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message 6251: by [deleted user] (new)

((Just in case you didn't see it, I'm posting this again.))

Lizzie flinched slightly. "Well... I can take powers away, if I concentrate hard enough." She braced herself for his reaction, guessing it wouldn't be good.


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Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "Don't compare me to her."

Sean flinched. But you can compare everything I say and do to Ellis?


message 6253: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((haha Emmy can hear that as well. ;D))

Emmy pulled back, looking up at Patrik
"That took way to long to happen." She smiled
"Yes, Way to long." He laughed


message 6254: by Ky (last edited Mar 01, 2010 01:10PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "Don't compare me to her."

Sean flinched. But you can compare everything I say and do to Ellis?"


I don't openly say it to you! I don't say, oh you're like Ellis. Ellis did that. No. I don't. You assume that it's the reason behind everything. and you know what? Maybe it's not! She stood up quickly, like a lightning flash. "On second thought. Don't come closer."


message 6255: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife laughed "I'd love to see you try that on one of us. You would die."


message 6256: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: "Liv grinned "Anytime"

Patrik and Emmy were in her room kissing happily. It was as close to heaven as they were going to get."

Blaze grinned sheepishly a..."


Liv smiled and kisssed him quickly.


message 6257: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: "Liv grinned "Anytime"

Patrik and Emmy were in her room kissing happily. It was as close to heaven as they were goi..."


He was a little surprised; they hadn't kissed since the cliff jumping.


message 6258: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I am reading City of Bones now! I'm in the first chapter and already I love it!))


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Tears appeared in his eyes. "I didn't speak it! I'm sorry, but you can hear what I'm thinking. It doesn't help that I was already just thinking to you. Do you expect me to put up a block just so you can't hear me think that you just said the exact same words she once said to me? It's always 'Don't do this' and 'don't do that' without any reasons!" He took a few steps away from her. "I don't mean to hurt you, but it keeps happening. Maybe... maybe I should leave. Me being with you doesn't help anything, and it's only made everything harder for both of us."


message 6260: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments She laughed at the look on his face.


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Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: "Rife laughed "I'd love to see you try that on one of us. You would die.""

Lizzie winced. "Sean's already warned me not to," she muttered, "Not that I would anyway."


message 6262: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I'm sorry," she said brusquely. "But I won't apologize for this. You started it." Really she wanted to comfort him, btu she was scared to death of life right then, and she knew if she shed her anger, her hardness, she'd fall. And maybe, just maybe, she wouldn't get back up.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: "She laughed at the look on his face."

Blaze grinned. "It's been a while,eh?"


message 6264: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife looked at her "Just in case you were thinking of it."

"Yes. A while." Liv smiled


message 6265: by [deleted user] (new)

((Wow, this is making me cry.))

Tears began to flow freely down his face. "I..." He didn't finish, only turned and ran. He went into the trees and collapsed on the bed of pine needles, crying hard.


message 6266: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: "Rife looked at her "Just in case you were thinking of it."

"Yes. A while." Liv smiled"


Blaze nodded and kissed her again.


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Lizzie sighed. "I wasn't!" She looked into his eyes and said, "Can't you trust me?"


message 6268: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "((Wow, this is making me cry.))

Tears began to flow freely down his face. "I..." He didn't finish, only turned and ran. He went into the trees and collapsed on the bed of pine needles, crying hard."


Once he was gone she couldn't breathe. She didn't understand this feeling, it wasn't how she'd felt with Ellis. So different yet oddly the same. Only she'd never had the chance to make up her own mind on this subject before. And now that she had: she wasn't sure she liked it much. She ran into the house, sitting just inside the door, head on her knees with her arms protectively around her head.


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((I have to go. Bye!))

Sean closed his eyes and leaned against a tree, fighting to stop crying.


message 6270: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((bye!))


message 6271: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Bye Bellie!))
((Btw that was sad. Poor salem and sean...))


message 6272: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv smiled and kissed him back.

"No not really." Rife chuckled darkly crossing his arms and looking at her sideways.


message 6273: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*sad smile* thanks))

Blaze pulled her closer.


Shadow tensed up, pressing her back into the wall. It hurt. But pain is releif. Pain is good...shhh...


message 6274: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ANytime.))

Liv smiled at him, loving the closeness.

