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He smiled a little wider. "Not at all."


message 7602: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan chuckled. "You're fun."


message 7603: by [deleted user] (new)

"Thanks. I would say I try, but... I don't." He smiled. "May I meet Avery? I haven't yet..."


message 7604: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Hey-yah sure you can!" Teeghan smiled, walking to the door.


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He stood and followed her. "Thanks."


message 7606: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Once again, no prob." she pushed open the door and Avery started crying.


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Sean winced slightly, but smiled.


message 7608: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Hey bubee, it's okay, shhh.." she soothed, picking up the small child, bouncing slightly, the cries fading to hiccups.


message 7609: by [deleted user] (new)

He chuckled quietly. "She's so beautiful."


message 7610: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Thank-you," Teeghan smiled. "She's getting so big."

((ahaha. sorry that's just a weird thing for her to say, cause Avery was a preemie and is still very teeny))


message 7611: by [deleted user] (new)

((Awww. XD))

Sean smiled sadly, remembering when Fiona was a newborn. "I remember when my little sister was that size..."


message 7612: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((:P))

Teeghan looked up at him, "How old is she now?"


message 7613: by [deleted user] (new)

"Ten," he said immediately. "And I've missed four of her birthdays. Cobra has her."


message 7614: by [deleted user] (new)

((Gtg soon.))


message 7615: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki))

"Cobra," she said the name with disdain and disgust. "Is she okay?"


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"I think so. Dad's there, too, so he can be with her. I was able to see her a couple days ago, before we came here." He smiled slightly as he remembered. "She was so happy to see me."


message 7617: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "That's cute, really cute." Teeghan sighed. "It's good that you got to see her."


message 7618: by [deleted user] (new)

He nodded. "Yeah. I'm really glad. She's such a sweetheart. I was glad to see that they hadn't hardened her. She's still a sweet, innocent little girl."

((Gtg now!))


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((bye!))

"Hopefully- hopefully she estays that way," Teeghan smiled again. "Do you want to hold Avery?"


message 7620: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'm back for a bit, but I'll be disappearing soon.))

Sean nodded. "I'd love to." He smiled.


message 7621: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki))

Gently she placed her daughter into Sean's arms.


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He cradled her carefully in his arms and looked down at her, smiling. "Hi, beautiful girl..." He murmured, carefully shifting her to one arm so he could softly stroke her cheek.


message 7623: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan's face broke into a proud smile as she watched the scene.

Avery cooed.


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Sean smiled and touched her hand, slowly rocking her back and forth.


message 7625: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Her tiny,baby soft fingers curled around his as her eyes slowly closed.

Teeghan put her finger to her lips and ducked out of the room to get something.


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Smiling tenderly, Sean continued to rock Avery, humming softly to her.


message 7627: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Soon, with his soothing tone, Avery fell asleep again.


message 7628: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean continued rocking her, and humming, and tears came to his eyes as he felt a pang of longing, longing to hold his little sister in his arms again. And that longing brought with it another, a fierce desire to have his Salem back with him. He let the tears trickle down his cheeks, but he smiled at Avery and began to sing softly to her.
"Someone's in the backyard banging on the door
Daddy's gone away, he's coming back no more
His baby's curled up on a stranger's floor
Momma's thinking family dinners weren't too much to ask for

Everybody here's got a story to tell
Everybody's been through their own hell
There's nothing too special about getting hurt
But getting over it, that takes the work

One way or the other we'll all need each other
Nothing's gonna turn out the way you thought it would
Friends and lovers, don't you duck and cover
Cause everything comes out the way it should

Blessed are the humble, blessed are the meek
Blessed are the hungry, blessed are the weak
Blessed are the ones on the other side
And blessed are we just for being alive

One day I stopped wanting anything at all
The heavens opened up like a waterfall
No use in worrying about when it ends
Just for now be thankful for what I get

One way or another a man's gonna suffer
Makes no difference the way you wanted it
But friends and lovers, don't you duck and cover
Cause everything comes out the way it should in the end

