked ones. The ones to end the war and rule the Lyrs." He said as if something heavy fell on him as he spoke those words.


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"And they don't want you to rule them," Gwen asked.


message 756: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "How did you guess?" Rife asked "Well the lyrs want us to rule they've been waiting for us for centuries. It's the Shadows that want us dead. They like ruling the Lyrs. So once they found out about us," Rife sighed letting the sentence trail off.


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"Yeah, but I think you'll be a great leader," Gwen said smiling.


message 758: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Thank you. That means alot," Rife smiled and sat down, patting the ground next to him.


message 759: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 25, 2009 06:30PM) (new)

Gwen sat down next to him. "So were the Shadows always bad," She asked, wanting to learn as much as she could.


message 760: by Hannah (last edited Aug 25, 2009 06:33PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Not always, Once they were an equal part of the Lyrs. You see, there are really five elements." Rife started to explain.


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"Shadows," She asked.


message 762: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yes, well Sprits anyway. But it's the same difference. So the original Lyrs, who were five sibblings, made a council. They had noticed the growing numbers of Lyrs and saw how they were being persecuted. They decided the Lyrs needed to be goverened. So they took the Lyrs, all of them, and made a place where they would be safe." RIfe said "You still following?"


message 763: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yep," She said, listining to every word he said.


message 764: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ok so,the Lyrs were chased and if found killed all around the world. So the Sibblings, or the Frers, thought that the eldest brother. Who was a Sprit Lyr. Could make a rift in the demension, so they could escape. And it worked. So the Lrys escaped into a place they came to call Alderan. But over time the Lyrs aruged and faught. No one was ever killed untill a young Air lyr drowned. The Frers were astonished that their people would kill one another. Three of teh sibblings wanted sepperation. The youngest sister, an Air Lyr, the youngest brother, Earth Lyr, and then the middle sister, a watr lyr. The Eldest brother and sister, Sprit and Fire Lyrs did not. They wnted this resolved. So they faught each wanting a different thing.


message 765: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Then some how, the Lyrs figured out how to make portals, of even rifts. So they left, taking their element with them. And before the Frers dissapeared they said 'The marked ones will take our place and becomes Rulers among the unruly' So along came us centuries later marked and unknowing." Rife said

((Not bad for on the spot huh??))


message 766: by [deleted user] (new)

((Not bad at all))
"Wow, that's some history," Gwen said awed. "How are you marked?"


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "On my wrist," He said showing her, there was a tattoo there. It was almost like Emmy's but it was a light silver to her black and his had soem reason to it. It made the form of a tree. "And our extra abilities,"


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Gwen lookes at it, "So not all Lyrs have extra abilities?"


message 769: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Nope, just the Frers and us,"


message 770: by [deleted user] (new)

"Ok, that's nice to know," Gwen said


message 771: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yup,"


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"Do you want to be a ruler," Gwen asked seriously.


message 773: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Sometimes," Rife stated simply looking at her.


message 774: by [deleted user] (new)

"Why not, haven't you ever thought of all the things you could fix, peoples mistakes you could make right, People you could give better lives to," Gwen asked him seriously


message 775: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "All the time. Everytime I watch Patrik look at Emmy when either of them get hurt. Or the way we fight and run All the time. When I kill a shadow I think that didn't need to happen." Rife told her.


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"I think of it everytime I see my father," She said darkly


message 777: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Makes sense," Rife said pinching the bridge of his nose then rubbing his temples.


message 778: by [deleted user] (new)

"You ok," She asked, watching him.


message 779: by Hannah (last edited Aug 25, 2009 07:48PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Something's not right. Come on." He said standing up and taking her hand and taking off through the small expanse of woods.


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She got up and followed him out of the woods, wondering what it could be.


message 781: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments When they got to the others, they were surrounded, yet again. Rife sighed and said "Welcome to the lives of the Marked," He took of to help the others.


message 782: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen stepped back into the trees, with her new knowledge she knew she couldn't help.


message 783: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments They faught the SHadows and killed a few of them. Rife went to attack one and he was snuck up on by another getting a slice in his back. Liv killed it and then the fight was over.


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Gwen took a step back and found a knife to her throat. "Say one word and you're dead," The sinister voice said, pulling her back further into the trees.


message 785: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Not good))
Emmy looked up and saw Gwen. She started runnignover to her.


message 786: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Unaware of the dager she was about to run into


message 787: by [deleted user] (new)

The man saw her and pushed the knife into Gwens neck making her yelp in pain. "One step closer any of you Lyrs and she's dead," He said in that same evil voice, his face in the shadows.


message 788: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy froze and all the other Lyrs spun to face the voice. "No," Rifegroaned


message 789: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 25, 2009 08:08PM) (new)

((Hey, can I make Gwen able to speak in the Lyrs minds, it's a power she has, but she didn't know if it would work with the Lyrs))


message 790: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((heck yeah coolness!!))


message 791: by [deleted user] (new)

The man laughed, "Exactly." Gwen looked at Rife then closed her eyes, concentrating. Rife, it's Andrew


message 792: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rief looked up. Gwen?


message 793: by [deleted user] (new)

I can speak through minds, but I didn't know if it would work, thank goodness it does. It's Andrew, but he knows who you are, it's not right, somethings up.
"Everyone just stay where you are, I'm going to be leaving now," He started taking backwards steps, keeping his eyes on the Lyrs.


message 794: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife grinned and made teh ground around Andrew sink, as he fell Liv caught on and Ran to grab gwen.


message 795: by [deleted user] (new)

Andrew jumped up, his reflexes faster than Gwen had remebered and slashed at Liv with his knife, while pulling out a gun and aimimg it at Gwens back.


message 796: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv's hand flew to teh gash across her chest and put the other on Gwen and ran as fast as she could.


message 797: by [deleted user] (new)

Andrew aimed his gun lower and pulled the trigger, sending a bullet into Gwens leg, She screamed in pain and fell to the ground. Andrew walked toward her with his gun aimed at the Lyrs.


message 798: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy sneered "No way in hell buddy," as she shot fyr at him it wrapped itself around like a boa constrictor.


message 799: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 25, 2009 08:28PM) (new)

He dropped his suddenly hot gun and bent toward the ground shouting in pain. "Gwen," He said in a pleading voice looking up at her. She flashed back to just one year earlier. "STOP," She shouted at Emmy.


message 800: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Gwen thats not the same man you knew!" Rife shouted at her.
Emmy didn't stop. She just loosened the fyrs grip but made it hotter.


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