Emmy put a finger to Patrik's lips.
"I'll be right back." She got up and left. She saw Salem by the door.
"Hey, what happened?"


message 6275: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo))

Blaze smiled too, intoxicated by her smell, her eyes, her.

Shadow clenched closer into herself. "Nothing."


message 6276: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments She rested her head on his chest. "I love you." She whispered

"You can't lie to me. If you don't want to talk about it fine. But don't lie to me." Emmy said


message 6277: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I love you too. But instead he smiled and made a small joke, like the person he was. "Really?"

"I'm sorry Emmy." she looked up at her, wincing at the light after moments in darkness.


message 6278: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Nah." She said shaking her head laughing quietly.

"It's ok, I just want to help." Emmy said sitting down.


message 6279: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Oh darn, you got me psyched." he beamed.


"It's hard."


message 6280: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I know." She shrugged "Gotta let me have my fun."

"I know." Emmy said "Trust me, I know."


message 6281: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I'm reading City of Bones...omj it's great already!))

"True." he said, leaning closer. "Is this fun?"

"I know you do. I know..I just don't want to."


message 6282: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((YAY!! YOu meet Jace yet?! MY FAAAVE!!!))

"Very." Liv said closing the distance between them.

"Ok." Emmy said sitting with her.


message 6283: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((just at the Pandemonium clulb..Simon is hilarious))

Blaze cheered inside and kissed from her forehead until he got to her lips again.

"Thanks for this. You know..it helps more than it should; such a simple thing.." Salem shook her head, awed at the thought of it.


message 6284: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Omg Love him Just so you know lately I've been cross dressing also I've been sleeping with your mom Thought you should know.))

Liv smiled and kissed him back.

"You're welcome. Don't worry about it." Emmy said shrugging. She had Patrik who did this for her and she did it for Patrik she might as well do it for Salem.


message 6285: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I know eh? ahaha))


Blaze was so out of his element and he loved it, enjoying the passion.

"It's atually kind of refreshing..to know..to know someone cares.." she dipped her head,her words nothing but a sore whisper.


message 6286: by [deleted user] (new)

((Not here. Just checking in really quick.))

Lizzie sighed and nodded. "I guess I can't blame you," she whispered, tears in her eyes. She brushed them away impatiently. Ugh... I need to stop crying!

Sean's tears finally stopped and he leaned his head back, looking up at the sky through the canopy. He groaned. I don't think anything will seem as beautiful as it should be, now that I've met her...


message 6287: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Lol. Haha))

Rife looked at her "No, you can't trust us either. It's evident that Emmy wants to kill you, so just tread carefully."

Liv laughed kissing him again.

"You have, what, six people that care about you." Emmy said


message 6288: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((OMJ clary's mom just got..something'd))

Blaze found himself pressing her toi himself.

"it's not the same..that's not what I'm talking about." she said just as softly.


message 6289: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((brb,dinner))


message 6290: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok. And Ikr?! It's an INTENSE scene. ))

Liv smiled enjoying herself.

Emmy nodded "You pushed Sean away didn't you?" she barely whispered.


message 6291: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yah..!))

Blaze gazed at her lovingly.

Shadow couldn't talk, she just nodded.


message 6292: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments She kissed him gently.

"He scares you..." She mused


message 6293: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze's orange eyes melted like the sunset over a mountain and he kissed back.

"Not it's not-" she sat back,defeated."Yah...he does."


message 6294: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv smiled again, she loved the feel of his lips against hers.

Emmy put her head in her hands
"Don't be afriad to let him in."


message 6295: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He was hesitant to do anything more than kiss, though his body thirsted for it. His mind was only filled with thoughts of Liv.

"I can't..I can't help it Emmy."


message 6296: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv didn't want to do anything more than kiss as of right now. She was happy like this.

"I know. I'm just like you. It's hard, you don't want to get hurt. I know" Emmy said softly


message 6297: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He pulled back a little, grinning with his forehead on hers.


We are a lot alike, she thought to herself, almost smiling. Like sisters. Salem nodded. "Yah."


message 6298: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments She sighed closing her eyes.

"Just be careful then. But not so careful you don't ever let anyone in." Emmy mused


message 6299: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I love you." he finally admitted. "For real."

"I don't know how to Em, it's like I have two settings."


message 6300: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I love you too." Liv said with a smile.

"Yeah, calm and collected or about to break down." Emmy nodded.


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