Seems like life is a palindrome
Cry when you die, cry when you're born
In between it's all about the ups and downs
Add them all together, they'll cancel each other out

One way or another, one way or another
You won't get what you wanted, but you'll get enough for sure
One way or another, the winter pays for the summer
Won't get what you wanted, but what you got'll be good

Someone's in the backyard banging on the door
Daddy's gone away, he's coming back no more
His baby's curled up on a stranger's floor
Momma's thinking happy endings weren't too much to ask for..."


message 7629: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((that is a beautiful song))

Teeghan stood in the doorway now, hand over her mouth and tears in her eyes, not yet fallen. The scene was adorable and heartwrenching at the same time: Sean, holding her daughter with such ease and a posture that spoke of a deep sense of caring.


message 7630: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yeah. One of my favorites to sing whenever I'm sad.))

Sean looked down at Avery and smiled as he finished the song. "You'll have a happy ending with your mama, I'm sure," He whispered.


message 7631: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((gah, what's it called?))

Her little fingers tightened around his, the pressure barely more than a feather.

Teeghan stepped in.


message 7632: by [deleted user] (new)

((Duck and Cover))

Sean looked up. "She's asleep," He murmured. "Do you want to take her? I'm afraid she'll wake and want her mama."


message 7633: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((thanks, I shall check it up!))

"If I take her, she'll wake up," Teeghan smiled softly.


message 7634: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay. It's by Glen Phillips, of course. All my favorites are. XD))

He smiled. "I guess I'm stuck with her for a while, then. Not that I mind, of course. She's such a doll."


message 7635: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo, I figured))

"A doll," she echoed his words, a hint of a smile making its way into the words. "Indeed."


message 7636: by [deleted user] (new)

He chuckled. "She already has me falling in love with her. I just might steal her away," he teased.


message 7637: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Hey, nuh uh." she grinned. "She's mine." And Limerick's..


message 7638: by [deleted user] (new)

He laughed quietly. "I'm glad we're sticking together then. You've got yourself a babysitter, whenever you need one."


message 7639: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Thanks Sean, that's so good to hear...you don't even know!" Tee chuckled.


message 7640: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sorry I disappeared. Are you feeling better today?))

Sean smiled. "You're welcome. I don't think anyone could not love her."


message 7641: by Ky (last edited Mar 12, 2010 09:33AM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I am! I jsut had pizza for lunch. And don't worry about the disappearing thing: you told me first))

She shrugged. "You never know," and with her words her eyes darkened.


message 7642: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yay! *claps**hugs*))

He nodded and looked down at Avery. "Yes, I suppose you're right. But I think she'll be a strong girl; no-one can hurt her. Besides, she has her mama to take care of her." He smiled at Teeghan. "And all her friends."


message 7643: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*grins*))

At his words Teeghan relaxed again. "Darn straight! She'll be the toughest little peanut ever. And with all of us," she smiled contentedly. "Yeah."


message 7644: by [deleted user] (new)

((I wanna put a dog in here! Can I, can I? Can Sean adopt a dog?))

"Absolutely," he agreed, smiling.


message 7645: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((sure.... *laughs*))

She chuckled, sitting on the side table again.


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Sean looked out the window and saw an adorable shaggy little dog. He cocked his head. "Look at that dog," He said. "All alone without an owner... poor thing."


message 7647: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It's cute," Teeghan agreed. "A little random, but cute."


message 7648: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 12, 2010 10:36AM) (new)

He laughed quietly and looked down at Avery. "Um... do you want to take her so I can see if I can call it in? Or do you want to go get it?"


message 7649: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I'll take Aves, not a strange dog, thanks." She grinned, holding out her arms.


message 7650: by [deleted user] (new)

((This is the dog: http://belliesnook.blogspot.com/2010/...))

He smiled and carefully pulled his finger out of Avery's grasp and handed her to Teeghan. "I'll go see if I can get him."

((Gtg for a minute, brb. Gotta check the laundry.))


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